ek din aap pg 149

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this a scene of sanraj hope u liked


I will never forgive my self ''.crossing thought come in santo mind as tears start drop down in her face ''

The long dark road is all what santo can see as she walked alone in the dark of night to where to whom she never knows ''.

Why things turn like that? Why malik my beloved malik is not in our house 'the only one who I ''.small scream come out 'describe the lonely confessed santo'..

She keep walking when suddenly a small light come in the distance of her look'..santo without any thinking walk toward the light to found that it come from a small house '..

Santo with the tired steps walk to the door and knock it ''she wait for sometime '.the door open and when she a bout to ask if she could spend the night there the word just froze in her moth''.and her face reflect the shock'.

Santo: Ma..ma..malik!!!!! that's u

Tired sad eyes look at her and the sad eyes translate in a mint to a twinkle one '.in second a strong arms hold her tightly as he can't believe that she is real'..then he step away from her looking at her in silence they stand like that for a mints the DM ask her to come inside '..

As she enters the house santo found her photo on the wall and all the furniture of there room put in same order in this room '..She is surprised and looks at him '..

DM look at her : close the door '.and she do

Santo: why u here? What happen? Why u left the house?....

DM: punishment''..

Santo: what?

DM: punishment''your punishment '..u went to jail without any thinking of me and that is what u done ''.loosing u losing the meaning of life ''losing u losing the moments of happiness''why u do that? ''u knows as I know that is not the one who kills? And today I need answer '.I need it right now'.

Santo: everything I do 'do it for u only u and what is the use of the truth now?'.

DM: there is use '..for our life or this punishment will continue and u will be for me in jail always '.

Santo: why u make it hard and she break down''.

If u wish '.can this be keep it between u and me 'pleas?

He don't answer ''and santo after feeling that there is no choice she start tell the trouth without looking at his face and after she finished slowly santo look at DM'

His face without any reflection make her scared ''''

DM: santo u are the great mother of a children that u never give birth to them 'that is true ''but what a bout me what a bout begin my wife where is that fact go'.

Santo look at him ''deep look and she says: that's all is for u only u what has happen because I love u '.love u '..I am sorry sorry that u heart all this years '.but what can I do this is the only solution '..And she start cry

DM take her hand on hid head : promise me that whatever things happen u will share it with me what ever thoughts come to your mind u will share it with me promise me '.

In broken voice santo promise DM '.and he take her again in his arms give her silent promise that he will never ever let her go again '

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Posted: 15 years ago
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love,
u proof ur name true by this. 👏 👏 👏
it toooooo gud, very nice & amazing. 👏 👍🏼
when i was reading i was not realized that it is ur 1st attempt. 😃 😊 ⭐️

keep it up!!!! write some more like this.
👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
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Love2211 as i already told you. it's simply superb. marvelous
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thank u ......happy u liked hope there will be such scene in the serial
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Lovely!!!!!!!!
Keep up the good work.
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Wonderful,
Very nice FF ....POOR DM Punishing himself just like Santu...
MISS HIM.....please keepo it comin'...
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Don't what Ektha want to show in her Bandini but Sara your's is perfect. Hope Ektha will use this scene in her Bandini also
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Very touching...emotional scene between Sanraj..may they soon be reunited!!..keep ur fabulous efforts up love2211.....very creative!
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keep up the good work..........I liked reading your sanraj creations.........looking forward to read some more..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Waiting

Now with everything change santo keep waiting for DM everyday '.waiting for the traveler beloved to find his way to the house'.. the house of them ''.

As the nights go santo could not control her self from involving in sadness'the tears keep falling down silently 'the eyes keep looking at the door Longley'..

There is nothing except the wind sound with leaves fly there and there joins the waiting of santo'..

It is now the sixth night of waiting '..santo sitting on the top of the stairs keeping her eyes on the door and then she drop in her deep thinking '..What if he will not come at all to the house...What if he'.no it could not be'..

Suddenly a foot steps sound come closer and closer 'santo turn her eyes slowly to the door of the house '.there is along shadow of a man come slowly to enter the house'..santo eyes become more focus to find that it is not other than a man from the factory bring some box to Hiten the new malik '..santo get disappointing '.but there is a voice inside her told her that DM will come back soon she should not loss hope not now

Santo keep sitting there '..it is now 2 clock and everyone slept there is no sound at all except the wind voice '.the only company of santo sadness ''.

There is a voice of coughing suddenly comes to destroy the silence of the night '..santo turn immediately to the door to find the one who is she waiting walk slowly from the door to stop near the tulsi plant '..His tired eyes searching for someone 'his tired step can't make another step to enter the house''.. his rising in age show clearly in his face his hair his mustache but there is nothing like the look in his eyes '.he lost it 'the love of life'.

Santo get shock to see him like that '..Suddenly DM speaks to him self loudly '..

Where I have come? For whom I have returned? There is nothing there for me there is no one waiting for me 'just the silence is all what welcome me''.santori!! ..'wish to hear her Cham Cham 'wish to hear her voice calling Malik..Malik'.

Wish to see her open that door with her soft voice asking me''where u have been Malik?.........Where u have lost Malik? And he can't take it more ''the storm of tears drop down in his cheek with flashback of all the close moment of his santori ''..

Santo can't take it more and she stand up to start walk to him ''

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