MAYUR FF - Five - THE POWER PT 16UPDATED PG NO. 28 - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely, nice update.
loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Annu
awesome update
lovely
loved both mayur and sajan
pls try to add more mayur.
and i want to c to use their special power seriously.
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey luvd it re...do continue soon...do pm wen u update... 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyyy anu
Nice update yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 10

(sayank apna samaan shift kar lete hai.. gunur dono ki help karti hai saaman shift karne me?. Mayank samrat ka guitar utha kar abhi bajane ki soch hi rha hota hai tabhi )

S : Itna mann kar rha hai to baja lo

M : hmm.. main bhi wahi karne ki soch rha hu.. kafi dino se bajaya nhi hai..

S : haan.. iss bahane girls bhi impress ho jayengi tumse..(smiles)

M : mujhe kisi ko impress karne ki zarurat nhi hai.. aur haan waise dikh rha hai tum kisi ko impress karne ki zoro shoro se koshish kar rhe ho(gunjan ka ishara karte huye) aur rhi baat JKR ki to usse main to kya koi bhi impress nhi kar skta?(both smiles)

S : to neki aur puch puch.. kuch ho jaye? (guitar bajane ka ishara karte huye)

M : kyun nhi?(mayank guitar play karna start karta hai aur sath me gaata bhi hai)

Music?..

dil khudgarj hai,
phisala hai yeh phir haath se
kal usaka raha, abb hai tera
iss raat se ? 2o meri jaan..........

(mayank bas guitar baja rha hai.. uska sara dhayan guitar bajane me hai.. nupur aur gunjan jo mayank aur samrat k liye coffee bana rhi thi.. guitar ki awaz sun kar coffee lekar boys k room me aa jati hai..jinhe dekh kar mayank guitar bajaana band kar deta hai)

N : ruk kyun gye.. kitna to achcha baja rhe the..

G : mayank tum to kafi achcha gaate ho..

S : ab to girls se bhi permission mil gyi hai.. to gaana to banta hai

M : ji nhi.. mera coffee pine ka zyada mann hai.. girls itni mehnat karke coffee bana k layi hai.. to main coffee ko kaise mana kar skta hu.. gaana fir kabhi.. (gunjan se coffee ka cup lete huye)

N : haan kyun nhi??? Coffee banana me hume pahad todne jo pade hai.. (mayank se coffee ka cup lete huye) hum tumhare liye ye pahad dobra tod lenge.. abhi pehle gaana sun na hai hume.. kyun gunjan

G : haan.. mayank ek gaana to banta hai

S : haan bilkul banta hai..

M to S : samrat kam se kam tum to meri side lo..

S : sorry mayank majority kehti hai k gaana sun na hai.. to tumhe sun na hi padega

M : ok mere pass koi aur option nhi hai?

(mayank ne jaahaan se song choda tha wahi se gaana start karta hai)

tu aa gaya yuun nazar mein
jaise subah dopahar mein
madhoshi yuun hi nahi dil pe chaayi
niyat ne li angadaayi
chhuaa tune kuchh iss tarah
badli fiza badla samao meri jaan..........

(mayank song start karte whqt to uske mind me kuch nhi hota.. wo guitar hi baja rha hota hai, tabhi uski nazar nupur pr padti hai.. nupur fully mayank ka song enjoy kar rhi hai.. mayank dreamed k nupur ne white chudidar suit pehna hai.. mayank akela guitar baja rha hai tabhi nupur mayank ke piche se uske kareeb aati hai aur uske kaano me kuch kehti hai.. fir nupur mayank k saamne aa jati hai aur uske chehre pr hath firate huye mayank ki aankhen band karwa deti hai.. mayank apne dono hath srk style me faila leta hai.. to nupur piche se aati hai aur uske shoulder pr touch karte huye puchti hai kya hua.. then mayank come out from the dream.. & think k wo ye kya soch rha tha? pr wo song gana band nhi karta..

naada samajhe naa yeh dil mera
jaanu na jaanu na isako kya huva
teri baahon ki phir se dhunde yeh panaah
tu hai kahaan, tu hai kahaan

o meri jaan..........

(samrat bhi mayank ka sath dene k liye ye lines gaata hai.. dono sath me kafi achche se song gaate hai..)

After the song

M : I think ab to main coffee deserve karta hu

N : haan haan kyun nhi??? Main lati hu

(nupur coffee lene jati hai)

S : ah ha.. JKR coffee lene gyi hai.. ek song se to tumne JKR ko impress kar dia..

M : ye JKR kisi se impress nhi ho skti.. iske samne main kya cheez hu.. (smiles)

G : tum log aisa kyun sochte ho.. nupur itni bhi buri nhi hai..

S : to manti ho k nupur buri hai?.

G : maine kab kaha k nupur buri hai

S : abhi to kaha itni bhi buri nhi hai.. iska matlab k wo thodi bahut to buri hai

G : mere kehne ka wo matlab nhi tha

S : fir kya matlab tha chismish..(touch her nose)

G : samrat

S : chismish

(both smiles.. mayank leave them & go to the kitchen)

Kitchen me

M : tum sach me pahad tod kar to coffee nhi banana wali.. itni derr kyun lga rhi ho

N : oh ho.. mayank tum me zara bhi patients nhi hai.. bana to rhi hu.. aur tum yahaan kya kar rhe ho..aur gunjan aur samrat kahaan hai??

M : main yahaan apni coffee ka wait kar rha hu.. aur gunjan aur samrat dono room me hai.. waise tumne nhi lgta k dono ki achchi banti hai..

N : to isme burai kya hai??

M : haan ye to hai k isme burai nhi hai

N : waise bhi hum logo me jitna achche se bane uthna 5th power ko dhundne me aasani hogi..aakhir hum log ko chuna hi iss kaam k liye gya hai

M : nupur ek baat batao iske alwa tumhe aur kuch nhi sujhta kya.. jab dekho.. wahi ek mission..

N : nhi? filhal to iske alwa sochne k liye mere pass kuch hai bhi nhi jo main sochu.. bas thodi si rahaat mili hai k 5 me se 4 powers sath me hai.. Pr ek power k bare me abhi bhi tension hai..

(mayank nupur k ekdum piche khada hai.. tabhi nupur turn karti hai? aur sari coffee gir jaati hai)

M : dekha tension lene ka natiza.. arre jis tarah se hum 4 mile hai wo panchvi power bhi mil jayegi.. aur mera coffee pine ka itna mann tha.. aur tumne nhi pilani thi to bol deti.. main khud bana leta.. waise main world ki best coffee banta hu

N : achcha ye to tumne kabhi bataya hi nhi

M : tumne pucha hi nhi

(mayank coffee banana lagta hai.. nupur mayank se guruji aur aashram ki kai sari baatein share karti hai)

(Next day In the college)

G : nupur main library jaa rhi hu.. tum aaogi

N : nhi mera mann nhi hai..

M : ruko gunjan main bhi library aata hu.. mujhe kuch books issue karwani hai

S to M (whispering) : tujhe gunjan k sath hi jaana hai..

M (whispering) : don't worry.. main bas library tak ja rha hu.. aage tum dekh lena

S : nhi tum nhi jaoge

M : ok thik hai

(girls reaction : ye kya ho rha hai)

S : gunjan actual me mayank ko book mere liye hi issue karwani hai to main hi chalta hu tumhare sath library

M : haan haan.. gunjan.. aaj kal samrat ko books me bhi interest aa gya hai.. pls iske sath jao

(sajan library chale jaate hai)

N : ye sab kya ho rha tha

M : kuch nhi.. kuch ho rha tha kya

N : mujhe sab pta chal rha tha

M : achcha to tumhe kya pta chala..

N : uff mayank.. tum bhi naa

M : main bhi kya nupur..

N : kuch nhi

(suddenly nupur feels k syad kuch hone wala hai)

M : kya hua nupur

N : sh shhhh.. syad kuch hone wala hai

M : kya?????

N: Pta nhi.. bas maine abhi dekha k hum charo sath me hai.. aur koi aur bhi hai jo hamari help karne wala hai

M : tumne dekha??? Oh haan.. tum future dekh skti ho.. pr uss insan ki shakal dekhi.. tumne????

N : wahi nhi dekh payi

M : to dobra dekho

N : main khud se future ne dekhti.. mujhe apne aap nazar aata hai.. jitna zaruri hota hai uthna hi nazar aata hai.

M : to 5th power important nhi hai kya

N : hum pancho ka sath hona hi zaruri hai..

M : pr abhi to hum 2 hi hai.. baki 2 library me hai

(tabhi samrat aur gunjan bhi aa jate hai)

G to N : kya hua..

N : hua nhi hona baki hai

S : kya..

N : bas thodi derr me pta chal jayega..

G : tumne kya dekha nupur.. jo itni jaldi bulaya

N : maine wo 5th power ko dekha.. aur ye bhi dekha college me kuch hone wala hai..

S : bulaya..??? kab???????

N : telepathy se??.

S : oh haan.. abhi hume iss sab ki adat nhi hai

G : to ho jayegi.. ab kya kare..

N : college khali karwana padega.. taki koi badi problem naa ho.. maine dekha college k sare students idhar udhar bhag rhe hai..aur wo 5th power logo ki help karne me hamari help kar rha hai

S : ye to confirmed ho gya k wo 5th power dikhti kaisi hai. Matlab male hai

N : haan bas ye confirmed hua hai k wo ek ladka hai.. aur main bhi shakal nhi dekh payi..

M : sabse pehle hume college khali karwana hoga

S : pr agar hum kisi ko kahenge to koi manega nhi

G : ye bhi sahi hai

M : ek idea.. kyun naa fire alarm use kare

S : not a bad idea..Main karta hu?

(samrat fire alarm ka use karta hai.. jis se college me afra tafri mach jati hai..sab idhar udhar bhagne lagte hai.. but problem tab ho jati hai. Jab sab ek sath gate ki taraf bhagne lagte hai.. aur darr k mare jo log girte hai wo uth nhi pate.. aur fir baki k student apni jaan bachane k chakker me un k upper se hi jaane lagte hai)

M : ye to sab gadbad ho rha hai.. hume unki help karni hogi..

N : haan sahi kaha..

(sab help karne lagne hai.. )

TO BE CONT??????


PART 11 - PG 18

Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part
mayank song is nice
cont soon
n tnx fr pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow very nice part
loved it
pm me the next part

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