MN & SG FF: Kyun? Promo @ Pg 139 - Page 22

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesoooooooooome..........
superb.........
fantabulous..........
excellent.........
wonderful.........
just too good........
and thanx for the pm.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
i duuno everytime i read this story i become sad at the end...plzzzz hun make everything perefct soon.i cant stand mayank loving gunjan.😡continue soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awww I love this part to the core!!
have no wordzz for it!!
n soo sad Gunjanz
dad passed away:(
anywayzz the precape is interesting na
wonder wat happend with Mayur
do cont soon
waiting for Mayur's story
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg Daksha... Mayank's Dad is so evil... i am on Mayur side but still felt bad for Gunjan...
and mayank's dad is gonna get Nupur hurt?😲 i hope Mayu saves her and then they take care of each other.. can't wait for them to get closer.. and i hope Mayu finds out how evil his dad is..
continue soon.. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank you......Thank you very much for your kind comments......I really appreciate each one of them......but sorry I dont get much time to reply each one individually......Keep loving the story like this and keep encouraging me by your comments.......
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Morning Time.....Its Nupur sleeping calmly on the bed.......Mayank got up......now his morning starts by seeing Nupur's face......but he never took notice of her....he is just thankful to Nupur for whatever she is doing for him and Gunjan......he wants her to live comfortably in this house for "two months"......afterall at the end of the day she is his friend......he rumbled his eyes and picked up the mobile phone from side table.......dialled Gunjan's number......since last two days he hasn't talked to her......phone was saying Switched off.......

Gunjan now is alone in the hospital.......her dried tears have made a white line down her cheeks......she has now become a living statue......hospital staff handed over her her Dad's body.....she is just a girl and didn't knew what to do.....so she took the body to electric cremating ground and burnt his body in the electric cremator.......she don't know anyone whom she can call or take help from......broken from every angle Gunjan reached her house......she washed her face with water and went to her Dad's room.....then door bell rang.......

Mayank went outside his room......his mother was sitting in the lobby.....

MM: Beta.....Nupur se kehna tum dono ko mandir jaana hai ek puja ke liye......

M: Kya maa.....char din se shaadi ki rasmein ho rahi hain...... (and he puts his head in his mom's lap)

MM: Beta....ye tere aur Nupur ke sukhi jeewan ke liye hai.....tum dono ko jaana hai aadhe ghante mein.......

Gunjan went to open the door......lawyers were there.....one of the lawyer said..... "Aapke paas aadhe ghante ka samay hai aapko ye ghar aadhe ghante mein khaali karna hai"

"Par main..... main kahaan jaaungi.....aap mujhe thoda aur samay deejiye...." Gunjan said

"Hum kuch nahin jaante....humein ye property seal karne ke orders miley hain...." he said

Gunjan was very said...she felt lonely....helpless....she could do nothing to save her house.....she was moving when a lawyer interrupted......

"Ye mobile credit card par liya hua hai.....aapko ye bhi humein dena hoga"

Gunjan gave the mobile phone to the lawyer.....she went inside her room packed her clothes....Mayank's photo and his Dad's photo and diary.....and came out of the house......

Mayank came inside the room till then Nupur got ready......

"Main tumhein bohot pareshaan kar raha hoon na Nupur" Mayank said...

Nupur looked at Mayank and smiled and said "Kyun....main tumhaari dost itna nahin kar sakti tumhaare liye"

"Kyun.....issi sawaal ka jawaab toh nahin mill raha......Maa itni khush hai humaari shaadi se.....main unhein kaise bataaunga ki unki bahu tum nahin Gunjan hai....." Mayank said.....

Mayank's words pierced Nupur's heart.....but she smiled and said "Koi baat nahin Mayank.....sab theek ho jaayega"

After a minute's silence Mayank said "Wo maa ne kaha hai....humein mandir jaana hai.....tum neeche chalo....main abhi aata hoon"

Nupur was sitting in the car when Mayank came.....he sat on driver's seat and drove away for the temple.......

Samrat in his house was sitting in the balcony and reading the newspapaer....his eyes stopped at the headline...... "Business sealed Malhotra died due to brain damage"

Samrat read the whole story......he was shocked.....he took his bike and drove it straight to Malhotra Mansion"

Mayank and Nupur were inside the temple......Nupur was praying in front of the God..... "Bhagwaan...Mayank ko har khushi dena.....usse aur Gunjan ko jald se jald mila dena...aur kuch nahin chahiye mujhe"

Mayank was looking at Nupur's serene face.....purity was reflecting....Nupur opened up her eyes.....she saw Mayank was looking at him.....she felt very uncomfortable.......

"Kya maanga bhagwaan se" he said

"Bataate thodi na hain.....phir bhagwaan ji poori thodi na karte hain" she said and they came out of the temple and reached to their car.....

"Mujhe bata sakti ho....main bhagwaan se tumhaari setting karwa doonga" Mayank said that and smiled......

Nupur was about to sit in the car when a biker hit her hard on her head.....she lied flat on the road.....

Biker turned back from the distance.....and two other came and one of them took out a knife to pierce it into Nupur's body......

He was about to pierce it when Mayank stopped him by holding the knife by the blade side.......Mayank's blood was dropping from the knife's edge......he punched into that man's face with his another hand......he got a jerk and fell to another side.....two other men came and they started a fight......they were strong with weapons......they hitted Mayank hard and broke his right hand.....and then his leg.......Mayank became fully wounded.....his shirt became red because of the blood......

Those men came to Nupur to kill her.....then the goons head arrived.....

"Abe saalon.....boss ke bete ko maarne ki kya zaroorat thi.....humein iss ladki ko khatam karne ka order mila tha....."

In a moment crowd gathered around wounded Mayank and unconscious Nupur.....

Bikers felt that its not the right moment to kill Nupur so they left on their bikes.......

Till then Samrat reached Malhotra Mansion......Gunjan was standing outside the house......with her bag in one hand standing directly under the sun.......

Samrat could see the pain in Gunjan's eyes......he went near her.....

"Gunjan......Gunjan......" Samrat shook her by holding her shoulder.......

Gunjan came out to the reality...... "Haan....haan....Samrat tum...."

"Mujhe sab pata chala Gunjan....." he said......

She saw him and said "Mujhe Mayank se baat karni hai abhi......abhi"

"Theek hai Gunjan......" he said

Samrat dials Mayank's number and gives it to Gunjan......

The cell was ringing inside the car and Mayank was lying outside on the road groaning with pain.......

After many tries......a member from the crowd picked up the phone......

"Hello.....hello.....Mayank" she said desperately.......

"Ji shayad jinka ye phone hai......unko hospital le gayye hain" he said....

"Kya hua Mayank ko....." Gunjan said

"Unhe kuch gunde maar rahe the" he said......

Before he could say anything else......phone dropped from Gunjan's hand....and that paper of warning started flashing around her eyes......the phone which she got.......started sounding in her ears...

She sat on the floor "Pehle mere Dad aur ab Mayank......bhagwaan tum kyun mere saath aisa kar rahe ho......kyun......kyun....." and she fainted on the road......

Samrat jerked her and made her come to her senses......

"Pehle tum ghar chalo.....phir aaraam se baat karenge" he said.....

He then took Gunjan to his house.......

In the hospital everyone arrived....... Mayank's Dad and Mom.......

Mayank was very critical......Nupur didn't got much hurt but she was unconscious....

Outside Mayank's ward.....Mayank's mom was crying......

"Maine kaha tha aapse ek din aapki gunda gardi ki wajah se mere bete ki jaan jaayegi.....aur aaj dekho usse...." Mayank's mom said this to Mayank's Dad.....she thought that this happened because of Mayank's dad rivalry but actually indirectly it was him only because of which Mayank was lying on the bed of hospital......

In few minutes Nupur gained consciousness.....Mayank's mom came inside......her eyes were red because of crying.....

MM: Ab kaisa lag raha hai Nupur beta......

N: Main....main theek hoon.....aur ye hospital mein......yahaan.....yahaan kaise.....

MM: Tum par kuch gundo ne hamlaa kiya tha......

Before she could say anything else.....

N: Mayank.....Mayank kahaan hai....wo theek toh hai na.......

MM: Mayank bohot critical hai....usse abhi tak hosh nahin aaya hai......

N: Kya......

And Nupur gets up from the bed.......she said "Mujhe Mayank se milna hai"

"Beta tumhaaari tabiyat theek nahin hai.....tum aaraam karo" Mayank's Mom said......

"Meri tabiyat..... mujhe kuch nahin hua hai.....Mayank theek toh hai na" she said and gets outside the ward.......

She reached nearby Mayank's ward......she was sneaking through the glass window.....Mayank was lying unconscious.....his head was wrapped with bandages......Nupur couldn't see him like this.....in a moment her eyes became wet.....she was crying.....

Mayank's mom was standing nearby......she saw Nupur crying and went to console her......

Samrat took bag from Gunjan's hand and took her inside his inside.....

"Tum yahaan aaraam se baitho" he said

Gunjan was not responding to anything......she went and quietly sat on the sofa.....

"Main tumhaare liye paani laata hoon" he said....

Gunjan started murmuring "Ye sab meri galti hai.....na main Mayank se shaadi karne ka sapna dekhti aur na aaj usski ye haalat hoti......main Mayank ki zindagi se bohot bohot door chali jaaungi.....bohot door.....bohot door" and she started crying again.....

Samrat came and consoled her......

"Gunjan sab theek ho jaayega.....tum zyaada pareshaan mat ho"

How you liked this part.....do tell me by your comments....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Daksha
first one to comment after longgggggggg time
loved ur update.
Mayur got hurt and mayank in critical condition.
and gunja- usne tou sab kuch kho dia.
good going daksha
too interesting
It was full of suspense.
awesome job.
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwsome part Daksha

Im loving the way you are taking the story full of suspense.....

I just hope Mayank gets well soon

do continue soon...

Luv
Nidzy~
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Posted: 15 years ago
Really Awesome update.I like you updating it without making us wait longggggggggggg.Please update next part soon.I am wondering what will Gunjan do next?
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Posted: 15 years ago
gripping part buddy! oh no....seems like everything's gone awry.....

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