MAYUR FF - Five - THE POWER PT 16UPDATED PG NO. 28 - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely, nice update. continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
finally fifth power ki entry toh hui
wow...... uday
i can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
wo gr8 part dear update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update
Atlast they got the 5th power
Loved the way Princi defined Uday
Uday was sweet here loved him
Hop they find Uday soon
Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
yaar i really enjoy this update pretmaya lovley name
lovely update
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice ff continue sooon and pm to me/.......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 12

(sab alag alag direction me jaakar uday ko dhundna shuru karte hai, pr uday ko bhuk lgi hoti hai to wo canteen me aa jaata hai.. kafi derr dhundne k baad charo corridor me milte hai)

M : mila kya?????
N : nhi....
G : mujhe bhi nhi mila
S : no idea.. k wo kahaan hai...
M : hamari hi kismat kharab hai.. jo mila bhi aur gyab bhi ho gya
N : tumne usse jaane kyun dia?????
M : mujhe kya pta tha k wo 5th power hai... waise bhi sab kuch to tumhe hi pta hota hai... to tumhe ye bhi pta hona chahiye tha naa k wo 5th power hai
N : haan sari responsibility to meri hai.. mujhe hi sb kuch pta hona chahiye tha..
M : aur kya after all future tum dekh skti ho???? fir to tumhe ye bhi dikh jaana chahiye tha
N : main dekhti nhi hu.. mujhe apne aap nazar aata hai.. ye koi mazak nhi hai...
G : bass... tum dono ladna band karo.. arre wo 5th power hai aaj nhi to kal hume mil hi jaani hai
S : aur kya???// waise bhi ab mujhe fir se bhuk lgi hai. 5th power to nhi mili.. pr usse dhundte dhundte bhuk zarur lag aayi hai.. canteen chale...
N : haan.. thik hai..
G : yahi karte hai
M : haan.. maine waise bhi usse kaha tha k main apne dosto k sath canteen me hu....to ho skta hai k wo canteen me ho
N : kya?????? aur ye baat tum ab bta rhe ho
M : haan... koi problem hai kya
N : tumhe pehle batani chahiye thi
M : ab bta di.. wo bhi ehsan hai
S : not again.....
S to G : hum canteen me chalte hai.. jab inka jhagda khatam ho jayega to apne aap aa jayenge.
G : thik hai..
S to mayur : hamra mud nhi hai tumhara jhagda sun ne ka isliye hum log canteen me jaa rhe hai.... jab jhagda khatam ho jaye to aa jana.
(sajan bina mayur ki baat sune canteen chale jaate hai.. aur mayur thodi der baad aate hai.. jab sajan canteen me pahuchte hai...samrat gunjan ek table pr baith jate hai)
S :chismish tum yahi ruko.. main kuch khane k liye lata hu
G : thik hai...
(chismish canteen me ek bande ko akele table pr baith khate huye dekhti hai to usse ajeeb lagta hai.. to wo uska mind padhne ki koshish karti hai...tabhi samrat aa jata hai)
S : kya hua chismish????
G : kuch nhi... usse to dekho..syad college me naya hai isliye to akela baitha hai
S : aur kitna bukhhad bhi hai.. aisa lag rha hai janamo se kuch khaya nhi hai😊 😊

G : haan.. tumhe pta hai maine iska mind padhne ki koshish ki to iske mind me sirf khana hi chal rha hai...😊 😊
S : pta hai tumhare pass sabse khatarnak power hai.. tum hum logo ka bhi mind padh skti ho... it's dangerous for us
G : haan... taki agar kabhi tum log kali shaktiyo ka sath dena bhi chaho to mujhe pta chal jaye
S : oh.... aisa kabhi nhi hoga
G : haan.. granth k hisab se hona to nhi chahiye... pr kya pta.. waise granth k hisab se hume ab tak 5th power k sath hona chahiye tha
S : hum wahi to dhund rhe hai...?? hope so jaldi hi milegi
(tabhi dono k mind me mayank ki baat aati hai aur wo uss naye boys ki taraf jaate hai aur uski chair k pass khade hi hote hai k mayur wahaan aa jate hai)
M to B : tum?????? 😲 😲 tum yahan ho.. aur hum log tumhe pure college me dhund rhe the
B : tumne hi to kaha tha k tum aur tumhre dost canteen me hai.. to main aa gya.. pr tum log yahaan nhi the.. ab canteen aaya hu.. to kuch khana to banta hi hai..uday canteen aaye aur kuch naa khaye aisa thodi hi ho skta hai

(all four are relexed k 5th power bhi mil hi gyi mayank baki sab se uday ka intro karwata hai.)
N to U : uday mujhe apne dosto se kuch zaruri baat karni hai.. pls don't mind
U : haan haan sure... tumhare hi dost hai...
(nupur mayank, gunjan aur samrat ko alag le jati hai)

M : ab kya hua???
N : hua nahi hai karna hai
S : kya ???????
N : hume uday ko manana hoga.. hamre sath rehne k liye
M : pgal ho gyi ho kya????? wo princi ka reletive hai.. wo nhi manega.. aur princi k sath hi rahega
G : pr nupur sahi keh rhi hai... bahar ki dunia me usse zyada khatra hai.. aur raat ko kali shaktiyo ki power bdh jati hai..isliye guru ji ne wo ghar hume dia...jis se wo kali shaktiyo hume pehchan naa paye...
S : pr r u sure k wo manega???????
G : hume koshish to karni hi hogi naa...
(charo uday k pass jate hai)
N to U : college to band hone wala hai...
U : oh that's gud... fir to kal hi milenge
M : uday..to tum princi k ghar me rehte ho right
U : filhal to....😊 😊 tum charo ek sath rehte ho???????
N : haan... hum sab ek sath ek ghar me rehte hai
U : to matlab tum log reletives ho
G : nhi aisa kuch nhi.. college join karne se pehle to hum mayank aur samrat ko jante bhi nhi the
U : cool..fir bhi sath rehte ho... gud gud
S : aisa kuch nhi hai dude.. hum nupur k ghar me as a paying guest rehte hai.. iss se in girls ko bhi kuch paise mil jate hai.. aur nupur ka ghar itna bada hai k koi akela rhe to gum ho jaye
U : (kuch sochte huye) : PG.....hmmmmmmm
M : kya soch rhe ho
U : actually mujhe bhi ek pg chahiye the.. main uncle k ghr zyada din nhi rukhna chahta.. main jald se jald shift karna chahta hu
(charo k face pr smile aa jati hai)
S : tumhe pg chahiye 😊 😊
U : haan??????
G : hamra ghar hai naa...
M : kafi bada ghar hai
S : aur iss se hamare rent pr bhi asar padega...kam dena padega
N : to kab aana chahoge.
U : kab shift karu??????
M : abhi karte hai naa
U : i think ek baar main ghar dekh lu...
G : ya ofcourse....sure....
(pancho nupur k ghar chalte hai.. jahaan pr uday 1st step rakhte hi behosh ho jata hai..use behosh dekh kar)
N : kahi humne koi galti to nhi ki
S : ye kali shakti ka hissa to nhi tha
G : aisa kaise ho skta hai...hum itni badi galti nhi kar skte
M : pr lagta hai k hum se 1st step me hi galti huyi hai ye 5th power nhi hai
(uday ussi whqt aankhen khol leta hai..)
U : arre main bas mazak kar rha tha
G : aise koi mazak krta hai kya??????
U : i am sorry... pr tum log kis bare me baat kr rhe the
N : wo bhi btayenge.. tum ander to chalo
U : tum log kuch kali shaktiyo k bare me baat kar rhe the???
S : haan... pr ander chalo.. fir batayenge...pr uss se pehle tumhe yahaan shift hona hoga...
(sabhi ander jaate hai... sab ko tasali ho jati hai k uday hi 5th power hai kyunki iske alwa koi aur uss ghar me nhi aa skta.... fir uday apna sara saamaan nupur k ghar shift kar leta hai... abhi uday ko nhi pta k wo kisi shakti ka hissa hai.. baki charo ne isliye nhi bataya hai kyunki guruji ka adesh hai k 5th power ko sab kuch wo hi batayenge)

TO BE CONT............................................


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Nupur k guru ji college me?????? charo hairaan hai????? tabhi princi batate hai k wo new science teacher hai???????

NEXT PART - PG 22
Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow lovely update anu
sab log uday ko ghar le aya
kyun ki wo 5th power hain
hmm interesting ..............

loved ur update.
plz do continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update
oh!!!!uday is 5th power....cool
do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update plz cont soon

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