FEEL MY LOVE-arbi ff, updated part 03,pg 08 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
Great part Haaki..
Loving the flashback story inbetween...and Payal and Armu as siblings are just too cute...Loving that too..=) and yay! ArBi together for now during the flashbacks..😃 Love the fact that Bharti lives in the same building as Armaan...Carry on writing yea...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
nice part dear
sorry for the late comment
nice part but emotional😭 but its ok
will be waitiing for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
girl sooooo sorry for the late replay WOW Awesome part 🤗
very interesting love that Payal is Armaans Sis nice blackmailing Armaan for a mobile sooo cool & cute love the way you describe armaan seeing bharti for the 1st time that was very sweet 😍 continue sooon girl
loved it
take care
Naley

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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
thanx everyone for your comments and encouragement.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Awesome part dear
Loved it
Continue soon

Take Care
Zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
❤️❤️❤️FEEL MY LOVE❤️❤️❤️
part❤️02
Armaan:How do you know all this?
Payal:Girl talk
Armaan:Acha!!!!!!
Payal:yes I went to their house now and asked they told about them selves..But I saw the photo of Aditya and asked her.And Niyati told about him.but bhaiyya u dont know about Niyati?
Armaan:Aditya said that his girlfriend is Niyati but i didnt see her...
Payal:okay!!!!!!!!!Bhaiyya,Waise tum Bharti mein kaafi interested ho!!!!!!!!!!!!Chakkar kya hain???????huh?????
Armaan:Woh........
Payal: Woh hi toh......... tell me!!!!!!!
Armaan:Woh.........Its nothing!!!!!!!
Payal:Some thing is there!!!!!!A crush on her na?
Armaan:Payal,leave it........
Payal:No.....now watch me.......[she turned back towards the kitchen and started shouting]maa......Armaan bhaiyya has.........................
[Armaan closed her mouth and bought her outside]
he told her
armaan:I will take you to the mall to buy the watch......will you come or not......
Payal:yes!!!!!!!! but uske saath dresses bhi..
Armaan:What????????
Payal:Yes!!!!!!!!!
Armaan:No way!!!!!!!!!!
Payal:Maa!!!!!!!!!!
Armaan:okay meri maa......come lets go!!!!!!
Payal:okay my sweetu bro!!!!!!!!will be back after dressing in 2 min.......[she pinched Armaan's cheek and ran]
Armaan[thinking to himself]:God!!!!!!!!why do you give such sisters.......hmph......everything is fate.....let it be...
with in few minutes Payal came from her room and said........
Payal:lets go Armu bhaiyya!!!!!!!
armaan:okay,Chalo!!!!!!!!
Armaan took her to the Inorbit Mall and when Payal was browsing through Articles and dresses in the mall when Armaan saw a beautiful necklace which looks like this
He quickly took that and asked the helper to make a bill at the counter and also said that he will take it.........
After doing so he started to roam in the mall....while Payal was back, she saw him at the books section reading some books on love.....Payal asked him
Payal:Bhaiyya, What are you reading????
Armaan:Its lo.....[realised back and told]nothing......I was just seein it......hid the book back....
Payal:Acha!!!!!!then give it to me......
Armaan:No Payal!!!!!!!No, you are not going to do this!!!!!!
Payal:Yes I am doing this.......pulled the book from him and said......aha......LOVE MUST BE TOUGH......Bhaiiya!!!!from when you started reading books on love??????
Armaan:paayu!!!!!!I am not reading them
Payal:really?
Armaan:Yes!!!!!
Payal:swear on Bharti and tell.......
Armaan:yes!!!!hm...no!!!!!! Idiot Payal.....I am not going to leave you, he catched her and messed her hair.When Payal was about to say some thing, he got a call...Its from Aditya, when Armaan was about to attend the call,Payal snatched it from him and attended the call
Payal:Hiiiii Adi.Its me????
Aditya:Hi Payal darling!!!!!!How are you?????
Payal:I am perfectly alright but some one here is very weak....He has got a very dangerous disease and has a high temperature[armaan was trying to take the mobile away from her]
Aditya:kaun? Armaan?
Payal:yes
Aditya:What happened to him?
Payal:He has been attacked with Lovaria?
Aditya:What?
Payal:Yes!!!!Now his heart is beating in love-love-love and bharti-bharti-bharti kinda way.
Aditya:what? and who is this Bharti?????
Payal:Woh.......She is [but by this time Armaan took the phone and hit Payal hard on his shoulder...]
Armaan:Hello Adi?
Aditya:Yeh Bharti kaun hain?
Armaan:Bharti?No one
Payal shouted from the back
Payal:Tumhari girlfriend ki behan.........
Aditya:Niyati's sister??????
Armaan:Nahi.Payal.....😡u.......
Payal:okay Bhaiyya.....I am going to the food court..bye😉
Armaan:😡go.I am not going to pay the bill.....
Aditya:leave it na yaar!!!!!!!!!she is a small cute girl......
Armaan:u too feel that I will scold her.???Its nothing like that....
Aditya:so,,,,,,,
Armaan:So.......
Aditya:What about Bharti???????
Armaan:woh......woh......nothing dude!!!!!!!
Aditya:dont try to fool me and Payal....sach sach batao...
Armaan:okay!!!!!!I told you that we are shifting to a new house na??????
Aditya:yes!!!!!!!!!
Armaan:we shifted today!!!!! and there Niyati and Bharti are our Neighbours!!!!!!!!!!
Aditya:What?
Armaan:Yes!!!!!!!!narrated him the whole story how he saw bharti and all
Aditya:So, Are you In love?
Armaan: donno yaar!!!!!!!!!But i want to be with her always through out my life!!!!!!But I dont know whether it is love or not.......
Aditya:possessive already and congrats man!!!!!!you are in love!!!!!!!
Armaan:How do you know?
Aditya:just like that and you will never understand......Just accept that you r in love
Armaan:Are you sure?
Aditya:1000%
Armaan:okay!!!!!!!!!
Aditya:Yay!!!!!!!!my best buddy is in love.....Party!!!!!!
Armaan:okay...will give but after new year!!!!!!!alright?
Aditya:yes!!!!!!oh man shit!!!!!! I forgot.......There is a new year bash at POOLSIDE, LE ROYAL MERIDIEN...And our Prateek is giving a party....And so,u r gonna come there......And get Payal also...
Armaan:oh!!!!!!!! Sure!!!!!!
Aditya:okay I will keep the phone!!!!!!
Armaan:oh wait......Will you give me a miss call after 15 minutes......
Aditya:But why?
Armaan:woh........
Aditya:Again secret? shoot it out!!!!!!!!
Armaan:Actually I bought a necklace which is so beautiful and I dont want Payal to know that I bought it.....Thats why
Aditya:Is itfor Bharti?
Armaan:donno....may be!!!!!!!!
Aditya:okay I will do it
Armaan:okay c ya later...bye!!!!
Aditya:byee dude......hung up the phone...
Armaan went to the food court and he saw Payal who was eating noodles and drinking cola.......
He went and touched her hair gently and smiled...He asked
Armaan:Paayu!!!!!!do you want anything else?
Payal:nope...
after payal ate....Armaan asked her
Armaan:Shall we go!!!!!!
Payal:No!!!!!My shopping is not yet over!!!!will take half an hour more
Armaan:okay!!!!!!I too will get a shirt for me and u select a saree for maa too!!!!!!
Payal:Bhaiyya!!!!!1it takes a lot of time for me to do my shopping,only dresses are over, I need to get mobile and jewellery.And any ways u r good at selecting sarees for maa na......plzzzz do it....
Armaan:okay and one more thing......dont go any where day after tomorrow
Payal:31st
Armaan:yes!!!!!!!!!Prateek had organised a new year party
Payal:okies!!!!!!
armaan went and done the shopping....and he also messaged aditya telling him to give a miss call after some time....he also bought a pendant for Payal and thought to gift it on New Year day....After Payal was done with the shopping,Armaan paid the bill and they were about to go when Aditya gave a long missed call....Armaan excused himself and asked Payal to wait near the bike...As soon as Payal went there,Armaan went inside,bought both the necklace and pendant....He came to the bike and the both drove off home!!!!!!!!!
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so guys.....this was the update......hope you like it....... and plzzzzzz leave the comments....
love,
Harika
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
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*Edited*
Awesome part
So Armu is head over heels for Bharti
Great
Cant wait to read further
Continue soon

Take Care
Zoya
Edited by Zoya_01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
love this FF harika...payal and armaan are brothers and bharti is their neighbour...it sure is gonna be interesting...
pm me whenever you update next..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: amotlymileo

love this FF harika...payal and armaan are brothers and bharti is their neighbour...it sure is gonna be interesting...

pm me whenever you update next..

sure!!!!!!!! and thanx for liking the part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Me first one to comment
*Edited*
Awesome part
So Armu is head over heels for Bharti
Great
Cant wait to read further
Continue soon

Take Care
Zoya

yeah..Armu has fallen badly for Bharti.......
will continue soon

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