MJHT (MAYUR & SAJAN) FF 'Sirf Tum' Part 26 @ Pg139 - Page 89

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update........

mayank is so caring........

mayur rock...........

just want to kill that r.v.......

plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon......

sajan were cute too...............
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mind-blowing udate Daksha.

But you stopped on such a great point, dear.

RV standing? What is that? just imagination? or had he survive that accident?

And Diya is planning smthing, na?

I hope Sajan ke bich problem na ho.

Continue soon, dear.

Shreya...
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update
but rv???
do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the part
but didn't rv die?
cont. soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow really nice part continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mayur were really good
Liked them
Why the RV is back now
Liked Sajan also
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update ..loved the MN part :) whats RV doing there
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Posted: 15 years ago
UPDATED: Part 25
Scene: Excel College
Nupur shouts: Mayank wahaan RV hai……….

Mayank breaks the hug he sees Nupur……..

M: Kya hua Nupur………kya keh rahi ho…….

N (pointing towards the wall): Dekho Mayank……wahaan RV hai…….

Mayank turns around and finds no one standing………Light comes……..

M: Koi nahin hai wahaan Nupur…….dekho…….ab toh light bhi aa gayi hai……

N (she has tears in her eyes): Par maine dekha tha RV ko…….wo….. wo….wahin khada tha……ussi deewar ke aage……..

Mayank wipes her tears…….

M: accha tum ab rona band karo…….hum ghar chalte hain……theek hai……

N: Par Mayank wo waapas aa gaya hai……..

Mayank is thinking: Mujhe Nupur ko yahaan nahin laana chahiye tha…… wo bohot darr gayi hai..... wo aaj bhi uss haadse ko bhool nahin paayi hai……

M: Nupur abhi hum ghar chalte hain……..ghar par baat karenge……

Mayank and Nupur sit in the car and leave from there……. Nupur was very tensed in the whole drive and with the cold breeze blowing she slept on the car seat only……Mayank stops the car at Bhushan Mansion…….

M: Nupur…… (he sees that she is sleeping…..and thought not to disturb her…..and closed the door of the car slowly)…..

Inside Bhushan Mansion…….

M: Chachi ji….namaste……wo Angel…….

S: haan beta wo upar so rahi hai……

M: Main le aata hoon……

He brings her down……

M: accha chachiji namste main chalta hoon…..raat bohot ho gayi hai……aapko aaj humaari wajah se bohot pareshaan hona pada……

S: Koi baat nahin beta…..ab Anjali roti nahin hai…..thodi der kheli aur phir so gayi……..waise Nupur kahaan hai…..

M: Wo….Nupur thak gayi thi toh car mein hi hai……..accha ab main chalta hoon…….

Mayank comes back to the car……Mayank opens the door……Nupur wakes up……

N: Tum kahaan the…….

Mayank gives Anjali to her…..

M: Isse lene gaya tha…..Nupur……tum pareshaan mat ho…….

They reach the flat………

N: Mayank……hum ab baat karein? Maine wahaan RV ko dekha tha…….wo wahin khada tha……

M: Nupur tum samajhti kyun nahin ho……wo mar chuka hai……..maine khud dekha tha uski car ko blast hote huye……

N: Toh kya main jhoot bol rahi hoon………

M: nahin Nupur par thoda realistic bano…….ye koi saas bahu ka serial nahin hai ki koi mar gaya aur dubaara zinda ho gaya……dumbo serials……tum itne serials mat dekha karo……

N: Mayank…..yahaan baat serial ki nahin ho rahi……maine apni aankhon se usse dekha tha……. Aur ho sakta hai wo bach gaya ho…….aisa ho sakta hai Mayank……kisi ko usski dead body nahin mili thi……..

M: Nupur that was a blast…….cheethde ud jaate hain…….aur tum keh rahi ho usski dead body nahin mili……… main samajh sakta hoon tum par kya beet rahi hai…….par please be practical…….chalo ab so jaao……doctor ne kahaa tha na……no tension sleep well……

Scene: <??>SINGAPORE</??>

Samrat and Gunjan come to the top of a small hill……

S: Yahaan se sab kuch kitna accha lagta hai na………kitni shaanti hai yahaan……..

G (stretching her arms to enjoy the breeze): Hmm……bohot acchi jagah hai……yahaan se sunset kitna accha lagega na…….

S: Haan jab mein University mein tha toh…..hum sab friends aate the yahaan…….

And they both sit down there……..

G: Ji main ek baat poochoon aapse……

S: Haan….

G: Dia aapki bohot acchi dost thi ??

S: Haan Gunjan wo meri dost thi…….par ab nahin hai…..mujhe usse…… (and he stops)

G: Ji…..

S: Dekho Gunjan……ab wo meri dost nahin hai……ab wo meri kuch bhi nahin hai…….aur main chaahunga ki tum iss baare mein mujhse koi sawaal nahin poocho…….kuch aisi baatein hain jinhein main bhula dena chahta hoon…….bas aur koi baat nahin hai…….main jaanta hoon tumhein sab kuch jaan ne ka haq hai……..par bhalaai issi mein hai ki tum ye jaan lo kit um aur main hum hain aur issmein koi teesra nahin hai……..

Gunjan smiles on hearing this from Samrat's mouth……..

G: Jaisa aap theek samjhein……mujhe aap par poora vishwaas hai……

Gunjan's hand was on the ground and Samrat puts his hand over hers…….Gunjan looks down and sees it is Samrat……He holded her hand more firmly……and she too tightend the grip……..

Scene: Mayank's Flat

Its morning time…..around 7 am……

Both Mayank and Nupur are sleeping…….and then Mayank's cell rings……..

He picks it up……

M: Hello…..

I: Sir main Indrawadhan bol raha hoon…….

Mayank gets up and sits on the bed……

M: Haan Indu bolo….itni subah……

I: Sir……aaj Samrat sir ki meeting thi Delhi mein……aur wo toh yahaan hain nahin toh kya karna hai………

M: Toh tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahin bataya ab toh meeting bhi postponed nahin ho sakti……how can you be so careless ?

I: Sorry Sir par mujhe laga wo aa jaayenge…..par ab kya karna hai…….

M: Karna kya hai…..meeting kitne baje ki hai ?

I: Sir shaam 4 baje hai……

M: Theek hai to tum meri Delhi ke liye ek flight ticket book karva do……main aadhe ghante mein tumhe phone karta hoon…….

After half an hour…..Mayank comes after freshening up……He calls Indu……

M: Haan…..kitne baje ki flight hai ?

I: Sir subah 10 baje…..

M: Theek hai 8 baje tak office pohoncho……meting ke baare mein discuss karke…..wahin se nikal jaaunga…….

He goes and wakes Nupur…….

M: Nupur utho…..Nupur……

Nupur sees Mayank is fully dressed…….

N: Kya der ho gayi mujhe…..tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahin uthaaya…….

M: Nahin Nupur late nahin hua hai…..mujhe urgently Delhi jaana hai…..meeting hai…..

N: Par pehle to kuch nahin bataya……

M: Abhi abhi pata chala hai……mujhe aadhe ghante mein nikalna hai…….

N: Theek hai main breakfast bana deti hoon…..

M: Usski koi zaroorat nahin hai……main office mein kar loonga…..

N: Office mein kar loonga…….main itna bura khana banati hoon……

M: Nahin aisi baat nahin hai……..

After half an hour……

N: Chalo jaldi se naashta kar lo……shaam ko kab tak aaoge……

M: Kuch keh nahin sakta Nupur……..meeting ko khatam hote hote kitni der ho jaaye kuch pata nahin…….

N: Please jaldi aane ki koshish karna…..mujhe kal raat se bohot darr lag raha hai……

M (putting his hands over her cheeks): Nupur darne ki koi baat nahin hai……main pehle bhi to gaya hoon na……ok tum pareshaan mat hona……main chlta hoon theek hai……

And he leaves……..

Scene: SINGAPORE (Samrat's Cottage)

Both of the enter the cottage……

S: Aap ladkiyon ko shopping karna bohot accha lagta hai na……

G: Ji…….

S: Phir Ji…….aap ne English nahin padhi kya…..mere naam mein G nahin aata……ussmein aata hai….S A M R A aur T……..aapki gadi G par shuru ho kar G par hi ruk jaati hai….

G: Hushhh……pati ka naam thodi na lete hain……

S: Kyun nahin le sakte…….pati koi atom bomb hai kya jiska naam lenge aur wo phat jaayega……

G: Aisi baat nahin hai…….meri maa kabhi bauji ka naam nahin leti thi……. (her eyes were wet while saying this)

S: Par agar aap mera naam lengi…..to mujhe accha lagega……main koi mahaan purush to hoon nahin ek seedha saadha normal insaan hoon……..aasaan hai mere naam ki spelling SAMRAT…..

G: theek hai……

S: aise nahin…..pehle naam leejiye phir maanunga…….

G (in a very low voice shyly): Samrat……

S: Ye huyi na baat……Gunjan JI……….

And they both start laughing seeing each other……….

Thats it for now I know its short but I have updated it earlier than usual.......

Do enjoy and don't forget to leave your comments......
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Posted: 15 years ago

i will edit this after my exam otherwise my boss farii will kill me
Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
i knew that there wasn't rv in real.....

but i love mayank's concern for her.....

and yup....i hate when the dead people become alive....

yeh sajan sirf haath hi pakedenge ki kuch aage bhi badhenge?

mujhe naa jaane kyun lag raha hai ki kuch gadbad hone waali hai? mayank door kyun jaa raha hai?

but i loved the name thing.....it was quiet cute...

loved the update though it was shorter than usual.....

do continue soon......
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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