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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey everyone!

I thought why not externalize Maan's inner struggle a little bit ;)
so..I already wrote a short dialogue about the 2 July episode.

This is for yesterday's

Geet- aur mujhe ghoorna band kijiye...

Maan(brain)- Hain?
Maan(heart)- Silly, remember you were angry with her moment ago...!?
Maan(brain)- oh yeah..then I can continue,right?
Maan(heart)- shaunk se! That has become your full-time occupation.

Geet- ghoorna band kijiye

Maan(brain and heart)- bete,Maan..tu toh gaya. Stop now!

Geet goes to the door to try and open it

Maan(brain)- Go to her and help her out
Maan(heart)- oh,yeah..

and he touches her hand accidentally

Maan(heart)- silly..helping her doesn't mean you touch her. I said help! Now stop caressing her fingers..

Geet removes her hand

Maan(brain)- yes! i can think now. C'mon get some of your attitude cover back dude!

When Dev comes and says mujhe sab samajh aa gaya hai

Maan to Geet- yeh toh main bhi nahi samajh paa raha hoon

Maan(heart)- Liar liar!! like you haven't been fantasizing every night while trying to sleep,eat,or work-out.
Remember those kickboxing moves when you go into Geet-land??
Maan(brain)- Good, I have controlled my feelings..Dev,it's not like that..

Head-bumping scene

Maan(thinks)- OW!
Maan(brain)- strong head! I approve
Maan(heart)- Earth to Maan!come back from her eyes...

snapping out of it..

waistcoat
Maan(heart)-After that sizzling eye lock, I'm feeling hot,and she's still feeling cold.
MAan(brain)- Be chivalrous..offer her your everything
Maan(heart)- nope, just the waistcoat. I like that shirt..she never returns my stuff back anyways

Geet doesn't take the waistcoat

Maan(heart and brain)- Oh Lord, please help me understand her!!Now she won't even take my waistcoat
Immediately Maan(heart)- Shirt chalegi??!!
Brain-SHUT UP!

Maan(heart)- grab her hand!
Maan(brain)-good idea! take her to the blueprints..it's a nice way :D

Geet gets scared,Maan gets angry
Geet- hath chodiye sir
Maan- Nahi chhodunga...
Maan(brain)-and there you go again..look,i know you will never leave her. You're gone..
From the next episode, I am leaving you. But abhi ke liye, please,let me salvage the situation..
MAan- toh chhaku nikalogi?



Geet falls into Maan's lap

Maan(brain and heart)- speechless.....

then both try to snap him out of it all

Maan(brain)- top looking at her so intensely..your love,your passion,your everything is in your eyes for her to see.

Geet gets up to go..dupatta is stuck

Maan(heart)- OH yes!!
Maan(brain)- Show her Maan..for once,will her to come to you!!
Maan(heart to eyes)- Geet..come to me..please,just this once..come to me
Geet comes, and then slowly walks away

Maan(brain)- Get up and do it!
Maan(heart) I don't want to..I want it to be fixed always there,like her picture inside
Maan(brain)- dont't be so melodramatic please..spare me.

In that struggle, Dupatta is set free

Maan(heart)- chhod diya :((


sorry if it got long and boring...

comments welcome :)
love

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sweet lord girl, that was awesome 👏 😳 😉
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HAHAHAHA EXCELLENTO GIRL!!

THIS IS SIMPLY AWSOME!!! 🤣

PLZ PLZ DO IT IN TODAY'S EPI TOOOO PLZZZZZZZZZZZ
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Thanks a lot guys!!
sure will,(if i stay alive)!!!
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Wow... That was superbly made....👏 👏 👏 ... Loved it..... I was laughing so hard...... Please do make more if you get time....... 😊
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Originally posted by: celestae143

<font color="#ff6600" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Wow... That was superbly made....👏👏👏 ... Loved it..... I was laughing so hard...... Please do make more if you get time....... 😊</font>



absolutely!!hopefully,we'll have struggles in this episode :D
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LMAO at these........Amazing Geet.a👏👏👏

Maan(heart)- nope, just the waistcoat. I like that shirt..she never returns my stuff back anyways

Immediately Maan(heart)- Shirt chalegi??!!
Brain-SHUT UP!

Maan(brain and heart)- speechless.....

Maan(brain)- dont't be so melodramatic please..spare me.


still 🤣🤣🤣
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Originally posted by: dee30

LMAO at these........Amazing Geet.a👏👏👏

Maan(heart)- nope, just the waistcoat. I like that shirt..she never
returns my stuff back anyways

Immediately Maan(heart)- Shirt chalegi??!!
Brain-SHUT UP!

Maan(brain and heart)- speechless.....

Maan(brain)- dont't be so melodramatic please..spare me.


still 🤣🤣🤣



Aww..thanks!! 😳 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hahahaha totally loved it! 🤣 🤣 🤣 👏👏👏
Especially these parts
'she never returns my stuff back anyways'
'Shirt chalegi??!!'
and maan's brain: 'don't be so melodramtic please..spare me'

too good! 👏🤣

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omggg!! they def should have maan's heart and brain struggle in the show =D!!! that was too good!

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