I thought why not externalize Maan's inner struggle a little bit ;)
so..I already wrote a short dialogue about the 2 July episode.
This is for yesterday's
Geet- aur mujhe ghoorna band kijiye...
Maan(brain)- Hain?
Maan(heart)- Silly, remember you were angry with her moment ago...!?
Maan(brain)- oh yeah..then I can continue,right?
Maan(heart)- shaunk se! That has become your full-time occupation.
Geet- ghoorna band kijiye
Maan(brain and heart)- bete,Maan..tu toh gaya. Stop now!
Geet goes to the door to try and open it
Maan(brain)- Go to her and help her out
Maan(heart)- oh,yeah..
and he touches her hand accidentally
Maan(heart)- silly..helping her doesn't mean you touch her. I said help! Now stop caressing her fingers..
Geet removes her hand
Maan(brain)- yes! i can think now. C'mon get some of your attitude cover back dude!
When Dev comes and says mujhe sab samajh aa gaya hai
Maan to Geet- yeh toh main bhi nahi samajh paa raha hoon
Maan(heart)- Liar liar!! like you haven't been fantasizing every night while trying to sleep,eat,or work-out.
Remember those kickboxing moves when you go into Geet-land??
Maan(brain)- Good, I have controlled my feelings..Dev,it's not like that..
Head-bumping scene
Maan(thinks)- OW!
Maan(brain)- strong head! I approve
Maan(heart)- Earth to Maan!come back from her eyes...
snapping out of it..
waistcoat
Maan(heart)-After that sizzling eye lock, I'm feeling hot,and she's still feeling cold.
MAan(brain)- Be chivalrous..offer her your everything
Maan(heart)- nope, just the waistcoat. I like that shirt..she never returns my stuff back anyways
Geet doesn't take the waistcoat
Maan(heart and brain)- Oh Lord, please help me understand her!!Now she won't even take my waistcoat
Immediately Maan(heart)- Shirt chalegi??!!
Brain-SHUT UP!
Maan(heart)- grab her hand!
Maan(brain)-good idea! take her to the blueprints..it's a nice way :D
Geet gets scared,Maan gets angry
Geet- hath chodiye sir
Maan- Nahi chhodunga...
Maan(brain)-and there you go again..look,i know you will never leave her. You're gone..
From the next episode, I am leaving you. But abhi ke liye, please,let me salvage the situation..
MAan- toh chhaku nikalogi?
Geet falls into Maan's lap
Maan(brain and heart)- speechless.....
then both try to snap him out of it all
Maan(brain)- top looking at her so intensely..your love,your passion,your everything is in your eyes for her to see.
Geet gets up to go..dupatta is stuck
Maan(heart)- OH yes!!
Maan(brain)- Show her Maan..for once,will her to come to you!!
Maan(heart to eyes)- Geet..come to me..please,just this once..come to me
Geet comes, and then slowly walks away
Maan(brain)- Get up and do it!
Maan(heart) I don't want to..I want it to be fixed always there,like her picture inside
Maan(brain)- dont't be so melodramatic please..spare me.
In that struggle, Dupatta is set free
Maan(heart)- chhod diya :((
sorry if it got long and boring...
comments welcome :)
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