2 souls and A beautiful heart-Part 3

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Posted: 20 years ago
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❤️Hey guys,

I'm starting a new fanfic being inspired by so many people in this forum and other forums too.And although I don't have that much time including the fact that I'm a very bad writer, I'm still going to write it.So I hope you guys like it.😛

Unlike other fanfice,this fanfic will be based on the real lives of Eijaz Khan and Anita(although I'll be making some stuff up).About how they are two actors working in a telesoap who are loved be many people,how they work together,are friends and finally fall in love.😛

Characters will keep adding as I go along,but the 2 characters who will always be in the story are-

Eijaz Khan

Anita

And how they turn from this

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Part 1

As the alarm bell rang,Eijaz's hand came up and banged on it to shut it off.He got up drowsily,bare-chested in his spongebob boxers and went into the bathroom to shower and get ready.Dressed in a black hugging shirt,had breakfast,got his keys and headed towards his car to get to the sets.He racked his brain for an excuse to give Jassi(the director)for being late.

Well,now he was ready to charge up and break a record of cutting all the traffic lights.As he sat in the car and started it his phone rang.He sighed and picked it up-

E-Hello

Anita-Where are you?

E-I'm coming....just near the sets....beleive me,today it was all those girls fault.They were after me...I actually woke up early

A-Hmmm......I actually didn't call for that...

E-Then???(Suspiciously)

A-Gaadi kharab ho gayi(in a very slow voice)....nobody's free.......pick me up na????

E-Anita,it takes me one hour to get to your house...and by the way were both late today.....but you know what....I'll come.....if jassi sees us together,he'll not be that mad,so...

A-Thank you so much......ok come fast.......I'll keep the phone now.

E-Wait,wait......no,talk to me......music system is down,I'll be bored.

A-(In an angry voice)So,I'm the substitute for your music system haan?

E-Did you watch yesterday's episode(trying to change the subject)

A-Yaa.......You know what I was going to tell you about this.....your hair in yesterday's episode were looking so......I don't know,the front ones were going up....I'm going to gell your hair today,so that it looks better

E-Nooo.........they weren't.....infact,I thought I luked SEXY

A-No Eijaz,they were messed up....

E-Ofcourse,you'll always find something wrong in me na??......infact,your hair were sticking out

A-Were not,shut up KAWVA..

E-I stopped wearing black ok......

A-How much time?

E-I'm reaching......5 min

A-Fine,I'm outside.....(looking at her mother in the window)haan ma,I'm getting a ride.....Kya???...Are you serious

E-What happened???

A-Jassi's on my homeline phone.....what should I tell him?

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I hope you guys liked it😊.I know there was no romance but right now Eijaz and Anita are only friends......but it will soon change.Wait for my next part......and please do comment😊

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Groovychick thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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oh wow sweety!!
that's really well written!! 👏
m w8in 4 ur nxt part..pleashh..keep writing 😛 😉

lub ju loads

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Posted: 20 years ago
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OMGGGG this is awesome!!!👏 👏
I loved it...it's such a fresh idea 😃
plz plz plzzz write moreeee 😳 😆
it's reli nice...
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thank you so much tina and sheeni di.......it really means a lot....I was hesitating a bit about doing this...but I'm so glad u guys liked it 😛 .....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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yea sheen, very unique 😛 😉
m msure ppl will luv this, it's a lil l8 here so maybe ppl will reply 2moro 😊
but plzzzz continue 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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omg rida!!! 😃
its soo awesome..
haila i died the min i read boxers 😳 😆 😆
haha no seriously sooo cute..am going to LOVE reading this! plz write more of and fast 😳 😆
andd aaw i noticed how u put in jassi the directors name too.. real cute and makes it more realistic 😳 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwww rida ...it's gr8 jaan...i luv it...waiting for more 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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it's great!!!! 👏 plzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
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awesummm qazlpm...plz continue...it's great!!! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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cool fanfic hun keep it up i wana know the next part so please continue soon

luv noori

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