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haya

@laviza97

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Posted: 15 years ago

TITLE:jaane pehchaane se yeh ajnabee

STORY OF MAYUR.......

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NUPUR IZ SITTING IN HER TV LOUNGE..WATCHING DDLJ

NUPZ:GUNJANA RAJ KITNA SWEET HENA

gunji:di..tum yeh film kaye bar dekh chuki ho aur har bari yehe kehte ho

NUPZ:smiles and keeps watching

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mayank and maa scene

mayank is sitting on a sofa and iz bsy in his books

shilpa aunty iz reading a magazine

she suddenly sees a page where it waz return abt shaadi.com

she thinkz:yehe saheeeh moqa hai

maa:mayank

mayu:han maa

she takes book 4rm his hand

mayu:maa yeh kya kr rhe ho...kal test hai mjhe parhne do

maa:agar to ek test mai kam marks ley ley ga to koi faraq nhe padega

mayu:maa mere book do

maa:arre kya mayu agar to yunhe apne kitabon aur notes mai uljha rehe ga toh pyaar kab kega aur shaadi

mayu:lagta hai aaj tumhre tabiyat kharab hai?

maa:ufoh mayu idhar aa

mayu:maa

maa:dekh idhar aa.......

mayu cums on her sofa

mayu:kya hua?

maa:mayu aaj mishra jee aye the

mayu:toh...

maa:apni beti ki shaadi krane ka soch rhe the

mayu:kab hai shaadi..agar papers k dino mai hoge to tum akeel chle jana

maa:mayu..jwoh tere shaadi ka keh rhe the

mayu:shaadi?maa tumhe pta hai na mai yeh sab

maa:mayu mene toh unhe keh diya k toh kal ladki se mile ga

mayu:maa kal aur ek dam ladki se milna

maa:toh baat shaadi tak kese pohnche ge

mayu:humne aaj tak baat tak nhe ki..aur milna

maa:ley agar tujhe baat krne hai toh ami abhi mila k dete hona

mayu:maa mjhe kese ladki se baat nhe krne

mayu:maa tum smjhte kyun nhe?

maa:mei sab smjhte ho aur toh us se baat krega tujhe mere qasam

mayu:maa yeh kya

maa:mera acha mayu

she dials da no.yeh ley baat kr..

mayu:pr mai kaho ga kya

mjhe us ka naam bhi nahi pta

maa:nupur naam hai... baat kr ab

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suddenly da phone bell rings

nupz:gunjan yeh phne utha na yeh mere raj k scene me arha hai

gunji:di tum bhi na

gunji picks da phone up

gunji: hello

mayu on da other side

mayu:hello..

maa:baat kr...

mayu:nupur hai..

gunji:ek second........dii tumhra phone

nupz:kon hai gunji..

gunji:pta nhedi tumhe bola rha hai

nupz:ufoh..uday bhiya zara still kijye ga

nupz cumz to phone :kis ka hoga

nupz:hello..

mayu:hello

mayu:nupur

nupz:jee ab agar aap btane ka kasht krege k aap kon hai?

mayu:mai mayank

nupz:oh mayank jee...kon mayank

mayu:shilpa sharma ka beta

nupz thinkz k woh shilpa her morena neighbours shifted to mumbai mnth b4

nupz:arre shilpa aunty....kese hai woh/

mayu:theek

nupz:koi kaam tha

mayu:nahi

nupz:toh phir mai phoen rkho

mayu:han

nupz shut da phone........and says:ajeeb beta hai shilpa aunty ka

and shouts:uday bhiya.......... lgaye na

mayu shuts da phone

maa:kya kaaha us ne..

mayu:kch nhe

maa:kch nhe..mayu toh bhi ajeeb hai jo baat krne the kre kyun nhe

mayu:maa wwoh 8us ne kha me phone rkho toh mene kaha han

maa:arre jab phone pr koi baat nhr krta toh kon baat krega

maa:aur wese bhi ab woh khud toh baat krne se rhe..

mayu:maa mene tumhe kaha tha na mjh se yeh sab nhe hota pr tum mere sunti kaha ho............

and leaves

maa:baaat to mai tujh se kra k rho ge...akhir tere maa ho...

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HOPE U ALLL LYKDA STRTING I WUD CNTINUE SOON ITZ MY OWN MAYUR KAHANI...AND HOPE TO END IT SOON................TO KEEP IT SHRT AND INTERESTING

Edited by laviza97 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

very cute dear,,,.....do continue soon..........

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Posted: 15 years ago

its gr8 starting

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haya

@laviza97

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Posted: 15 years ago

chapter 2

nupur iz watching da film and da film ended

uday bhiya:yeh pyaar kitna yumy hota hai na burger ki mayonaise se bhi zyada haina nupur

nupur:han uday bhiya uar raj aur simran ka pyaar toh sab se alga hau..

dia:i dream mere bhi lovestry aisse he ho...so sweet hena

nnupz:yeh toh har ladk chte hai

dey gives a smile to each other

uday bhiya:sees bth of dem smiling..on dere own

uday bhiya:goes to dia and shouts in his ear

uday:diaaaaaaaa

dia:dodo......itne zor se kyun chila rhe ho

nupz:kya hau uday bhiya

dodo:actuly di jese mai pizza ki yummmy cheese ko dekh kr us k khayolon mai kho jata hao wese abhi tum dono bhi use smilek sath khoi hoyethe

dia:shut up dodo apne kahae k ingredients ki list sunana band kro...

nupz:uday bhiya aap bhi

she yawns

nupz:wese uday bhiya mjeh neend bht arhe hai mai sone jarhe ho

dia:gudnyt sweety

nupz:gudnyt dia gudnyt uday bhiya

dia:leaves

dodo:di....nupur...wese neend toh mjhe bhi bht arhe hai............

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dey all r sleeping

and now itz morning alarma rings

nupur:arre gunji yeh bnd krna abhi sone dey

gunji :alarm bnd kr k wakes up and sits on da bed

gunji leaves her bed and strt geting ready

and cums to nupz:dii .diiiii

nupz:sone dey na gunji.

gunji:di 10 baj gey hai aur wese bhi aaj first lecture shukla sir ka hai aur tumhe pta hai na .utho na di................

nupz:sees gunj.. and smiles :toh aisa kr to ja me ajao ge

gunji:di..utho and removes hr blanket chlo di jao ready hojao mai tumhre liye nashta bnate ho

nuz:uf gunji...to bhi na...she leaves her bed and mves 2wrds washroom

gunji:di bhi na.........

she leaves da room :uday bhiya.....................diaaaaaaa

by her voice uday bhiya ka bread ka piece gir jata hai

gunji:uday bhiya aap yahan hai aur dia kahan hai/

uday bhiya:dekho gunji ek toh tum ne uday bhiya bola aur dosra itne zor se bola aur mera bread bhi gir adiya

gunji:oh sry uday bhiya..........me apko naya bna dete ho...pr btaye na dia kahan hai?

dia cums:kya hau gunji?mjhe kyun dhond rhe ho?

gunji:arre dia woh mene tum se pochna tha k

uday bhiya:oho gunji..mera bread

gunnji:jee uday bhiya............dia mene tumhra nashta bna diya tha ..tum ne ley liya..mjhe kitchen me nhe dek hrha

dia:nahi sweety mai toh abhi aye ho.....she sees dodo......

dia:dodo ..tumne mera nashta kr liya

udya bhiya:nahi di mene toh ek bchare sandwhich ko khane k liye mo diya

gunji:uday bhiya aap bhi

dia..gives an angry luk to uday

gunji:koi nhe dia mai aur bna dete ho

dia:thnx

gunji:yeh lijye apka bread aur jam.....dia tum betho mai abhi aye....

dia:hmm...

she sits on da table

nupur :gunjan mera nashta ley aya

gunji:abhi aye di

dia:gudmrning nupur

nupz:gud mrning

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mayank and maa scene

mayu:mai ja rha ho...

maa:bye mayu....jaldi ana

mayu:kyun?

maa:aaj tujhe milne jana hai

mayu:maa mene pehle kaha hai me milne nhe jaoga mjhe is tarah ladkion se ilna pasand nhe

maa:mayu tu jaye ga

maayu:mai nhe jaoga

maa:mayu

mayu:maa

maa:theek hai...toh phir mai use yahan bula lo ge

mayu:maaa tum kese ko neh bulao ge

maa:toh phir toh jayega

mayu:maa..me ja rha ho aur tum bhi ofice jao..aur yeh sab k bare mai mat socho..

maa:tere ma ho kese neh socho ge..mayu..baat tho sun

mayu:bye maa

maa:mayu

..yeh ladka bhi na

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nupur gunji uday bhiya and dia enters da college

dia :guyz mjeh thora kaam hai so class me milte hai

gunji :bye dia

nupz:bye

dey r walking in da coridoor

nupur:gunji yeh class kitne dor bnaye hai na princi ne

uday bhiya:aur canteen bhi

nupz :HMM

suddenly a ball cums on nupz

she turns and holds da ball

and moves to basket ball court

she sees samrat :mene neh benji

benji:arre yaar toh

.mai nahi nupur woh ma

nupz:aaj tak nupur bhushan ko morena mai kese na ankh nahi mari aur tumne mjhe pora ka pora ball mara

nupz:tumhre toh

benji runs and nupz run after him

gunji and uday bhiya cums to samrat

samrat:aaj toh benji gya

gunji:dii ................aur benji ki ladaye kabhi khatam nhe hoskte

gunji receives a call 4rm a wrong no.she dint recieve da call

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suddenly princi announces

sare log basket ball court mai jama hojaye principle sahab ne baat krne hai.

samrat:lo

uday:yeh princi bhi na ab phir adha ghanta ley ley gai

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nupz:tumhre toh mai benji roku

suddenly woh mayank se takra jate hai..

mayank holda her:sanbhal k

nup:hmm

benji strts laughing seeing her

nupz give him an angry luk and he put his finger on hsi lips cntrling his laugh

nupz:sry

mayu:no problem

nupur runs to benji

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hope u all lyk da 2 ch too..i promise to complete it in one week

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neetu

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Posted: 15 years ago

update soon dear...........i am waiting.......

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Posted: 15 years ago

wow nice parts continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

i really love your part 1 and 2 plzzz add me to your PM list plzzzzzzzzzz

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haya

@laviza97

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Posted: 15 years ago

chapter 3

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princi :toh excel college k students

princi:jesa ka aap sab jante hai k humre basket ball team ko finals mai select kr liya gya hai toh mjhe apni team k liye ek honhar aur qabil captian chye

princi:jese k pechle saal yeh zimadri humre excel clg k student samrat shergil ne nibhaye the aur hume trophy bhi jetwai the is saal

samrat bcmz confident to go to princi as he thoguht k wohi capt bne ga

princi:pr is saal aisa nhe hoga

samrat bcmz sad...

princi:is saal hum ek aur capt hoga

samy:pr kon

benji:sir samrat se acha basket ball player humre clg me nhe hai

princi:nahi hai pr a toh skte hai..in fact woh agya hai

benji:kon

princi:i wud lyk to call MR.MAYANK SHARMA da new student of excel clg and our basket ball team capt

mayank enters da court

mayank and meets princi

mayank:mai aap sab ko promise krta ho k iss saal bhi aap logo ki hi trophy miley ge..excel clg iz da bst ...

samrat and every1 iz shock

princi:cum on cum on..guyz bck to ur classes...

aao mayank

samrat and gang in canteen

benji:yeh princi ne bilkul thee nhe kiya samrat ko chor k kise aur ko

gunji:samrat tum ais enirash na ho..kya pta woh bhi acha capt ho

samy:mjeh us k ache player hone nahone se koi prob nhe hai gunjan pr seedha capt...

dia:ryt guyz ..hume chl kr princi se baat krne chye yeh sab galat hai hum sab k sath aur samy k sath bhu

samy:nahi dia.....agar hum princi k paas jaye ge toh lgey ga k mai apne status ko ley kr da rha hao.....mjhe us ko apne se bura player prove krna hoga den automatically princi us ko capt .bnana toh dor team mai bhi nahi rkhey gai

and give a hi5 to benji

dia:pr kese?

samy:jus wait and watch

MR.MAYANK SHARMA hmm samrat shergil ko harana iz not dat easy

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nupur enters da canteen

nupur:hiii..tum sare yahan aur samrat yeh princi ne tumhe capt nhe bnaye is saal

gunji:tumhe kese pta chla

nupz:woh bahir logo ko baat krte hue suna

nupz:pr kyun?aur kon hai capt

dia:yup sweety princi ne kise new cumer ko capt bnaya hai bt hum bhi princi ko prove kr dey gai k samy iz da bst

nupz:han samrat tum dukhi mat hona....agar mai morena ki dancing queen ban skte h toh tum bhi excel clg k capt toh ban he skte ho

ever1 laughs

gunji:mere pyaar di and give her a hug

suddenly mayank enters da canteen wid princi

princi cums to da gang

princi:hello samrat.. yeh

mayank :hii i m mayank...mayank sharma

samrat:hi..............

princi:mai chta ho k mayank tumse seekhe k humre clg ki aaj tak kya strategy rhe hai take woh btr kr ske

samrat:sure sir

princi:mai chlta ho...bye mayank

mayu:bye sir

dia:hi i m dia..

uday:hi .uday

benji:hi

gunji:hi i m gunjan

nupz:mai nupur

mayu:hi........

mayu:wese samrat basket ball k bare mai batein toh hoti rehege pr tum mjhe yeh bta skte ho k libraray kahan hai

nupz:library?

mayu:han kyun?

nupz:nahi kch nhe

uday bhiya:actuly woh kya haina k yahan library khali teachers jate hai..

mayu:yani yahan students k liye library nhe hoti

nupz:ufoh in ka matlab hai k library mai students bht kam jate hai

mayu:oh....pr mjeh jana hai ..aap btao ge k library kahha hai..

nupz:han chlo na mai dekhate ho

dia straes nupz

mayu:hm chlo

dey bth leaves

nupur and he walks in da coridoor

mayu:library ache hai na

nupz:han..

mayank woh mjhe thora kaam tha class mai jane se pehle tum class mai jao mai ate ho han

mayu:hmm..no probz

nupz:hmm

she leaves

she enters da class and puts her bag on 1 chair

and suddenly mayank cums and puts his bag on chair nxt to her

nupz wants to say sumthing t shukla sir enters da class

dey take da lecture

together nupz gets bore wid her

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w8 4 nxt ch

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hena

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice part dear......bt heyyyy!!!! u r writing my name hena....😆 .i am happy 4 dat though....

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey luvly os... plz update fst n plz add me 2 ur pm list.......... thnx........😊

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