FEEL MY LOVE-arbi ff, updated part 03,pg 08

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I am thinking of writing another Arbi FF

Hope you like it!!!!!!!!!!

ARBI FF

LIFE- A four letter word which is a mixture of different feelings and emotions.It may be happiness,sorrow or anything else.......And one of the most important emotion or feeling that every one experiencesin there life is love.......

LOVE- It is a different feeling which everyone experiences atleast one in their life time....

every one loves atleast one person in their life with true heart.But there are only few couples who make their love success.The other luv stories have tragic ends...But there are also some type of love stories which succeed after tasting the failure..This is one such kind.

This is a story of two hearts which seperate due to circumstances and again come together in the game played by life...

FEEL MY LOVE

An Arbi FF

CHARACTER SKETCH
ARMAAN SINHA:
BHARTI KHANNA:
BHASKAR MALHOTRA:
PAYAL SINHA:
NIYATI CHOPRA:
ADITYA CHOPRA:
JIA SINHA:
SAMANTHA SINHA:
U will come to know about the characters as the story proceeds.......
And it is a story which has a present and a past.........
INTRO
In Shimla,
Out side a church,in which a marriage is being conducted,
a 28 years old man is sitting with a 6 years girl....
A girl is entering into the church with a long bridal dress...
She looked beautiful in that wedding attire....
Every one followed the bride except that person who sat on the chair and lost his thoughts!!!!!!Then that girl asked
girl:Dada! Why are we not going inside!!!!!
Man:we will go later bacha!!!
girl:plz dada
Man:okay Jia Bacha,go inside with payal aunty!!!!!
Jiya:Aap?
Man:I will come later!!!!
Jiya:ok
(she went inside with payal and the man immersed in his thoughts)
Man[to him self]:God!!!!!!!!!!why did you do this to me...You didnt give me the love of my life and you made me marry the girl who was shown by the girl of my life itself...And when I started loving my wife,U took her away!!!!!!!And now I am here to attend the wedding of the girl whom Iloved and trying to forget..Why are u doing this to me...???????
[tear rolled down his cheek when someone called him]
Bhaskar:Armaan!!! Come inside the marriage ceremony is started...
Armaan[wiped his tears]:ok
(went inside and sat in the Church.the pasteur was asking the bride after asking the groom and taking his consent)
Pasteur:Do you agree in marrying Peter?
Bride:No!!!!!!!!!
[every one was shocked. to listen that]
Peter:Why?
Bride:Because you are already married and u are trying to cheat me like other u did to othergirls
Peter:No!
Bride:Yes!!!!!!!!
[she showed the proofs of him marrying several girls and ran towards the door...But she stopped on looking Armaan and tears ran down her eyes]
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so guys!!!!!!!!
this was the intro!!!
Hope you like it.
Tell me if I should continue or not.....
love,
Harika
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Vedika.Kapoor thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#2
awsome FF. Plz do continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Harika new FF, Congratulations👏
start from the title, love everything about ur FF
and ur take on Life n Love...well done girl
characters and location are awesome too😃
what a start😍.....Armaan😭😭
i'm emotionally attached to ur ff now on
eager to know what happens next.....update soon🤗



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome FF dear...
Me loved the intro...
But please change sanjana or else I will not be able to concentrate on ArBI rather I will want her and Armaan together even if she is dead

Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heartiest Congratulations haaki.. for ur new FF 👏ClapClapClapClap n all the very best for the updates!!😛
Well m very excited to read ur character sketch.. especially that u brought in 'Ranvir' aka 'Kinshuk' & Sanjee❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
n well the intro epi is a bit sad.... after all Armu is weeping 😭😭😭 but m super excited to read ur epis..
Jaldi update karo... luv ya girl.. u rock..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PLEASE READ!!!
Actually I have a problem with the FF's character sketch and Haaki asked me to ask all of you if you all feel the same...
Actually the thing is that if Sanjeeda is paired against Aamir then I will never think of ArBi uniting as I would always want Aamir-Sanjeeda to be together even if the character of Sanjana is dead...
So please if you all have the problem or anyone who thinks as me feels free to say so that Harika can change the girl playing Sanjana Be for the FF starts...


Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Well as such i dun hv a problem wit Sanjee paired wit Aamir.. n Ragz too..aka Bharti..
but i agree Zoya.. me so dun want her to play the Dead girl.. no no... Aamir-Sanjee jiye hazaron saal.. luv them..❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zoya_01

<font color="#9933ff">Awesome FF dear...
Me loved the intro...
But please change sanjana or else I will not be able to concentrate on ArBI rather I will want her and Armaan together even if she is dead

Take Care
Zoya
</font>




Zoya and Haaki,

This is exactly I wanted to tell. Please don't bring Sanjeeda here, even if she is dead.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hmmm i think u should chang it haadika
i will also agre with zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zoya_01

<div align="center"><font color="#9933ff"><font size="7">PLEASE READ!!!
<font size="4">Actually I have a problem with the FF's character sketch and Haaki asked me to ask all of you if you all feel the same...
Actually the thing is that if Sanjeeda is paired against Aamir then I will never think of ArBi uniting as I would always want Aamir-Sanjeeda to be together even if the character of Sanjana is dead...
So please if you all have the problem or anyone who thinks as me feels free to say so that Harika can change the girl playing Sanjana Be for the FF starts...</font>

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</font><div align="left"><font color="#9933ff">Take Care
Zoya
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Zoya, exactly my words 🤗
Please Haaki, do this for us 😃

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