Written Update 28/05/2010 COMPLETE

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1 Starts wid y'day's dialogue between Masa & Bhairon,at da end of which Bhairon declares dat Masa has no right to tk any decisions regarding his son's lyf.šŸ‘ Masa is shocked n sad while Teepri luks scared.
Bhairon:Yahan sawal aapke pote Jagya ka nahi hai,sawal teen parivaron ka hai,teen zindagiyon ka hai!
Khajan says enough!Enough of mother-son interactn.(I was wondering hw & y he was quiet?šŸ˜‰)
He says I've heard enough of ur rubbish.U remember 1 thing-watvr u hav done wid my laado was not right n u wil hav 2 repent for it!
He says if I dnt drag ur whole famly to court n get u a taste of lyf in jail my name is not Khajan Singh.😲
Bhairon is shocked.
Khajan says inspite of havin 1 bheendni u brought another bheendni for da chora.
U mst b punished for sucha big crime!
U walk very proudly everywer naa....now if I dnt mix ur name n fame to dust my name is not Khajan Singh!
He adds dat my daughter is innocent dat she still believes n respects u-u ppl who wer expensive clothes,she is not able to see ur wrotten minds.
Bhairon is tryin his best not to break down.
Khajan joins his hands n says wot u did til date is enough!Now u dont need to do da drama of takin her to ur haveli n takin care of her!U never gave her da respect a bheendni deserves,now by bringing da odr gal as ur bheendni under da pretext of caring for my laado r u wanting 2 make her a daasi?No Kalyani Devi!Anandi's father is alive now!Hw dare u even think bout takin her back to dat hell?My daughter wil go wid me 2 my village n my houz.
Bhairon says no!She wil not go anywer.
Now he shouts dat she was my son's wife,is n wil always be!šŸ‘
Bhairon:Masa insan ki izzat uske karmon se hoti hai....zindagi bhar jis aadmi ko aapne chota aadmi kaha aj us hi k saamne sirf aapki nahi hum sab ki nazre sharm se jhuka di aapne!
Bhairon says Wot u dis masa is not acceptable to me!As Jagya's father I refuse to acknowledge dis wedding!
Maan Singh is shocked.
Bhairon:Yeh shadi nahi khilwad tha jo meri,samaaj aur kanun ki nazar me apraadh hai!
Part 2
Anandi is crying.
Bhago asks her not to cry for ppl who do not hav da heart to value her emotions.
She looks angrily at Sumitra.
Da odr gal is also sniffing.
Jagya asks Anandi to stop crying.
Da gal's mother cms wid a glass of water n offers it to Anandi bt she refuses.
She asks Bhago y Dadisa dis dis to her dat too on der wedding anniversary?
She keeps askin da same questn.
Den she asks if she is indeed mad?
Bhago says no laado,I had gone mad!I never listened to ur bapu.
He told me so many tyms 2 bring u back,bt
I was blind.I thought not majisa,bt atleast my laado's fil n mil love her a lot!
She says I made a mistake by believing u ppl samdhansa.😔
Luk wot happened to my laado who respects n loves u so much!
She says I thought u really cared for her lyk u care for ur own laado,bt I 4got dat bheendni is a bheendni she can never bcum a daughter!
Sumitra starts crying.
Bhago says u gave so much of pain to my only daughter.
If u wanted to get him remarried u cud hav told me!
I wud hav tkn her back wid me,atleast by doin so she wud not hav 2 see all dis!
Luk wot has happened to my daughter!
She hugs anandi n cries.😭
Part 3
Sumitra luks at Jagya n asks wot shud I tell her?
She shakes his shoulders n says answer me,y did u agree for da marriage?
U act to be very wise,u answer back ur dadisa for ur bheendni bt wot happened 2day?
Y did u sit quietly for da wedding?Dadisa came wid u here,asked u 2 marry n u agreed?Cudnt u refuse her?😔
Jagya says I refused her a lot,I cried also bt Dadisa got v.angry.
She slapped me & locked me up in a room.
She told me if u dont marry her I wil kick Anandi out of da houz.
Sumitra,Bhago & Anandi r shell shocked.
Jagya says I agreed coz I want Anandi to stay in r houz only.I didnt want her to go back 2 her bapu's houz.
Da gal's mother also feels bad for Jagya.
Anandi says sasuma,dadisa ko main itni buri kyun lagti hoon?Main toh unko zara bhi tang nahi karti,yehi sochti hoon k kya karu jisse dadisa khush ho jaye,mhara bhi laad kare...do-teen bar bhule se bhul ho gayi,maine jaan bhujh k kuch na kiya!(awwww...)
She swears on Kanhaji's name.
She says I agree to watver she says den y she did dis to me?😭
Sumitra wipes her tears bt is unable to say anytyn.
Da gal says I told u naa maa,I dont wanna get married,now see evry1 is cryin,no1 is happy.
Sumitra tells da gals mother dat samdhansa n Anandi hav every right to b cross wid me coz m not her mother,m her mil.
Bt u?U r dis gals mother den inspite of knowin evrythin hw cud u agree for da marriage?Hw did u do such a big injustice to her,despite her refusing to marry?😔
Part 4
Da gal is crying.
Sumitra says u knew ryt-dat da boy whom u r makin ur SIL is already married?
Da mother says dat v r poor ppl Baisa,n to top it all v r da gal's parents.We do not hav much choice.
She starts crying.
She says v hav nt dun anythin which has never ever happened till den...if der is sm problem wid da bheendni,rich ppl often get der sons remarried.Dats y v agreed.
Anandi starts crying more after hearing dat.
Bhago consoles her.
Da mother adds dat da gal is lucky,she got da proposal from sucha well to do family,so hw cud v refuse?
Bhago is listening carefully to watever she's sayin.
Da mother says dat My mil is not well,so v had to do all dis in a hurry,bt v did not knw dat Majisa has brought da chora widout tellin him or u.V came to knw only wen u came.N Majisa also hid sucha big thing frm her fmly.
Sumitra luks embarrased.
She says dat majisa lied to us & she backstabbed us!😭
Part 5
Maan Singh says dat so wot if dey lied,bt da wedding is done now,dat too in front of da whole village,all da rituals wer completed.
He says my daughter is no da bheendni of ur houz,u cannot deny dat.
Bhairon says y r u not tryin 2 undrstand wot m sayin?Niether did v know bout dis wedding,nor did v wish to get him married again.
MS joins his hands n says I agree dat u did not knw anythin bout da wedding,bt wot is my fault in dis?Watever Majisa told us,we agreed to it.
Bhairon says I do not agree wid dis wedding .I'm sad for watever happened wid u n ur daughter,I can undrstand dis coz m also da father of a girl,bt I cannot accept ur daughter as my fmly's bheendni!šŸ‘
Shyam says u urself hav seen Anandi n Jagya also said in front of every1 dat he did not want to marry dat girl.
Govind says der is no problem wid r Anandi.
Masa says til wen wil u all keep arguing?I said naa,lets go home n talk.
Bhairon:Is mamle me mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni hai Masa.Aap agar door hi rahe toh achcha hoga is sab se!šŸ‘
Masa is shocked.
Bhairon says ders no point in waiting here.He asks Shyam to call Sumitra n odrs.
I've already told u all my decision.Shadi k naam pe jo mazak huye hai yahan par unse mera koi lena-dena nahi hai!
MS says wait Bhairon Singhji!U cannot go lyk dis!
He says had u told me b4 da pheras,I wud hav agreed.Bt now its a tad too late.U wil hav to accept da fact dat my daughter is ur fmly's bheendni now!
He bcums emoitonal n says odrwise wot wil happen to my laado?
Bhairon says I already told u m sad bout watever happened...
MS says:Dukh jatane aur mafi mangne se kuch na hovega!
He asks da da odr villagers if he is sayin smtyn wrong.
One man says not at all!We r all witnesses of da wedding.After da pheras,hw can u deny dat she is ur bheendni?
Da odr man says v wil not let dis injstice happen in r village.
Another says u r all rich ppl,bt u hav no right to spoil da lyf of a poor man's daughtr.
Da first man says da chora's dadisa cm n fixed da marriage n now da chora's bapu is breaking da marriage.Is dis sm kind of joke or wot?
Anodr man says til u do not accept MS's daughter as ur bheendni we wil not allow u to go anywer!😔
Evry1 is tensed.
Part 6
One man says dat dese ppl wil not agree so easily,now let da panchayat only decide wot is ryt n wots wrong.
Another man says sarpanchji is here only,lets ask him!Da whole matter wil get resolved here itself.
Dey call sapanchji der.
He says da villagers r ryt,u cannot get rid of da girl n walk off!
Now da matter wil b in da hands of da panchayat,bcoz
MS is not wrong in his place.
Der is smtyn goin on in Masa's mind,dunno wot now?Her facial expressns said very clearly dat she is planning smtyn.
Bhairon luks at Khajan for a moment.
Den he says,ok.Dis matter wil b solved by da Jaitsar panchayat.
Khajan says no,m takin my daughyter back wid me,so dis wil b resolved by da Bilaria panchayat.
MS says da wedding took place here,so dis matter shud go in da hands of our panchayat.
Sarpanchji says dat its not da case of one village now. Da girl is from one village,da husband is from another one,his first wife is from a third village n da one who fixed da wedding(Bhavri) is frm yet another village,so according to me,v shud call a mahapanchayat,in which da apart frm da sarpanch of da villages in concern,we wil call da sarpanch of da neighbouring villages as well.
He says der wil b total 25 sarpanch.
MS says as u say sarpanchji,coz I want justice!
Sarpanchji says den its final,2mrw morning,da mahapanchayat wil tk da decision.
Bhairon says so dat means we'll hav to stay for da night here only?
Sarpanchji says yes,u wl hav 2 stay here itself.Bt u dont worry,I'll make arrangements to put u up in da village school.
Part 7
One woman asks wer wil da bride stay til da morning?
Panditji says till all da customs of da wedding,including bidaai r not over,da bride wil hav 2 stay wid da groom.
Bhairon says its not possible!
Khajan says my kanwar-sa wid sm odr chori?No,no!
Bhairon says wen v hav not accepted dis wedding only,den y shud v care about da gatbandhan?
Shyam explains dat for dese ppl dis wedding holds a lot of meaning n in any case dis is jst da matter of one night,u agree to it.
Govind agrees n tells Bhairon dt once mahapanchayat tks it decision,v wil go back n evrythin wil b alright.
Bhairon asks Shyam to call Sumitra n Bhago.
Krishna says she wil bring dem.
Part 8
Anandi asks Sumitra wot wil happen now?
(anandi is sittin on a bed,wid bhago on her left n Sumitra is standin on her right)
She asks if shes not Jagya's bheendni anymore?Wil she not b able to go back wid dem to her sasra?Wil she hav to liv wid her maa-bapu?
Sumitra says no laado!Da day u got married to Jagya,u bcame a part of r fmly.
I wil never let u stay apart frm myself.
Bhago is staring angrily at Sumitra.
Anandi says bt Jagya has got married again.😭
Sumitra says u dont worry bout dat,laado.Ur bapusa is der naa,he wil tk care of evrythin.It doesnt matter if da whole world is against him,he wil never let anythin wrong happen wid u.
She hugs Anandi.
Bhago literally pulls Anandi to her side.
She says y r u givin her false assurances?
She hugs Anandi now.
Bhago says I knw everythin!Nothing can happen now!
She says now I wil do ONLY wot Anandi's bapu says!My daughter is not goin anywer!
I wil tk her to my houz!😔
Da gal n her mother luk at each odr.
Sumitra is shocked.
JaAn luk helplessly at each odr.
Moral:Instead of helping da ill wife to recover,da in-laws who go for da second marriage of der son,r not worthy of being called humans.
Precap:JaAn r walking 2gedr.
Da gal shouts wait!My odhni is gettin pulled.
Bhago,Sumitra & Krishna luk at her while she tries to open da gatbandhan.
Her mother tries to stop her.
One woman cms n says wait chori!Wot r u tryin 2 do?Panditji has said dat both of u wil hav to stay together til da mahapanchayat doesnt tk its decision.
As u know,my sis has met wid a terrible accident and she needs me now.I dont think I wil b able 2 do da written updates for da next week,coz I wil b wid her.I loved doing da updates n I wil miss u all!Wil b back soon!Plz pray for my sis.Thanks!šŸ˜ŠšŸ¤—
Regards,
Apara
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome Effort. Appreciate every bit of it
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thanks!!!

i really hope the marriage is declared null and void
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for the update, and best wishes for y our sister's recovery

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: capricorn7

Thanks for the update, and best wishes for y our sister's recovery

Welcome!😊
Thanks a lot for ur wishes!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good luck and speedy recovery 4 ur sister.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: imagine-addict

good luck and speedy recovery 4 ur sister.

Thanks a lot!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for the update. Sorry to read about your sister. hope she recovers soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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apara ur sis has sum1 like u 2 take care of her. i'm sure she'll get well soon! God bless her!😳
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Thanks a lot vshah19 & Sneha!

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