MAYUR FF - Five - THE POWER PT 16UPDATED PG NO. 28 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice, lovely part.
too good.
loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovley update
yaar who is the fifth power
plz uday or benji plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wonderful part annu
just awesome
loved it
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
At last u updated

Mast part tha

Thanx for pm

Do continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyyy anu
Amazing update yaar
Loved Mayank song
Loved mayur
Do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Both updates were good
Mayur actually fght a lot
Sam sahi mein Gun ko impress karne ke liye kya kya kar raha hai
Mayur ki bhi banti hai
Atlast 5 th power mil gaya
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Posted: 15 years ago
i really like your part 7 ,8,9and 10 plzz add me to your pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 11

G : nupur ye to sab ulta hi ho rha hai
S : chismish.. ye baad me sochenge pehle jo sare students ko bahar nikalte hai
M : right samrat.. ye naa ho k hum achcha karne ki soch rhe ho aur bura ho jaye..
N : ab chalo.....
(charo students ki college se bahar nikalne me help karte hai, aur students iss bhagdaud me gir gye hote hai, charo unko bhi bhid se bachate hai, taki kisi ko zyada chot naa aaye, pr charo iss baat pr gaur nhi kar pate k un charo k sath sath koi aur bhi hai jo baki students ki help kar rha hai....jaise hi sare students college k bahar hote hai, mayank ki nzar uss bande pr padti hai, pr mayank uska face nhi dekh pata.. Mayank usse awaz lagta hai)

M : suno... ruko.....(pr wo person utni hi tezi se nikal jata hai.. Mayank baki gang k pass aata hai..)
N : pta nhi pehle aisa kabhi nhi hua k mujhe kuch dikhe aur wo hua naa ho..
G : haan.. ajeeb baat hai... lagta hai uss 5th power k bina hamari powers hume dokha dene lgi hai
N : aisa hona to nhi chahiye tha.. pr kya pta.. aur humne bekar me college khali kra dia...
M : Bekar me nhi.. wo dekho...(mayank dusri taraf ishara karta hai, wahaan unhe wahi kale saaye nazar aane lagte hai.. to charo piller k piche chhup jate hai)
S : pr humne to apni powers ka use kiya hi nhi.. inn logo ko kaise pta k hum yahaan hai
N : gud point,,, samrat
M : kya gud point... agar humare pass powers hai, to hume rokne k liye unke pass bhi powers hai.. right..
G : pr ye log college me kya kar rhe hai..
M ; Ye to baad me hi pta chal payega..

(dusri taraf kali shakti k gulam jinme se ek unka boss tha jo dekhne me hi kafi darwana tha, sar pr baal nhi, badi badi aankhe.. bada sa chehra... jo baki gulamo ko kuch keh rha tha)
B to gulam : Jao usse dhudho.. wo yahi kahi hona chahiye...😡 😡 😡 iss baar wo bach k nhi jaana chahiye...wo yahaan akela hi hoga
(baki k gulam college me charo taraf dhudne lagte hai)
S : ye kise dhund rha hai...
N : hum logo ko hi dhund rha hoga..
M : tumne syad dhyan se suna nhi k usne kaha k wo akela hi hoga..aur hum sab sath me hai
(koi iss se pehle jawab de pta kali shakti k gulam un charo ko pakad lete hai..aur apne boss k pass le jate hai)
B : Tum log kaun ho?????😡 😡 😡 aur yahaan kya kar rhe ho??😡 😡
M : hum iss college k student hai, aur yahaan padhne aate hai, ye swal to hume tumse puchna chahiye k tum kaun ho aur ye sab log kaun hai.. aur tum sab itne ajeeb kyun ho????? 😡 😡 😡
B : Main kalyug ka khas rakhwala hu.. Mera naam pretmaya hai... aur ye sab mere gulam hai aur main kalyug ka gulam hu... (in his heavy voice)
N : Pr tum hamre college me kya kar rhe ho..apne gulamo k sath.. aur ye to koi kahani si lag rhi hai
PM : ae ladki... zyada naa bol.. ye bta k tumne yahaan kisi ko dekha.. jiske pass adbuth shaktiya ho...
G : Hum to tumhe hi pehli baar dekh rhe hai..aur aaj kal kisi k pass aisi powers nhi hoti.. wo to sab kahaniyo k part hai...
PM : lgta hai wo hamare hath se fir bach gya.. Hume chalna chahiye... (aur pretmaya aur uske gulam achanak se ek dhuye ki tarah gyab ho jate hai.. aur campus me nupur, gunjan, mayank aur samrat khud ko akele khade pate hai)
S : ab ye kya tha??? ye log achanak kahaan chale gye
M : wo jo tha wo tha... ab ye dekh.. princi aa rha hai.. aur gusse me bhi lag rha hai....
(tab tak sare students college k ander enter kar jate hai)
P : Mujhe aaj kuch announce karna hai, pr iss se pehle main ye jaan na chahta hu.. k ye fire alarm kis ne bajaya.. Kis ki himakat hai ye 😡 😡 😡.. Mayank?????
M : sir maine kuch nhi kiya.........
P : janta hu main... tum jaise honhar student aisa kar bhi nhi skte.. Main to bas ye kehna chah rha tha k tum aur tumhare dosto ne jo students ki help ki hai wo bahut achcha kaam kia hai..
M : thank you sir..
P : thank you nhi.. Tum mere sath office me aao.. MUjhe tumse kuch kaam hai..
M : G sir
(mayank principal k sath office jaata hai.. Office me)
P :
Tumne aur samrat ne bahut jald hi nupur aur gunjan jo iss college me naye hai apna achcha dost bna lia hai.. tabhi aaj tum charo ne milkar koi badi ghatna hone se tali hai..
M : thank you sir.
P : thank you nhi mayank tumhari help chahiye thi.. Actual me college me ek naye student ne admission lia hai..
M : sir college me to roz koi na koi naya student aata hai
P : haan pr ye student thoda alag hai.. Naam Hai Uday Bhushan.. waise to tumhe kabhi iske sath kuch alag nhi lagega tumhe kabhi lagega hi nhi k isse koi mental problem hai.. Pr kabhi kabhi khas kar jab ye kisi ki help karta hai.. tab tak to thik rehta hai.. pr jaise hi help khatam hoti hai to ye itna zyada darr jaata hai.. k apni jagah se hilta tak nhi hai.. aur waise ye itna brave hai k kai baar isne logo ki jaan bachane k liye apni jaan khatre me dali hai.. Pr iske ander achanak se darr itna badh jaata hai k ye kai ghanto tak kuch kehta nhi hai
M : oh ho.. to sir aap mujhse kya chahte hai
P : main tumse aur tumahre dosto se ye chahta hu k tum uday ko apne sath rakho.. iska koi frd nhi hai.. jiske chalte syad ye itna darr jata hai.. pr tum log achche dost ho.. aur tum sab milkar uday ki help kar paoge..
lo wo aa hi gya (uday princi k cabin me enter karta hai)
U to P : hello uncle how r u???
P to U : yahaan main tumahra uncle nhi principal hu... aur ye mayank hai..
M to U : Hi.....
U to M : hi mayank Main uday : U...D...A.... Y..... Uday...aur hi se kya hota hai.. Jhappi to banti hai...
(both hug each other)
M to P : sir aap iski baat kar rhe the... R U sure?????????
P : Haan..
U : cool.. mere bare me baatein ho rhi thi...kya baatein ho rhi thi
P : kuch nhi.. Tum mayank k sath jao.. aur college me ghumo fir.. aur class bhi attend karna
U : Ok uncle.. sorry sir
(mayank aur uday princi k cabin se bahar aate hai)
U to M : wo fire alarm tumne aur tumhare dosto ne milkar bajaya tha naa?????? Dekho jhut mat bolna......
M : 😲 😲 Tumhe kaise pta ????😲 😲
U : Mera Naam U...D...A....Y... Uday hai.. mujhe sab pta hota hai..
M : pr kaise pta yahi to puch rha hu
U : agar ye bta dia to secreat kahaan rahega.. waise hum kahaan jaa rhe hai
M : canteen me.........Mere friends hai wahaan...
U : mera fav place.. pr pehle me college ghum k aata hu,,, aur tumhe canteen me milta hu.. tab tak tumhe bhi time mil jayega apne dosto ko mere bare me batane ka
M : ya sure....
(mayank canteen jaata hai.. jahaan, nupur, gunjan aur samrat uska wait kar rhe hote hai)
N : mayank kya hua.. princi ko pta chal gya kya k fire alarm humne bajaya tha
M : sh shsshhhh... nhi.. pr wo princi ka relative ek naya student aaya hai usse pta nhi kaise pta chal gya
S,G & N : Naya student???????
M : haan (mayank uday k bare me batata hai, jo bhi kuch usse princi ne kaha aur fir uday ne jis tarah se fire alarm k bare me surely kaha)
S : cool ek aur nayi musibat.. wo pretmaya jo sirf hume hi nazar aati hai,, aur ab ye uday.. usse apne se kaise alag karenge..
N : haan pr wo pretmaya dhund kise rhi thi.. agar wo hum dhund rhi thi to usne aisa kyun kaha k wo akela hoga
G : haan jabki hum sab sath me the..
M : aur guys jab hum students ki help kar rhe the to ek aur banda tha jo students ki help kar rha tha..
S : to tumne usse dekha..
M : nhi uski back thi meri taraf.. aur jaise hi maine usse awaz di wo bhag gya aur uske baad princi aa gye...
N : matlab.. pretmaya hume nhi uss 5th power ko dhundne aaya tha
G : agar wo dhunde aaya tha to iska matlab ahi wo 5th power yahi kahi aas pass honi chahiye
S : Kya pta ye 5th power uday hi ho..
M : ho skta hai.. fir usse kaise pta k fire alarm hume bajaya tha..
G : syad usne hum me se kisi ko dekha ho
N : ho skta hai.. pr fire alarm to maine telepathy use karke bajwaya tha.. to usse kaise pta
S : matlab????????
N : Maine ek student ko fire alarm k pass khada dekha to usse telepathy se sandesha dia k fire alarm bajao.. aur aam insan jo telepathy nhi janta usse lagta hai k ye kaam wo khud karna chahta hai
G : to usse kaise pta ye kaam hamara tha..
M : matlab wo 5th power hai.. Mano ya naa mano
N : manana hi hai.. koi aur option bhi nhi hai.. aur granth k hisab se ab tak hum pancho ko eksath hona chahiye..
S : chalo to dhunde usse?????/ mayank kahaan gya wo
M : keh rha tha college gumna hai.. pta nhi


TO BE CONT.......................

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Posted: 15 years ago
Mindblowing part

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Posted: 15 years ago
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