||The Face Staring At Me|| AR/MoNaya Ch 5:Pg 111 - Page 37

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Radz
the promo is supercool
so awesome
plz do give an update soon
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
love
pooja

thannxx pooja di..!!
i'm glad dat u lyked my promo..!!
will defo updt soon..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
thannxx dear..!!
i'm glad dat u lyked my promo..!!
will defo updt soon..!!
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Chapter 3(a): The Most Awaited Pal

'mmmm?mmmm' (Ridzi is just humming)

Oh God this saree is so?I mean it is so difficult to wear a saree.. pata nahi why I chose this one..but it's so pretty..i just love this one !!

*ding dong*

Yaar who is there at this point of time.

'Who is there..??'

'Arrey me..Armaan..!!'

OMG..Armaan itni jaldi?kyun?why?kaise..!! Oh gawd..kam se kam he could give a call..okay fine a missed call !! Ek number ka fool hai..arghhh?

************

'Hello'

'Sanaya..are you ready ??'

'Mohit..itni jaldi..time dekho..!!'

'Oh queen Elizabeth tum time dekho..it's already 7:45 pm !! Tumne ate karvaya hai !!'

'No..not my fault..teri hai..u didn't called me up..so it's your fault !!'

'No..teri hai..!!'

'Nahi..'

'haan..!!'

'nahi..'

'okay,?baba..bas meri galti hai..okay..!!'

'that's like my good mohit !!'

'Achcha..tell me are you ready ??'

'Uf foo?when you will stop talking tabhi toh I'll get ready !!'

'kya yaar sanaya tum bhi na....get ready fast..i'll come at 8 !!'

'What main..and ya come at 8 !!'

*Phone Disconnected*

(Mohit speaking) 'Yeh Sanaya bhi na..i hope aaj sab theek se ho jaaye..otherwise everything will go wrong !!'

************

'Aa rahi hoon baba..'

Riddhima goes and opens the door (Shez is wearing s beutiful black saree)😛

'kitni baar tumen bells bajayi haan..?? I told you na I'm coming..Oh hello..are you listening..??'

'Beautiful?just beautiful'

Oh god..is manhoos stalker se mujhe bacho..he's staring me again..n upar se he's flirting with me again too?arghhh?

Aaj toh yeh gaya..huh..!! Pehle isko toh theek karoon?then uski khabar lungi...

'Oh mr manh?oops...armaan?what happened..??'

'haan?ab..ab?nothing?shall we move..??'

He is so weird..club ka leader ban jaao mr manhoos stalker..you'll win every election of the Weirdoes club too..!!

'mm..Chalo..!!'

************

*Ding Dong*

'Ah..finally Mohit is here !!'

Sanaya goes and opens the door..She is wearing Indain salwaar kameez.. 😛

'Hi Mohit !!'

He doesnot answer..Why..obviously you can imagine how beautful she must be looking so he was stunned to see her beauty !!

'What has happened to Mohit !! He's acting weird !!'

'Haloo..!! Mohit ?? what happenend ??'

'haan..nothing?chalein..!!'

'mm..okay..let's move..'

************

'Oh hello Armaan..look straight?varna kahin kisi tree se na takra jaao !!'

'Lozl..tree se na takra jaaon..seedhe seedhe bolo ki kahin accident na ho jaaye !!'

'Watever..that's my style?'

'You are funny..'

'Huh..why do you have to speak so much..??'

'Well Ms Riddhima..i have got a big big mouth..you wanna see?see?aaaaa?!!'

'Oh shut tup armaan..close your mouth?argghhh?Now why are you laughing..'

'Aise hi?'

Pura mood kharab kar diya?paagal..i think I should change his name from manhoos stalker to manhoos flirt..kitna flirt karta hai..and why only with me?.how about Mahaan Baba Manhoos Flirt Das..noo..bahut filmy hai..lozl..!!

'Apna sarre ka dupatte ko sambhalo?uda uda jaa raha hai..,kahin car tree se takra gayi toh?Ooh my god..!!'

Haww?he's trying to copy me..ahhhh?he's getting on my nerves..!!

'Wat?e?ver? !!'

'achcha Apna kya kehte hain..sarre dupatta toh hatao..'

'huh..lo?removed it?is it fine now..!!'

(Armaan in low voice) 'Plan kaam kar raha hai..good going armaan !!'

************

'Mohit !! Why are you staring me since then !! Just like that Armaan !!'

'Kya..woh armaan tujhe stare karta hai ?? abhi uski khabhar lunga..'

'nahi..mujhe nahi?ridzi ko..'

'Oh..i even don't know why does he stares her..'

'Maybe her face looks similar to him..

'Hmm..nyc guess sanaya..in b/w tum aaj itni happening kyun lag rahi ho..??'

He passes a teasing smile.

'Because of the surprise you are giving me?batao na kya hai..??'

'If I'll tell then voh surprise thodi na reh jaayega..so just wait n watch..!!

(Sanaya in low voice) 'Uf foo..Batata hi nahi hai..lemme switch on the radio..'

Song plays:

'mm?suits the situation..haina sanaya..'

'huh..haan..pefecto song ..!!

************

'Achcha Armaan?why do you keep staring at me..'

'Riddhima hun..i have already told you..yaad nahi..'

'told you?kab..??'

'Arrey aaj class ke bahar hi toh bataya tha?bhul gayi..!!'

*Flashback*

Why you keep staring at me..??'

'Because you are so beautiful..haaye..'

*Flashback*

Again?yeh itni aasani se yeh nahi batane waala ki why does he stares at me..!! Par main Riddhima gupta hoon..pata toh chalwa hi lungi..

'Do you have the disease of talking to yourself..'

'Huh..wat's your problem..??'

'mm?nothing?continue continue..'

'Haan toh apni yeh khatara car chalalo?pata nahi aur kitna time isme baithna hoga..'

'ayyyye?meri baby ko kuch mat kehna..she's so komal..soft soft..'

Paagal raja..koi apni car ko baby bulata hai..arghh?if I'll be with him one more second?main paagal ho jaungi for sure..!!

Just then?The car and armaan's baby broke down..

'kya hua..??'

'ab?shayad engine garam ho gaya..'

'ahh?now how will we reach the college..??'

'I'll see it abhi?don't worry..'

OMg..isi ki hi kammi thi..armaan's baby?khattara..!! I feel like kicking it and of course Armaan too..!! Lemme get ouuta of the car..and see what's the problem..

'kya hua..??'

'jiska darr tha..it needs mechanic..'

'aww?you baby need first aid..shut up..how will we reach the prom..'

'that's difficult..!!'

'Kya..?? We will not be reaching the prom.. S**t yaar..where will we going now..!!'

'There..'

************

'Yeh mohit..college waali lane peeche reh gayi?where are you taking me..!! Batao na..'

'Shhhh..just chup chap chalo..your surprise is waiting for you desperately?!!'

'But yeh batao where are we going..??'

'You'll get to know..but ek hint de sakta hoon..'

'kya..??'

'Humari saath mein journey wahi start hui thi..!!'

'Journey..start hui...mm..thniking?'

'Socho socho..you have enough time'

'hmm?journey..college?nahi..classroom..nahi..'

'Sanaya get out of college..dekho ek aur hint ?!!'

'okay..out of college..music concert..??'

'Nahi..your guessing time is over now?'

'why?'

'because we are gonna reach there in few seconds..so yeh lo?'

'blindfold..why are you playing this game with me yaar?'

'chup chaap pehno..'

'okay mohit..as per your orders..'

'kuch dikh toh nahi raha..'

'nahi?bilkul nahi..'

'achcha batao yeh kitni fingers hain..??'

'Mohit?yeh kya bacho ki cheezen kar rahe ho..'

'okay?okay?we are here..chalo get out of the car..'

'one...two?three..tadaan?surprise..'

Sanaya opens her eyes..and is totally stunned to look around her !!

************

MM...so whta's the thing that sanaya is stunned to see ?? And what about Armaan n Riddhima ?? How will they reach the prom ?? To know more keep reading !!
Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago
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Please read this :))

Eloo guyzz..!!

Lozl..don't beat me up..I noe I stopped at the very interesting moment..and I'm making you all wait more for the surprise..!!

But kya karoon..i love to give surprises..!!😆

N agar sab kuch abhi likh deti toh chapter 3(b) mein kya likhit…so isliye kaan pakad ke sowwie..!!😳

Okay..so this week I'm so happy..

KaSh magik gonna be bak soon..n Gunjan is not the person who is dead in MJHT..Yaya..i hope everythin gets settled again in mjht n dmg soon..!!

About KaSh you can make it out from my signature n dp…everywhere KaSh…I'm going wild..!!

Well about AR..you'll get good scenes…all the fighting scenes now..n Monaya having romantic scenes..

So Do wait n watch out..

Tab tak ke liye keep reading..

Do comment and press the like button..!!

PS: When all will get back to the college that is after Chapter 3(b) or chapter 4..there will a lot of comedy…n humour nw..!!

Cho Keep Leading :)

--radz—

Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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*edited*

Firstly are you planning to kill me?
AR was so much fun n u say coming chaps will have more humour i will die laughing 🤣
plz aisa mat karna😆😆


Jokes apart Lovely Update!
U have said sorry sso sweetly for leaving us on a cliffhanger tht i dont feel like hitting u for tht😛 lol lemme whine now okay?

Whyyyy? did u stop there!! i was like aghh nahiiin!!!armaan na kaunsi jagah dekhi he said der, but where? lol...and wat did sanaya see...she was stunned uff! not gud radz 😛

hmm chalo no probs i will wait *pouts real hard* ya m still angry tht u stopped here lol

nyways coming to the chap.
I loved ridz pov..gosh i was laughing nything....Mahaan Baba Manhoos Flirt Das 🤣🤣
MoNaya are so typical in ur ff...they r like tht in all the segments and interviews i hv seen.
Truly Jannuable and always flirting and joking round.😳

Awesome Blossom Update!!!
LuvD it to the Core!

Now i really wanna knw as to why he keeps staring at her! i dont blv him just like ridzi :D
and AR fight scenes my alltime fav by god!

eagerly waiting for u to update!:)
and congo KaSh is back! and yeah even m glad tht gunjan is alive and sanaya is staying :):)

luv
ZeeJay!
Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago
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hey radz..nice part..
armaan came to pick her up..n even flirted with her ;)..thats nice!..she asked him again why he always stared at her..but he gave her the same answer n she wasn't satisfied!..i really wonder why though..during the ride they teased each other..lol..n the car broke down?..how the hell are they goin to reach..
mohit came to pick sanaya up..n he wasn't letting out where he was takin her..he just gave her clues..n finally they reached their destination..cool..but i wonder what was it that sanaya was stunned?..
srry 4 d shrt comment
thnx 4 d pm
update soon
Edited by aish_punk - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey RADZ,......

supurb part
loved it
keep continue
Thanks for the PM

love
prinz
😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey thnx 4 d pm and the part ws fantabulous.....<3 continue soon...
--fiza
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum part
thanx for the pm
plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Radhi..=)
Lovelyy Upd..🤣 Loved AR As Always..🤣 🤣
Armaan n Ridzzi R So Funny..🤣 Really Laughed A Lot..
And MoNaya Hayye Beautiful...Loved It..
Waiting Eagerly To know Wats The Surprise...😳
Do Cont.Soon
Thanks For The PM..!!
-Mehek-

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