..those beautiful eyes.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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What have you done, O beloved, what have you done! Believing that lowdown scoundrel instead your fallow oath taker at the sacred altar! Overturning the plea of rescuer [as a mere tool of Bappa] with belief in a web of deceit from the very plotter? And what are your weapons in this hunt? Those indescribably beautiful eyes!

From under the shelter of a comely and stained wrist those eyes have taken possession of my being from the very first day. They were conveying the innocence of a child making me immediately want to protect them or radiating honest intelligence of a compassionate mind alert to the welfares of her near and dear ones making me respect you enormously.

What are they at now? Showing an accusation unimaginable even as contemplation! This can not be real. They are draining the life out of me. The eyes, which have commanded me to be attached to you, now, disown me, why! They are freezing me to unbearable pain.

Your Aai's slap was a welcome relief in comparison, bringing me back to the sensations and making me vow to unravel the deceit.

I shall reach you. If fire is the test it will be taken. If darkness is the void it will be pierced to light the truth to those beautiful eyes.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow a beautiful recetation buddy!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Indeed a beautifull eyes!
Men rise and fall like winter wheat, but what they leave behind is a fairytale of what they were during the peak of their lifetime.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh wow, that was really amazing! You really have a way with words, I loved the Bappa's Musings post as well. Really well done!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wonderfull! samarth........keep enthralling us wid yr creativity...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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BEAUTIFULLY written Samarth.... You really write so well... Gosh, u write very well with emotions.👏

Waiting for more such..😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Really beautifull samarth...very well written!! Manav was first attracted to those beautiful eyes!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ akashraj,nishr,piya007,devashree_h,guptil,Tanyaz

Thank you friends for the appreciation.

@ toothbrush13

Nice to hear you liking earlier post, 'Bappa's musings'.

Actually I had written this piece earlier then Bappa's Musing but was reluctant of posting an article with long winding sentences- fearing boredom to readers. But as the serial is heading towards disaster and I may stop, I thought why not post this in times of Manav bashing as that character is probably being scripted as spoiler.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Samarth.. that was beautiful!! I loved your choice of words...
Pls. continue writing.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Nikataji,

Thanks.

I was always aware of their mutual respect but its deep importance in their relationship was well highlighted by you in your various analyses. Thanks again.

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@samarth : Thanks for the counter-compliment.. hihihi

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