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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Koi pal na guzare teri yaad ke bina yaara

Yeh dil toh hai tera deewana bechara

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15836

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Ussne poochna hum bhool gaye ke humara gunnah kya tha Humne toh pyar kiya tha, unnko woh gunnah lag gaya hai Jab unnke kareeb the, toh bichdne ka daar raha Jab unnse door ho gaye, bichdne ka dard hua Iss dil ne khush rehna na seekha Hamesha kuch na kuch laga pheekha

Kash woh beete hue din aa jaate wapis phir se

Iss baar har pal jee toh lehte ache se.....

Simran

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birju4baby

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ~*simran*~
Ussne poochna hum bhool gaye ke humara gunnah kya tha Humne toh pyar kiya tha, unnko woh gunnah lag gaya hai Jab unnke kareeb the, toh bichdne ka daar raha Jab unnse door ho gaye, bichdne ka dard hua Iss dil ne khush rehna na seekha Hamesha kuch na kuch laga pheekha
Kash woh beete hue din aa jaate wapis phir se

Iss baar har pal jee toh lehte ache se.....

Simran

Simran Jee aap to chuppi rustam neekli ..I knew you could write ..I visited your simran's creation corner recently.. very nice

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instantkhichdi

@instantkhichdi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ~*simran*~
Ussne poochna hum bhool gaye ke humara gunnah kya tha Humne toh pyar kiya tha, unnko woh gunnah lag gaya hai Jab unnke kareeb the, toh bichdne ka daar raha Jab unnse door ho gaye, bichdne ka dard hua Iss dil ne khush rehna na seekha Hamesha kuch na kuch laga pheekha
Kash woh beete hue din aa jaate wapis phir se

Iss baar har pal jee toh lehte ache se.....

Simran

Simmi ji aap to itna achha likhte ho....I would like to read more..
And ur creations at sher-shayari corner are simply gr8

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birju4baby

@birju4baby

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Finally I was able to compose something.I wanted to write something on Praveena.Do read this guys and comment ..Please Please Please....

India mein Mumbai ,Mumbai mein Parla , Parla mein Krishna Villa
Dug Dug Dhoonde apni Praveena Ko , ye Leela ..Leela .Leela
Oh Praveena tere bin mushkil ho gaya Praveen kaa Jeena Jeena Jeena ...

Silsala mein Amitaabh , Amitaabh kee heroine Rekha ..
Oh Praveena .. tune uttarran mein kyaa dekha dekha dekha ...
Baa Bahu Baby mein teraa role thaa kyaa Dhaansu..
Uttaran mein bahaaye Balti bhar ke aansoo aansoo aansoo

Oh Praveena tere bin mushkil ho gaya Praveen kaa Jeena Jeena Jeena ...

Fursat meele to chahe bhoot bann karr tu aana
Mitali bann gayee hain Airhostess aur Hawaa mein lagee hain urrne
Business mein teri jagah le lee hain Mehul Nein
Aur Chaitaliiii ka to kyaa kehna kehna ..

India mein Mumbai ,Mumbai mein Parla , Parla mein Krishna Villa
Oh Praveena tere bin mushkil ho gaya Praveen kaa Jeena Jeena Jeena ...

written in Hindi script ...
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Edited by birju4baby - 15 years ago

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instantkhichdi

@instantkhichdi

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

^^^OMG!!!!! 👏
Awesome..... 👍🏼 👍🏼
I cant describe in words, Its really nice....
Hindi script nahi aa payi kyonki I-F ab hindi support nahi karta..

You made my day....
I was so stressed out ..par iss poem se to achanak jaise meri battery charge ho gai
😃
things like this keep telling that BBB is immortal.

Edited by instantkhichdi - 15 years ago

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birju4baby

@birju4baby

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

thanks InstantKhicdi ....

It is really disappointing that IF does not support Hindi scripts as it is a forum to discuss Hindi Serials..I wanted to write in Hindi as I thought it would make more effect ...😔

Anyways I will try to think something else during weekend..