Anjane Ajnabi:AR/MM/AT: Pt 4, Pg 9, Upd(8/10/10)

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Hi Friends

I have been reading a few fanfics over the years since DMG started and I loved to read all of them... After all these years I have finally decided to take the plunge into writing. It might be a beginners streak but I hope you would definitely enjoy reading it😃 varna if you guys don't like it toh do criticize my work so that I can try and improve on my writing skills.😳

Oky Lets Begin In this post there will the character introduction of the main protagonists and as the story develops more characters will be added in on this post.



Dr Armaan Mallik : He is the jaan of everyone. He is loved by one and all his family, friends, girlfreinds, ex-girlfriends.... 😆 basically everyone who comes in touch with him. Except for one girl who is not at all flattered by his antics. He is in the Final year last Semester waiting for his results and about o join internship. He is into medicine because like everyone's parents his parents, Dr. Suhani Mallik ( a gynecologist) and Ranbir Mallik (a business tycoon) want him to serve the community by becoming a Doctor.

Dr Maan Khurana : He is the son of the Industrialist Dev Singh Khurana who is the owner of Aircel Mobile company and wants his son to join his business but Unfortunately for Maan he never could focus on Business as his interest laid in Biology and Anatomy😎 He is as well in the Final Year Last Semester and waiting for his results before joining internship and he is the best bud of Dr. Armaan. He is a typical Punjab ka Munda a little natkhat but very focused on his goals of becoming a Doctor.


Dr Riddhima Gupta: She is the life of every party and loves to party and spend time with her friends. However when asked about Love she does not believe in love because she has a past which reminds her that Love is not real. Even then she fulfills her duty diligently and works towards her goal of becoming a doctor She is working towards her final year and has one more year before finishing her medical degree. Her Dad Dr. Shashank Gupta is the head of Sanjeevani Hospital and is eagerly waiting for the day his daughter will join Sanjeevani as an intern. She is a single parent child and has been single handedly been raised by Dr. Shashank who loves her dearly.

Dr Muskaan Chadda: She is a total Punjabi kudi, talks what she wants, goes where she wants, and starts arguing at the drop of a hat with anyone on any topic. People say that she should have been in politics to be able to speak like that😆. But inside shes a shy Punjabi kudi who wants her Mr. Right who can protect her from everyone and stand for her. She became a doctor for her parents as it was their dying wish that their daughter become a Doctor. She is in the final year studying at Seth GS Medical College. She is roommate with Dr. Riddhima and considers her as a sister.

Dr Anurag Ganguly: As his name suggests he his a pure Bengali born and brought up in the streets of Kolkata and this is his first time staying alone in Mumbai . He was married in childhood due to some unavoidable circumstances to his best friend but they drifted apart once he left high school and moved on to newer and better things'. But as fate would have had it'..Things didn't turn out so well and he moved to Mumbai where he was selected to intern at Sanjeevani Hospital. Currently he is staying at a friend's house and would be moving out soon to find an apartment.

Dr Tani Basu: She is also a Bengali and brought up in the city of Kolkata amongst the rich Bengali culture. She had a blessed childhood but due to certain circumstances she was forced to move away from that city. She came to Mumbai as a medical student and has successfully been accepted into Sanjeevani hospital as an intern. She lives with her roommate in a rented apartment.

[names of the two doctors disclosed ]

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~AR: Armaan Riddhima~

~MM: Maan Muskaan~

~AT: Anurag Tani~

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more characters will be included with their character sketch as the story progresses.....

Hope you guys Enjoy!!!



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Edited by mishtyvishu - 14 years ago
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Scene I :

Armaan and Maan are driving to the Seth GS Medical College in Armaan's car. Armaan is on the phone with Meenu [his 10th GIRL friend]😆 And Maan is praying to God.

Armaan: Meenu my Jaanu 😆 tum hi toh ho meri jaan. Mere Dil main aakhon main samayi tum hi toh ho meri Jaanu...

Maan: (In his mind)Lag gaya yeh phir se....(There he goes again) (to Armaan) Abe time pe Pahuch na hai hame results ke Liye....

Armaan as usal continues talking to Meenu....
Maan interrupts him by showing his watch...
Maan: Time pe.....(On time)
Armaan: (Ek min hai baby)....... (to Maan) Yaar kya kar raha hai meri Ek week ki setting lko bigadne pe kyun tula hai...(What are u doing friend don't ruin my setting of one week) I am gonna take u to the college on time... ab disturb na kar...
N off he continues talking and flirting with Meenu.
Maan:(to himself) Rabba enu maaf kar de... Kudiyo de peeche pagala gaya hai munda saada...(hehehhe)[ O God forgive him... this boy is going crazy after girls]

Finally they reach the College.
Armaan: Tu chal main hune park kar ke aaya...(you go I will park and come)
Maan gets down from the car and goes towards the bulletin board.

Armaan says bye to Meenu on the phone with lots of hugs and kisses on the phone only..😆 and then parks his car. He sees Riddhima parking his scooter two cars away in the parking lot.

Armaan: Hi Riddhima kya hua badi tense lag rahi ho .... koi baat nahin mera Aashirwaad hai tumhare saath tum exam top nahin toh pass jarur kar jaogi (Riddhima what happened you are very tensed.. dont worry you have my blessings.. if not top you will atleast pass ur exam)😆

Riddhima: (to herself) Aaa gaya college ka gyaan guru. (to Armaan) Thankyou so much Armaan tum nahin hote toh mera kya hota. Waise aaj tumhara result hai na... jao bacha mera aashirwaad hai tumhe.. ki Doctor toh tum bunu hi jaoge bus apni yeh free ki advice aur blessing dena bandh kar dena. ( (If it was not for you what would happen to me. By the way its your result today .... u have my blessings that you will become a Doc but do stop giving these free advices and blessings)

Armaan: Arre...... If I stop giving them out toh who will take care of you ....😉

Riddhima: Thankyou but I can take care of myself.

Armaan: Oky but I still love you.😉
N he leaves from there after giving her a flying kiss

Riddhima is like...: Hawwwwww.. yeh ladka bhi naa.... ufff.... wonder how his gf bears him😆

Armaan is going towards the bulletin board N he sees Muskaan waiting for Someone impatiently....

Armaan: Hey Muskaan Kya hua exam ka tension hai kya

Muskaan: Hi Armaan!! Nahin yaar ,. This Riddhima....we were gonna go to the examination hall together so that whle walking we could do a little bit of revision😆 but look shes still not here....

Armaan : Dont worry Muskaan..... I saw her in the parking lot she musst be coming....ahhh there she comes....

Ridddhima: You here as well... lagta hai you are not so keen to get your results..... fail wail toh nahin ho rahe na... cuz tumhe meri zindagi main ek aur saal main bardaath nahin kar sakti(Ar e you expecting to fail or something cuz I cannot take you in my life one more year..

Armaan: But I want only you in my entire life... ( he winks at Muskaan ... and leaves)

Muskaan laughs...
Muskaan: you guys never tire out of each other.... 😆 now can we go...
Riddhima: Yeah lets go we are already late because of that Bandar

Armaan finally reaches the Bulletin board. And looks for Maan... He sees Maan standing in a corner and sad. He thinks that maybe Maan didnt do that well but let me go and cheer him up....

Armaan: Oye Maan you are here and I was looking for you everywhere... Its Ok sometimes you don't get good scores but thats life we always have to move ahead....

Maan: Yaar thats not the case...I got good grades and have been selected for an internship in Sanjeevani..

Armaan: Then y are you sad

Maan: Cuz you are gonna come with me in Sanjeevani as you have also been selected as an intern in Sanjeevani..

Armaan is like whatt????
Then he goes to check the board and sees his name... N then he comes back and says Mera Praaa (my brother) you love me so much that seeing my name in Sanjeevani you cried)

Maan(to himself): No I am crying cuz now i will have to help u with notes and everything even in Sanjeevani..... raaba bachaye mujhe...😆

::::::Scene I ends::::::


Precap for Scene II:
Its the first day for Armaan and Maan in Sanjeevani and they are early two hours to know more about the hospital. Riddhima is talking to her Dad about her exams on the phone. Riddhima and Muskaan try to do group study

I hope you guys had a good time reading it. Please do comment/ criticize.
Mishtyvishu

Edited by mishtyvishu - 15 years ago
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FRIENDS do comment/ criticize :)
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I like it add me to ur pm
Is it muskaan or geet i m confused ??
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awwwwwwwwwwww
i really loved ur story
plz do add me to the pm list
n do update soon

pooja
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@armaanakakaran thankyou for that its actually Muskaan but with traits of Geet... but majorly Muskaan :)

@kweetrockstar thankyou I will add you both in the PM list
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Very nice start...like the concept and the overlap with DMG.....looking forward to the next part...please PM when you update.


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hey.. i just read ur ff... :) i must say u all whoever writes something... r great creatives.... :)
ur ff is really nice and completely different from other except AR's romance and their love which is very essential of course... :)
but ur ff is really interesting, i liked it...
plzzz continue it and update the next part.. :)
btw i cudn't find anything to criticize.. haha it was nice..
add me to the PM list.. :)
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@ AKANargis thankyou.. I tried to keep the AR essence but still bring in a variation by adding two new characters. New characters will come in too as the story unfolds..

@cutiepreet thankyou U are really sweet that u didnt find anythign to criticize... Yes I am tryign to maintain the AR essence but Riddhimas character is slightly different you will observe :)

I am trying this for the first time... but The encouragemnt that I am getting from all you readers is giving me the courage to move on and write more... N thankyou for that

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