MayUr FF *Phir Milenge* (Last) Part 19 @ Pg 147 - Page 80

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Mayank and Nupur took the tickets from the travel agent's office and after that they were standing at the gate........Nupur saw the ice cream vendor and spoke in a bit louder voice...... "ICE CREAM"

Mayank looked at her and smiled "Tumhein ice cream itni acchi lagti hai......mujhe nahin pata tha"

"Aise keh rahe ho jaise mere baare mein baaki sab kuch jaante ho" Nupur said and then she thought what she said just now.......

"Kya?.......mera matlab kuch raaz hain tumhaare?" Mayank asked Nupur teasing her......

Nupur downed her lashes "Mera matlab wo nahin tha.......hum ek doosre ko abhi kitna jaante hi kitna hain"

Mayank looked down to look into Nupur's eyes........but they were refusing to look up.......

Mayank then stood strsight "Arre wo Ice Cream waala chala jaayega.......chalein?"

Nupur looked up and smiled "Haan"

Then they reached to the ice cream vendor.......

"Chocobar" both said in same tone at the same time.....

Then they looked at each other and again said at the same time "Chocobar?"

And then they laughed at the coincidence.......

"Aapki ice cream" icecream vendor said......

Nupur took the icecream like a kid and opened it fastly and started eating it........Mayank was looking at her........

"Aree jaldi khaao......pighal jaayegi" Nupur said and she again started eating it......but Mayank was still looking at her and his ice cream was melting down his hands to his shirt.........

Nupur looked up and saw that Mayank's ice cream is melting down his hands......

"Ice cream tumhein khaani hai ya shirt ko" Nupur said to Mayank....

Mayank came back to his senses and looked down at his shirt......

Nupur continued "Dekho poori shirt gandi ho gayyi....maine kaha tha na ice cream kha lo warna pighal jaayegi....bilkul bacche ho Mayank" and Nupur started wiping his shirt with her hankee.....

Nupur was very close to him.....he could feel her breath over his chest..... Maynak's hand slowly wrapped around Nupur's waist and he pulled her more closer to him.......

Nupur became still as Mayank's hand moved round her waist.....she looked up into his eyes and hankee dropped from her hand.......she was enjoying the warm grip of Mayank.....both were lost into each others eyes......but they were standing in the middle of the road.......a car was coming from the other side.....his driver stopped the car........and sneaked out his head from the window......

"Oye Laila Majnu......side mein karo jo karna hai" driver said.....

Mayank and Nupur were dazed by the sound of the driver.....they abruptly moved to side...Nupur was blushing hard she was looking down at the ground.....

"Isski toh main" Mayank said in anger and stepped to follow the car

Nupur held him by his shoulder "Koi baat nahin Mayank.....galti hamaari thi"

"Hamaari kya galti thi" Mayank said turning to Nupur

"Accha humaari galti nahin thi ??" Nupur said by opening wide her eyes.....

Mayank looked into his eyes......and then after a long pause he said "Accha thi........ab ghar chalein"

Nupur smiled and said "Haan"

Next morning...

Mayank and Nupur left for Shimla......

In Shimla......Mayank and Nupur reached their hotel.......they took the keys from reception and reached their suite......

It was a honeymoon suite......beautifully decorated......white laced curtains hanging over the windows........room lighted beautifully giving white tint to the cream coloured walls.....white heart shaped cushions lying on the bed......fireplace on one side.....

Mayank placed the bags on one side......

"Nice Room" Mayank said

"Hmm" Nupur said and went to the door opening in balcony........she opened the door and cold breeze hit her hard on her face......they were cold but Nupur were enjoying them....She wrapped up her arms and started rubbing her arms to make herself warm......

Mayank also reached to the balcony and grasped Nupur from the back.......

Mayank rested his face on Nupur's shoulder and said "Uuuhh....kitni thand hai na" and grasped Nupur more tightly.......

"Kya kar rahe ho......chodo na Mayank" Nupur said while trying to leave from his grip.....

Mayank tightened his grip "Kyun chodun......itni sardi mein toh bilkul nahin chodunga"

"Mayank....." Nupur said

"Nupur...." Mayank said...

"Mayank.....abhi andar toh chalo" Nupur said

Then Mayank left Nupur and they came inside......

"Pehle fresh ho jaao.....phir baat karenge" Nupur said giving towel to Mayank from the bag.......

"Aye Aye Captain.......as you say" Mayank took the towel and moved towards the washroom pretending to marchpast.......

Nupur smiled and said to herself "Bilkul bacche ho"

After freshening up they left the hotel for some sight seeing..........

They reached up to the top of the snow covered hill.......nothing but only snow could be seen everywhere.......tourists were there sledging and skiing.....

Mayank bought two cups of coffee.........

"Ye lo........yahaan bohot thand hai" Mayank said

"Hmm.....garma garm coffee mil jaaye toh mazaa aa jaata hai" Nupur said.....and then they sat on the bench......enjoying the cold with warmth of each others presence"

Then after a while Mayank said.....

"Chalo sledging karne chalte hain"

Nupur was afraid of height and she didn't liked the idea of sledging.....she resented "Abhi nahin.....baad mein"

"Chalo na Nupur.......mazaa aayega" Mayank said and pulled Nupur holding her hand.....

Nupur was very afraid and that could be seen on her face.....

"Nahin Mayank.....mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai" Nupur said

"Main hoon na Nupur.....kuch nahin hoga...balki mazaa aayega" Mayank insisted....

Then Nupur after a lot of thinking agreed but still the fear could be seen on her face......

Nupur sat in front and Mayank at the back and then the instructer pushed them from the top........Speed of the sledge was increasing......everything was visible just as a line.......Nupur tightly closed her eyes in fear.......Her face was getting pink because of the cold and yellow because of the fear but Mayank was enjoying the ride......cold breeze was striking their face and amidst all this Nupur heard something in her ears "I LOVE YOU".......but still her eyes were closed she didn't wanted to open them or react to the situation.......

Then slowly sledge speeded down at the valley and they both stood up........they were removing the snow from their clothes.....Nupur was looking at Mayank.....she didn't knew that what she heard was true.....or was she hallucinating.....was it her illusion......she wanted to get an answer.....

As the cold breeze touched her ears....she felt something "Kuch kahaa.....Mayank" Nupur said to Mayank who was picking up the sledge from the ground.....

Mayank looked up "Kya?"

"Nahin kuch nahin" Nupur said then after a pause she said "Hum phir se sledging karein"

"Par tum toh darr rahi thi na" Mayank said......

"Nahin par mujhe ek baar aur jaana hai" Nupur said....

Actually Nupur wanted to clear her doubts in her minds.....rather she wanted that what she heard must be true.....she herself started liking Mayank......

They again reached to the top......again the same fear in Nupur's heart but this time she was determined.....they again sat on the sledge.....cold breeze striking their face and again Nupur heard the same three words in her ears "I LOVE YOU".......they came down and Nupur again looked at Mayank.....maybe it could be her illusion.......Mayank was still normal.....he didn't behaved in a different manner......

Nupur and Mayank moved out from there......they took a walk in the garden but Nupur was quiet.....this question was revolving in her mind and she wasn't able to ask it directly to Mayank....

Mayank had to make a call "Ek minute Nupur.....abhi phone karke aata hoon"

Nupur smiled....but she was thinking about that incident......

Mayank returned after a while and then after taking a walk they returned back to their hotel........they went to the dining area for the dinner.......

Waiter bought the menu cards and gave it to both of them........Mayank took it and started reading but Nupur on the other hand was a bit disturbed......she opened the menu card and their was a page pinned up over it.....there was written "I LOVE YOU"

Mayank was looking at Nupur's reaction from the top of the card......Nupur looked up at Mayank but he was busy in reading she again looked at the paper but it was empty nothing could be seen.....she turned the pages but nothing could be seen......now she became a bit afraid....

They placed the order and then after having the dinner they reached their suite.......Nupur entered into the room first and then Mayank followed her......she switched on the lights.....and the picture of the room was completely changed......she smiled and at the same time tears rolled down her cheeks.......

Room was fully decorated with white and pink roses........ rice-bulb lights were shining and a big size teddy bear was placed over the bed holding a heart inscribing "I LOVE YOU"

Nupur turned around and looked at Mayank.......she kept looking at him as if she wanted to freeze that moment.....then after a long intermit she hugged Mayank.......

Mayank smiled and responded to the hug......

"Seedhe se nahin keh sakte the......subah se mujhe pareshaan kar rakha hai" Nupur said while pating lightly on Mayank's back......

Mayank broke the hug and then wiped off Nupur's tears......

"I Love You Nupur and I really mean it........main isse kuch special karna chahta tha......bas......aur agar tumhein simple chahiye toh" Mayank turned and looked at the flower vase "Ek second"

Mayank went and took out a pink rose from the vase.......

He stood in front of Nupur.......and then went down on his knees......forwarded the rose to Nupur and said "I Love You"

Nupur smiled standing there only...she took the rose and then she said "I Love You too"

Mayank stood up and they again hugged each other......

Sab gussa hain ?? I know main aajkal saare FFs update karne mein late ho rahi hoon.....but please samjho yaar main bohot busy chal rahi hoon........
Please bataana kaisa laga......waiting eagerly for ur comments.....
Edited by .Daksha. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
after long time but very very nice up date
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hiii Daksha...
Yaay u updated and it was a fabulous update... 👏they are so cute.. especially Mayank.. i love the way he pulled her close in the middle of the road and then the ILU while sledging and confused Nupur haha.. and then the room, wow.. what a sweetie he is and i loved the last part.. was awesome... hope the next part will be up soon. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovley update
i was lost in dreaming daksha yaar you are really amazing i love it .....so romantic
and now this is a sweet request plz plz update soon others too
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lovely updt
loved mayur confession
thanks for the pm

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