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SaJan-SaJan

@SaJan-SaJan

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#381

awesome update.... luved d way u expressed d circumstances in which all d 4 are trapped.....👍🏼 cont soon... thanx 4 d pm....

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#382

fantabulous update daksha dear..👏.....
really touched my heart...
all 4 wr so incomplete in deir respective loves...
wonderfully written...👍🏼
d precap is so scary....😒
concerned more abt nupur...😭
pls update soon....
luv u lots...🤗
-supriya

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#383

Awesome Daksha! I read the entire FF in one go and finally caught up. It is a really touching and awesome FF. And thanks a lot for the PM. You have got me itching to read more. Plzz update soon. It is a really well written and touching and beautiful update. I really loved the VM on the first page. Great job. 😊

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#384

awwww just love this parT!

ohhh so Mayur going to meet G

but she not there

wow n the song

simply love it!!

and haan in the precap

wowowoowowow Nupur signs the divorce papers???!!!:(

what???!!

wasn't exprecting that!!

plezz do cont soon na

I want to read the next part ASAP!
luvvv ya🤗

-Lina-

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Varsha

@-krazyriya-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#385

wow....amazing update dear.....

but it was a very touching update dear...... i had tears in my eyes reading this...😭

you have described each n everyone's feelings so beautifully.....loved it !!

loved the scene when by mistake Mayank's hand slipped onto Nupur's waist....😉...

mayur is really adorable yaar.....cant see them apart.....

omg....in precap...nupur signing divorce papers.....hope mayank doesnt let her do so....or realizes his love for her soon.....

lovely update dear.....cont. soon

love u..
varsha

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#386

mindblowing update dear!

update the next part ASAP

thnx 4 the pm 😊

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#387

heyb daksha really touching updt

hope all get well soon with their lives

sooo sad 4 all

keep doing well

love yaa

muuaahh

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Sonam Mathur

@sonam961986

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#388

hey daksha ... love your story .... plz send me pm when you update the next time ....

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Nish

@nish0910

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#389

Great job!!!! Keep going! 😊

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Daksha

@.Daksha.

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#390

Its Nupur's last night in Mayank's house....

Mayank didn't remembered about it....he is only busy searching for his Gunjan....he came back to the house late in the night all tensed up......he saw a lady going out crying.....

He asked his mom "Kaun thi ye maa"

His mom replied "Koi nahin beta.....ye Geeta hai....isske pati ne isse divorce de diya....bechaari bohot pareshaan hai" and his mom started reading the magazine.....

At that moment Mayank turned his neck to look at the calendar.......he remembered that its Nupur's last night in his house......

"Toh maa divorce ke baad.....wo ro kyun rahi thi" Mayank asked curiously

"Kaisi baat karta hai.....har aurat ke liye uska pati hi sab kuch hota hai.....ab maan le bhagwaan na kare lekin agar tu Nupur ko divorce de dega to wo toh sadak par hi aa jaayegi na......upar se ye samaaj auraton ko kabhi chain se jeene deta hai.....bol....ab bol bhi" his mom replied

Hearing this Mayank was shocked he never thought about the consequences of this so called marriage..... what would Nupur do after this divorce.....

All mingled up with the thoughts in his mind he reached his room.....Nupur was sleeping quietly on one side of the bed.......Mayank went nearby her and sat beside her....

Mayank said to the sleeping Nupur "I am sorry Nupur......meri wajah se tumko....ye sab...mujhe iss baat ka ehsaas ab hua hai.....mujhe tumse ye jhooti shaadi nahin karni chahiye thi.....par hui toh ye asli shaadi na......sab ko pata hai tum meri biwi ho.....mujhe kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha....tum ne meri itni madad ki aur main tumhaare liye kuch nahin kar sakta......"

Saying this Mayank got up from the bed......he forwarded his hand to switch off the night lamp then Nupur's diary fell from the side table......Mayank picked it up and he was about to keep it back again but he didn't.......he took the diary with him and sat on the sofa.......

Its late in the night......Gunjan got up to drink water.......she went to the kitchen and saw that Dadi room's light was switched on......she stepped forward to see if everything was alright......but she stopped outside the door hearing some voice.......

"Tu nahin maanega toh main baat karun Gunjan se" Dadi was talking to Samrat who was lying with his head dumped into Dadi's lap....

"Aap bekaar ki baat kar rahi ho....Gunjan kyun karegi mujhse shaadi" Samrat said

"Kyun nahin karegi.....itni acchi pyaari ladki hai.....tu ek baar bol main usse baat karungi" Dadi said

"Par uske saath itna kuch hua hai.....ye sunkar wo aur pareshaan ho jaayegi....aap ab ye shaadi ka chapter band karo" Samrat said

"Accha ye bata.....agar wo haan kar de toh tu usse shaadi karega" Dadi said

"Mujhe nahin pata" Samrat said

"Mujhe nahin pata kya hota hai.......bas ye bata de tujhe Gunjan pasand hai" Dadi asked

"Issmein koi do raaye nahin hain ki woe k acchi ladki hai.....par tumhein itni jaldi kyun hai meri shaadi ki" Samrat said

"Dekh le.....main toh char din ki mehmaan hoon.....kal ko upar chali jaaungi...bas chahti hoon marne se pehle apni bahu ka chehra dekh loon....mujhe Gunjan bohot pasand hai.....tu bol" Dadi said

"Theek hai....tumhaari marzi.....ab main so raha hoon" Samrat said and turned to sleep

Gunjan outside the room....was shocked....she didn't expected that something like this can also happen.....

"Main aur Samrat....hum sirf acche dost hain......par ye shaadi......main Samrat se shaadi nahin kar sakti.....par Dadi mujhse poochengi toh main kya kahungi" Thinking all this Gunjan came back to her room.......

"Nahin main Samrat se shaadi nahin kar sakti" Gunjan was thinking all this when her mind replied "Kyun Samrat ke kitne ehsaan hain tum par......tum sadak par aa chuki thi jab usne tumhein apne ghar mein jagah di.....tumhein sahara diya.....itni jaldi bhool gayin sab kuch"

"Nahin main ye sab nahin bhooli.....par kya Samrat ke ehsaanon ka badla main usse shaadi karke chukaaun" Gunjan said

"Toh poori zindagi.....Samrat ke ghar main baithi rahogi.....tum jitna kamaati ho utna toh aaj Delhi mein ek flat ka rent hai bas.....aage kya socha hai apni life main" her mind said

"Par Mayank....." Gunjan said

"Tum toh usse bhoolna chahti thi na..... toh....tum bhi toh kabhi shaadi karogi na....toh phir Samrat kyun nahin....Dadi jinhonen tumhein maa se badhkar pyaar kiya......unki ek khwahish poori nahin kar sakti.....kaisi insaan ho tum" and saying this her vague image vanished

Gunjan was all tensed up....she didn't understood what to do.....she pulled up the blanket to sleep...but sleep was missing from her eyes....

Mayank opened the page of date two months back......the day of their marriage......

It read as:

"Shaadi ho gayi hai meri.....usse jisse main pyaar karti hoon........par wo kehte hain na shaadi usse karo jo tumse pyar karta ho usse nahin jisse tum pyar karte ho.....aisa ho tabhi toh maine Mayank se shaadi ki........aap jisse pyar karte ho zaroori nahin ki wo bhi aapse pyar kare....... par wo jisse pyar karta hai wo agar meri wajah se usse mill jayye toh isse khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai......aisa KYUN hua.....isska jawaab mere paas nahin hai........"

Mayank was shocked to read that....he turned the pages back....

"Aaj Mayank ne Gunjan ko prupose kiya..... aur Gunjan ne haan keh di....mujhe accha laga ki dono ek doosre ko pyar karte hain.....par main bhi insaan hi hoon na....mujhe bhi toh kahin na kahin bura lagega na.....aakhir main Mayank se pyar karti hoon.....par main khush hoon Mayank ke liye....har kisi ko usska pyaar nahin milta....par Mayank aur Gunjan ko mila....isse acchi baat aur nahin ho sakti...."

Mayank couldn't understand what the hell is happening.....Nupur loved him....she didn't told anything......Mayank further turned on the pages.....

"Aaj Mayank ko hospital se ghar le aaye..... abhi usska right hand fractured hai.....aaj maine pehli baar usske liye soup banaya.....usse pasand bhi aaya....shayad issliye kyunki maine kaha ki maa ne banaya hai......agar amin kehti ki maine banaya hai toh shayad usse pasand nahin aata....."

Mayank slowly started understanding.....Nupur loved him and maybe still she loves him.....she never tried to break Mayank-Gunjan's relationship.....

Mayank further turned on the pages.....the diary was blank further he read the last written page

"Mann toh nahin kar raha par mujhe kal subah jaana hai yahaan se.....bhagwaan please Gunjan ko dhoond do jaldi se..... Mayank ko uski bohot yaad aati hai...... main usse aise nahin dekh sakti......

Mere jaane ke baad Mayank aur Gunjan ek ho jaayenge.....main yahaan se bohot door chali jaaungi....par kahaan ye mujhe nahin pata......par bhagwaan main aapse gussa hoon....kal ka din kabhi bhi meri zindagi mein accha ho hi nahin sakta....mere apne sab mujhe chod kar chale jaate hain....jis din main paida hui ussi din mere maa baap ne mujhe chod diya......aur ussi din mujhe Mayank ko chodna padega......par koi baat nahin main khush hoon....."

It was morning....whole night Mayank was reading Nupur's diary....for the first time Mayank's eyes were wet.......

"Koi kisi se itna pyaar kaise kar sakta hai Nupur....kaise....mujhe aur Gunjan ko milaane ke liye tumne ye sab kiya.....mujhe apna pyar nahin mila par tumhein tumhaara pyaar zaroor milega..... jo jhooti shaadi hui thi usse main sach mein badal ke dikhaaunga....tumhaare liye Nupur ab main tumhaari aankhon mein ek bhi aansoon nahin aane dunga.....ek bhi nahin....." Thinking this Mayank got up from the sofa and very quietly kept the diary at its old place.....

"Aaj Nupur ka birthday hai......ye tumhaari zindagi ka sabse special birthday hoga Nupur" thinking this Mayank went out of the room quietly.....

After few minutes Nupur got up.....she looked at the wall clock.....she went to the washroom and came back......her bag was ready.......she took out the divorce papers from the drawer and signed them and kept them on the table....

This part is my personal favourite......did you liked it....please tell me I am waiting for your comments eagerly....

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