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@laviza97

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

hey actullu i m hospitalized.i.a.....may be in 1 week update krdo .............

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haya

@laviza97

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

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nupur:ek bar bauji bhi

gunji:di kis ka phone hai

nupz try to hide 4rm gunji

nupz:wrong no..bye mayu mai tumse kal baat kroge........

mayu:bye..

nupz:gudnyt

mayu:gudnyt

dey bth shut da pone

and dere love stry begins

dono ko awaz sun kr ek ajeeb se feeling hoti hai..........

nupu:mene keh to diya k mai kal baat kroge aur phir decide krge pr bauji to 3 weeks baad ayege..mai akele..mjhe bauji se baat krne hoge

pr bauji pareshan hojayege k achanak milne ki jaldi......mai bauji ko is k bare mai kch neh btao ge

mayu:woh bhi is sab k liye tyar nhe hai.mrer tarah...pr maa ko kon smjhaye

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itz morning now

maa:mayu uth

mayu:uth rha ho bas 2 min

maa:koi 2 min nhe uth na tujhe nupur k sath bahir bhi jana hai

he sits on hsi bed

mayu:maa mene tumhe kaha na mai nhe miloga

maa:mayu to milega.........us ko phone gaya raat ko

mayu:han aur us ne bhi kah k woh abhi ready nhe hai\

maa:toh tu us ko ready kr dekh mayu mai us se bht mile ho...aur woh bht ache ladki hai......isiliye jitne jaldi hoske kr ley

mayu:maa?

maa:mayu......aur us ne raat ko jo bhi kha ho toh use dobaara phone lga aur use kisi beach pr bula ya hotel mai

mayu:maa tum kch smjhte nhe ho

maa:sab smjhte ho mai...ab chl phone lga..usko phone pkrate hai.lga na aise kya dek hrha hai lga

mayu:maa tum bhi

maa:mere mayu chl to phone lga ami bahir ho

mayu:he dials da no..and maa leaves

every1 iz on table...takin break fast

phone rings

nupz reading magazine.us=day bhiya iz bsy wd his food

nupz:shouts.uday bhiya phone

uay:kya hai nupz..tum utha lo abhi mjhe mere sandwhich k sath bsy rehen do.......

nupz:pehle phone

uday bhiya:ufoh..lazy girls in da house

uday bhiya picks da phone

uday :hello

mayu:hello nupur hai

uday:nahi sandwhich hai ..

mayu:kya?

uday:nhe mera matlab ek sec

uday:tumhra phone

nupz:kon hai?

uday picks da phone again to ask nupz think:kahi mayank ka toh nhe

she shouts:uday bhiya roke

uday bhiya:ek sec..nupu ek toh tumne uday bhiya bola aur dosra tne zor se bola...it hurts.....he asks mayu:itz uday here whoz dere?

mayu:mayank..

uday;mayank..

he shouts mayank

and runs to table

nupz:uday bhiya ?

nupz pick phoen up

nupz:hello mayank

mayu:hi nupur

mayu:yeh kon tha?

nupz;yeh woh uday bhiya...

uday stares her

nupz;bhiya the

mayu:hmm........

nupz:kya hua kch kaam tha?

mayu:han woh maa chte hai k hum aaj aur abhi miley..

nupz:abhi..p mene bauji se

mayu:mjhe pta hai mai smjhta ho maa nhe maan rhe...yeh maa bhi na

nuzp:koi nhe..hum mil ley gey...pr kahan?

mayu:jahan jana caho

nupz:abhi toh mai c;g ja rhe ho..us k baad kahi jayege

myau;mai bhi clg jane wala tha...

nupz:aisa krte hai k hum beach pr miltey hai...wahan easily baat hojayege aur outing bhi

mayu:nice idea..5 baje done

nupz:nahi mayu 5 baje tora late hai 2 bje ka kesa rehega?

mayu:no probz

she smiles

nupz:toh phir bye

mayu:bye

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gunji cums to table:kya hau di?kis ka phone tha?

nupz:woh wrong no. tha

gunji:tum itne dair se wrong no se milne ki baat kr rhe the

dia:sab thee tho hai na nupur

nupz:han han sab theek hai....tum log bhi na chlo nashta krte hai

gunji feels k koi prob toh hai

gunji asks her again:pr di

nupz:pr w chor an gunji..mjhe clg mai kch kaam hai mai chlte ho tum sab ajan a bye

she runs

gunji:di nashta..di suno

nupz leaves

dia:nupz kch ajeeb tarah act kr rhe hai..koi prob hai gunji?

gunji:pta nhe dia..............di ko kya hogya hai

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dey all in lg

nupz meet mayank in clg

mayu:hi kese ho?

nupz:theek tum kese ho?

mayu:theek...aur ab tabiyat kese hai

nupz:theek.........

mayu:apna kahayl rkha kro

nupz:han..smiles

mayu smiles

mayu:thinks(agar mai nupz ko aaj apne sath beach lejao toh woh nupz bhi koi prob feel nhe krege.)akele hum dono

nupz;kch kha

mayu:tum mere sath beah chlo ge

nupz:shock k beach pr toh woh us mayu k sat hjane wale the

mayu:ne imean mene aaj wahna apni frend se ilne jna tha toh tum bhi chlo outing hojayege

nuzp:nahii..

mayu:kyun?kya hua?

nupz:woh aaj mjhe bhi kahe jana hai..

mayu:oh..no probz....

dey bth leaves 4 class and goes bck

gunji:di kya hau tum kaha ja rhe ho

in canteen

nupz:woh gunji mjeh ghar jana hao tabiyat ajeeb se horhe hai toh agla lec attend kr k ajaye theek hai

gunji:kya hau di?doc k lechlo?

nuzp:nahi..ghar rest kroge toh btr hoga to lec ley

gunji:hmm di..apna kahayl rkhna

npz:hm..bye

says bye to every1..

al gang:bye nupur

alll r bsy in dere gossiping

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nupz iz gettin ready 4 beach....

ayu calls:hi nupur:

nupz:hello mayank

mayu:kese ho?

nupz:mai theek ho?tum?

mayu:theek

mayu:tum tyaar hogye

nupz:han bas hone wale the

mayu:oh..woh mai beach k liye nikal rha tha tumhe ley lo?

nupz:nahi mai ajao ge

mayu:ohk..jaldi ana..bye

nupz:bye

dey shus da phoneagain

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keep waiting 4 dere bech date

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Part 1

wowow so Mayu's mom wants Mayu to get married

and on the other hand Nupur watching DDLJ

lol

n then he calls her and then they talk a little

so before Nupur's neighbor waz Shilpa aunty

just love this part to the core!

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Part 2

wow just love this part

Mayank in Mumbia and then he meets Nupur

n they become friend na !!
greatt

wanna know what will happen next

amazing part again

-Lina-

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

part 3

Sammy , Gunjan , Uday Dia and Nupur all friendzz in collage

awsome n Mayur in the library

n Nupur bore with him during lectures!

lol

do cont soon n do add me in ur pm list na !
-Lina-

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Part 4

just love this part too !!
love how Nupur fells on Mayu

when Majan talking

and the beach part wazz amazinGGG!!

wanna read the next part

do cont soon na !

-Lina-

Edited by rkmnsg - 15 years ago

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Part 5

amaizng part na !!
totally love it to the core!!
how Mayu calls her to meet her

and then she meets him in the collage

and I wish that they like each other soon !!

n later he calls her to meet him in the beach !!!

uffffff

can't wait to read the next part

do cont soon na

-Lina-

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haya

@laviza97

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

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mayu:ON DA BEACH WAITING 4 NUPUR he iz standing beside a icecream wala.. he asks 4 1 icecream..suddenly he sees nupz ..nupz wearing white choridaar wid pink and red wrk on it..lukin awesum.... mayu keeps lukin her nupz sees mayu:mayank?yahan is beach pr.......kahi yeh apni dost mayu:nupz yahan mere liye ...sweet.. mayu goes to nupz:hi..tum yahan kese? maere liye aye ho?thnku so mch nupur tum duniya ki bst frend ho.. nupz:hm..sou tou mai ho..pr mai ne socha k tumhre help kr he do...she tries to hide k woh yahn phone wale mayu se milney aye hai... mayank..tumhre frend nhe aye?

mayu:bas ati hi hoge..pta nhe kha rehgaye...

nupz:hmm.....

mayu:itne dair icecream khate hai..

nupz:hmm..

dey move to icecream wala..

dey bth take icecream n sit on a bench ....

nupz:tum apni dost se milne k liye itna ghbra kyun rhe ho..

mayu:woh...

he tries to hide 4rm nupz..

mayu:woh kay hai na woh bht sweet hai aur bht chulbali bhi pr bht gusa bhi krte hai and imagines of nupur talkin to her scenes

aur kabhi bilkul darpok se ban jate hai..kabhi jhansi ki rani.........

nupz:toh..tum us se dar rhe ho..

mayu:woh hum itne tm baad mil rhe hai toh mene socha tumhe bhi us se milwa lo......

nupz:??hmm

she cudnt understand mayank

mayu:nupur tumhre liye ladki ki shaadi ki age kya hone chye da pefect age 4 marriage

nupz:jab pyaar ho dats da perfect age

mayu:pr phir bhi

nupz:dekho na mayu..jab pyaar ho toh apka dil apk bas mai neh hota aur bas phir bhagna chup chup kr milna aur yeh sab se acha hai na k jab tak ghar walo ko pta chla us se pehle he shadi hojaye

mayu:thnk god..tum baqi ladkion jese neh ho jo shaadi se pehle is sab ko pasand krte hai itz so filmy na

nupz:dekho mr.mayank whateva...har ladki ki tarah mjhe bhi yeh sab bht pasand hai yeh sab kitna cute romantic hai .............aur filmy pyaar har ladki ka khawaab hai

mayu:toh tumne kyun kha k is se pehle shaad kr lene chye

nupz:ufoh budhu..mera matlab tha k is sab ka ghar walo ko pta chlne se phle.........

phir filmy ladaion mai ladki ki zindagi aur ladke ki zindagi sab khatam hojate hai..

aur yeh sab galat hai..

hena?

mayu:hm..thinks in heart(uff..yeh ladkian kitan bolti hai hope woh nupz aise na ho)

nupz:kch kha tumne?

mayu:tumne kch suna?

nupz:nahi..

mayu:toh mene bhi kch neh kha

after 1 hr

nupz;mayu bht late hogya hai tumhre dost pta nhe kab ayege she thinks in hear(aur woh mayank bhi..jab milna nhe tha toh bulaya kyun)

mayu:hm......(jab milna neh tha toh han kyun kah?ab maa ko kya khoga use toh lagey ga k mai jaan kr us se nhe mila)

nupz:toh phir mai jao..

mayu:mai chor deta ho..bht late hojayega ghar pohnchte hue)

nupz:nahi koi nhe 30 min toh lage ga mai pohnch jao ge..

mayu:ohk..bye

nupz:tum apni dost ka wait kro phir....

mayu:nahi mai bhi chlta ho...woh shayad na aye...............

nupz:shayad bsy hoge..

mayu:hmm..

nupz:bye..

mayu:bye

nupz leaves

mayu reaches home

maa:opens da door

maa:mayu.keselage nupur

mayu;as maa opens da door mayu ko lag jate hai

mayu:bht zor ki

he goes inside

maa:yani rishta pka smjho..

mayu:maa..rishta...

he tries to hide k woh nupz se mila he nhe

mayu:bht jaldi hoga..ek do aur meetings k baad decide kre toh btr hoga na

maa:hm..pr phir bhi mai baat toh kr lo na

mayu:abhi nhe maa............

maa:pr mayu

mayu goes in his room

maa:is ladke ka mai kya kro..

mayu enters his room

apne bed pr lait jata hai

mayu:nupur kyun neh aye hoge?woh mjh se milna neh chte?

mjhe us se phone rkna chye kya pta koi prob hoye ho

nupz pick up da phone

nupz in her room

nupz:hello

mayu:hello nupur hai?

nupz:mai nupur aap mayank

mayu:han..

nupz:kese ho?aur aap aaj aye nhe beach pr koi problem?

mayu:problem?beach?mai toh gya tha pr aap he nhe aye

nupz:pr mene toh apka 1 hr intezzar kiya phir ghar agye

mayu:yani hum dono gye pr ek dosre ko pehchaan nhe paye

nupz;strts lafing..

nupz:han....milne phonch gye pr ek dosre ko pehchana gai kese yeh toh socha he nhe

mayu:laughs...toh aap bhi mera wait krte rhe aur whan mai yeh soch rha tha k shayad aap milna nhe chte

nupz:smiles..agle baar pehle decide kr ley gai k ek dosre ko kese pehchaane

mayu:hm.maa toh apk bauji se baat krna chte the

nupz:nahi unhe roke abhi bauji se baat ek dam bina humre miley

mayu:toh phir hum phir kab miley gai

nupz:kal..kal sunday hai toh sunha he mil ley gai

mayu:pr kaha

nupz:aap k ghar take mai apki maa se bhi mil lo..

mayu:hmm theek hai phir kal pka

nupz:mjhe apne ghar ka address dijye ga

she notes his adress

nupz:mai subha ajao..

mayu:hm..11 bje tak

nupz:hm..bye

mayu:bye

dey bth sleeps

nxt morning

maa:mayu uth na mjhe jana hai mai ja rhe ho uth k nashta kr lena

mayu:bye maa hez on his bed us ko yeh khayal he nhe ata k nupz ane wale hai

maa leaves

mayu cums in his siting room:maa

no reply

mayu:maa?oh no maa toh chle gye nupur?

mayu:oh shit

nupz gettin ready

phone rings

she thinks k mayu hoga she runs and picks up da phone

nupz:hello mayank

itz bauji

bauji:mayank

bauji:mai bauji baat kr rha ho nupur

nupur:oh bauji..kese hai aap?

bauji:mai toh theek ho tum kese ho aur gunjan?

nupz:hum dono theek hai bauji.aap btaye

bauji tells nupz k aaj woh morena ki shilpa aunty us ko dekhne arhe hai

nupz:pr bauji us en toh aaj mjhe apne ghar bulaya tha

bauji:apne ghar pr abi shilpa ka mjhe phone aya k woh humre ghar

nupz:bauji..mere raat ko mayank se khud baat hoya hai

bauji:mayank ka .........acha toh tu phir aesa kr k toh chli ja............mai shilpa se khud baat krloga..wese bhi woh abhi ghar he hoge

nupz:phir mai nhe jati bauji agar abhi phone aya toh phir woh log ate hogey

bauji:dekh ley agar woh log 12 baje takagye toh theek wrna mjhe phone kr k bta dena

nupz:jee bauji

bauji:nupur yeh sab sanbhal lena

nupz:jee

bauji:aur han ek baat yaad rkhna k mai us ki aur tere marzi se shaadi krao ga...ek tarfa shaadi nhe chye mjhe..mere liye mere betiyon ki khushi se barh kr kch nhe

nupz:jee bauji

bauji:ab mai rkhta ho

nupz:bye bauji

nupz phone rkh dete hai

she waits pr un mai se koi nhe ate bcz last moment pr shilpa aunty k hubby yani morena wale shilpa aunty k hubby jo morena mai ho un k itabiyat bht kharab hoti hai so dey all goes dere

bina bauji and nupz ko btaye

nupz wait till 1..pr koi nhe ata

she tries bauji no pr bauji dint pick up da phone

suddenly bui ka phone ata hai...........

bui:nupur beta kese ho

nupz:bui.aap kese hai........?

bui:tum dono behnein toh mjhe bhol he gye mumbai ja k

nupz:nhe bui mai apko kese bhol skte ho mere pyaari bui

bui:bas bas ab bui ko makhna lgana bnd kr...........aur yeh bta k ab tum dono morena kab arhe ho tum dono k bina yahan kch nhe hai sab suna suna hai

nupz:bui................mere bui hum jaldi ayege bas smjh lo agle hafte........friday se humre chutian hai phir hum tere pass

bui:pka nupur

nupz:pka bui.love u bui