FF~*Tera hone laga hoon *~ Part 19 on pg 29

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Hello everyone

Actually since BB ended, I have been really sad, which I know is silly because BB is just a show. But I guess I just got so attached to it and now I don't really have anything to look foward to on tv. In my mind, I compare the other shows to BB and I just don't find anything worth watching...So here I am attempting my first Fan-Fiction. I think I'll see now just how difficult it is to write these...

Thank you Kaninika for the go ahead!

~*~* Tera hone laga hoon *~*~

PART 1

Armaan and Bharti's wedding----> (Well this is without Omkaar...He never arrived on the scene.)

Armaan and Bharti were at the mandap to be married, the ceremony was simple and everything went according to plan. No interruptions or "apshaguns". The rituals were all completed, they exchanged garlands with each other, took the "pheras" and Armaan very lovingly applied the sindoor to Bharti's forehead. Armaan leaned towards Bharti to adorn the mangulsutra on her. As he carefully hooked the clasp together, he whispered into Bharti's ears: "Thank you Bharti, you have made me the happiest man alive". Bharti smiled her genuine sweet smile at him and they didn't break eye contact until Armaan returned to his seat next to her..

Payal: (stood between Bharti and Armaan, looked at each of them and then cleared her throat) Hogaya? Come, let everyone congratulate you...

Payal raised her eyebrows at Bharti and gestured to her to come... Bharti was thinking to herself, "Yaar, what is wrong with you? Why does that happen every time Armaan looks at you, you forget that You Are The Man!!"

Armaan: "Bharti, are you okay?"

Everyone was looking at her and waiting. Armaan was already standing near Amarjeet and the rest of the MU staff.

Amarjeet: "What happened Bharti? Are you having cold-feet?"

Bharti: "Err..No sir, I'm fine. Come, lets go eat."

Everyone went to the small reception that MU was throwing for Armaan and Bharti. Everyone ate and danced to their heart's content. Bharti forget she was expected to be the coy bride as she was suddenly in the middle of eveyone dancing with her hands in the air. But everyone just looked at her and smiled as they shook their heads. Armaan stood on the side just smiling and admiring "his Bharti"..He didn't even notice when Jiya arrived next to him and was tugging at his sleeve.

Jiya: Dada...Dada....

Jiya decided to pinch her Dada.

Armaan: "Ouch! What was that for??"

Jiya just giggled and shook her head

Jiya: "Dada... why are you standing here? Go and dance with Bharti mama"

Armaan: "Bharti mama? Since when? And did you eat your food?"

Jiya: "Don't look so surprised, you have married her, so that makes her my Bharti mama. But don't worry, I'll ask her first before I call her Bharti mama. And Dada don''t change the topic... I already ate with Bharti mama. I know you don't like dancing infront of everyone, but I'm sure you like dancing with Bharti mama...So go and dance with her! "

Armaan (blushing slightly): "Acha? And just by the way, how old are you?? Okay, okay I'll go, don't look at me with those eyes, someone will think you're my mother!"

Armaan kissed her on the forehead and walked through the crowd towards Bharti.

Armaan: (cleared his throat) Excuse me Mrs Sinha...May I have this dance?

Bharti turned around to face Armaan and realising that he had just called her "Mrs Sinha" she blushed leaving her cheeks a shade of pink much like her sari. She just smiled and nodded as everyone around them parted and formed a circle around them while whistling and clapping. As the music changed to a slow romantic song, Armaan smiled. He thought to himself that this song is so apt for him and Bharti and he slid his hand to her waist and gently pulled her closer to him. He leaned towards her and started singing along to the song in her ear...

You're the one

You're the one

Baby you're the one

You're the one

You're the one

Baby you're the one

You may be... just a lil bit deewani

Thodi thodi si crazy

But baby you're the one

Tum jaise hai na koi yun deewani

Thodi thodi si crazy

But baby you're the one

Abb aur kise na chahtha hoon

Aur kise na chahunga

Tu jo taare mang le

To woh be thod launga

Keh ke to dekho na karta rahunga main pyaar

You may be... just a lil bit deewani

Thodi thodi si crazy

But baby you're the one

..................

Khule khule teri aankhon mein hai mere armaan saare

Khile khile aise hai ki fike fike hai sab nazarein

Hai naya yeh jahan

ke hua na yahaan

Itna kabhi bhi kisi ko kisi se hai pyar

You may be... just a little bit deewani

Thodi thodi si crazy

But baby you're the one

Abb aur kise na chahtha hoon

Aur kise na chahunga

Tu jo taare mang le

To woh be thod launga

Keh ke to dekho na karta rahunga main pyaar

Tum jaise hai na koi yun deewani

Thodi thodi si crazy

But baby you're the one

You're the one

You're the one

Baby you're the one

You're the one

You're the one

Baby you're the one

You're the one

You're the one

Baby you're the one

You're the one

You're the one

Baby you're the one

As the song ended Bharti slowly opened her eyes and looked deep into Armaan's eyes. Armaan saw confusion in her eyes and her eyes seemed to tremble a little with fear. He loosened his grip on her and she moved backwards out of his arms.

Bharti: Excuse me for a bit, Main abhi aati hoon...

Payal saw that Bharti had suddenly gone off in the other direction and she tried to end her conversation with Jiya to go see what happened with Bharti.

Meanwhile Bharti went to the bathroom and splashed some water on her face. She felt a bit dizzy and uneasy.

Bharti: "What is happening to me?"

She put on her smile for the ladies who congratulated her before they left the bathroom.

Bharti: "Man! How long is this going to last? I am so tired of smiling at everyone.."

Bharti was adjusting her heavy sari out of irritation when she heard a man's voice saying "Congratulations"

Bharti: "Thank you, but what are you doing here? This is a ladies bathroo...KK!?!?"

KK: "Arre? Kya hua? You are also here in the ladies bathroom..Are you a lady?"

Bharti: "KK! Do you have to taunt me wherever I go? You can at least spare me in the bathroom!"

KK: "Calm down Bhaskar.. I am only here to congratulate you. You are now one step closer to becoming Bhaskar again. By the way, I would have thought you would be happy, why the uneasy look?"

Bharti: "Tumse matlab? Since when do you care..Look, I know what I have to do. I have married Armaan and once I have a baby then it's bye-bye Bharti and hello Bhaskar"

KK: "You really think that it's that simple?"

Bharti just looked at KK angrily and stormed passed him to leave the bathroom. Just as she was about to open the door KK stopped her.

KK: "Bharti, I have one more thing to tell you. Against what you may think, this won't be that simple. You have to live completely as a woman. You need to try to forget that you are Bhaskar for a while. You will have to experience all the problems of a woman and..."

Bharti: "And what have I been doing this whole time?!?"

KK: " And you need to gain all the characteristics of a woman, the strength, perseverance, love, forgiveness... everything. These characteristics will help you and make you a better person. My only advice to you is try to stay calm Bhaskar, think before you act...Oh and all the best for this journey of yours and (with a slight laugh) all the best for tonight"

Bharti: "What now?"

KK: "Bhaskar, you are a suhaagan, tonight's your suhaag raat..Don't look at me like that, this should be what you want.."

Bharti: "Aaargh!"

Bharti opened the door and stormed out bumping hard into Payal.

Payal: "Ouch!"

Bharti: "Ouch!"

Both of then were on the floor rubbing their heads.

Bharti: (looking skywards) "Do you have any more surprises?"

Payal: "What? Who are you talking to and what were you doing Bhaskar? You're not planning on running away again, are you?"

Bharti: "Of course not. I have to stick to this. It's nothing..um..it's just this heavy heavy clothing and jewelry are killing me."

Payal: (laughing) "Get used to it... Listen, there is something I need to tell you. Um, well there's this RJ program that I'll be going for... and it's for a whole month..and it's in London..and I'm leaving in 2 days... Bhaskar? Bhaskar? "

Payal shook Bharti's shoulders as she was just staring at Payal in shock.

Bharti: "Payal! Did you find no better time to do this? I mean come on yaar, how can you leave me now?"

Payal: "Oh Bhaskar, don't be so selfish. This will be good for my career and I'll be back before you know it..."

Bharti: "Oh please! You know trouble doesn't take very long to find me. I'm sure I'll have problems by tomorrow, actually I already have one tonight. What will I do without you? I'll be dead by the time you come back!"

Payal: (Hitting Bharti) "Don't say that and stop being melodramatic! I'll still speak to you, I'll help you over the phone. And look Bhaskar, you have Armaan now, I promise you, he will help you through everything..I haven't been the only one helping you this whole time, Armaan has been by your side too...(laughing) Unless you wake up as a man, then I don't think Armaan will help you much, maybe beat you out of bed..Okay sorry (holding her ears), just joking."

Bharti: "Payal..."

Just then a few ladies came and took Bharti away as it was time to go to Armaan's house.

Payal just stood there alone while a tear ran down her cheek.

Payal: "What do I tell you Bhaskar? I'm sorry, but I have to go. It's just too difficult to stay here and watch you be married to Armaan and live with him as his wife for I don't know how long... Bhaskar, I feel like you're slipping further and further away from me and I don't know if you're ever going to come back..."



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Do let me know what all of you think and if I should continue...

Sohana


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello Sohana,

I just have sent you a PM asking about your FF and I saw that you have posted it😊

Totally loved it. "Kash Asia hota"😍
Bharti was totally same as BB, and I really appreciate it.
Loved Payal a lot, she is so cute, I really felt bad for her.
Armaan and Jia are sweet as usual😊

KK was good as well. So Bharti has to fulfill those 9 rups? thank god OK and his janglee family is not there😆

I really feel the same. I am not getting anything on TV (except sports) worth watching😔

Our FFs will keep BB alive😊

Thanks a lot dear

Continue soon😊


Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sohana....truly ..i havent read a better beginning to a FF than urs...superb..!! n my dear..welcome to the royal BB FF writers club..!! ur truly a gem of a writer..i m soo looking forward to ur next epis..!! what a dhamakedar entry....luvd it..👏
Gosh Armu & Bhartis close dance...just the thot of it is giving me goosebumps....!! I m so happy u hv taken the track that the stupid BB CVs outta hv taken... make bharti go thru WOMANs 9 roops after being Armans wife...😊
Thanx dear...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Sohana!

Really great stuff you've written!😊

I'm happy that you started you own FF! Thats good!

Love the fact that you started of from the part where Omkar comes in just that in your FF Omkar isn't in the picture! This would have been so the proper storyline if tne creatives didn't bring in the Omkart track!!
Yay we got what we all wanted that is Bharti getting married to Armaan in your FF! Now this will be fun cos it's only your FF where Bharti and bhaskar are the SAME person! 😆
Feels just like BB but only a new episode!!!
So do carry on yea!😊
Waiting to read whether Bharti has her Suhaag raat with Armaan or not! 😆
It'll be fun if she tries to escape it in her own silly Bharti ways!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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simply amazin yaar plz do cont soon jaane
xxxx
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wow this is awesome yaar👏
enjoyed it a lot.....
plz continue soon

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Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Hello Sohana,

I just have sent you a PM asking about your FF and I saw that you have posted it😊

Totally loved it. "Kash Asia hota"😍
Bharti was totally same as BB, and I really appreciate it.
Loved Payal a lot, she is so cute, I really felt bad for her.
Armaan and Jia are sweet as usual😊

KK was good as well. So Bharti has to fulfill those 9 rups? thank god OK and his janglee family is not there😆

I really feel the same. I am not getting anything on TV (except sports) worth watching😔

Our FFs will keep BB alive😊

Thanks a lot dear

Continue soon😊


I'm really happy you've liked it. And yes, i really wish something like this happened, maybe BB would be around.....😍 I'm glad that in your eyes I have been able to capture Bharti's character..I was worried I won't be able to do that. Please always tell me what you think and let me know if you'd like anything changed along the way or if you have any suggestions..thanks for the comment😊
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Sohana....truly ..i havent read a better beginning to a FF than urs...superb..!! n my dear..welcome to the royal BB FF writers club..!! ur truly a gem of a writer..i m soo looking forward to ur next epis..!! what a dhamakedar entry....luvd it..👏

Gosh Armu & Bhartis close dance...just the thot of it is giving me goosebumps....!! I m so happy u hv taken the track that the stupid BB CVs outta hv taken... make bharti go thru WOMANs 9 roops after being Armans wife...😊
Thanx dear...

Thank you sooo much for the kind words😛 I am so happy you liked it and I do hope you'll like the parts to come. And thank you for the welcome. I love all the creatives in this forum, they are all super talented. 👏 I hope that I can live up to their standards. And yes, how I wish that close dance or anything like it happened.😍 Keep the comments coming and do give me any suggestions you have or tell me if there is anything you don't like.....Sohana😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Hey Sohana!

Really great stuff you've written!😊

I'm happy that you started you own FF! Thats good!

Love the fact that you started of from the part where Omkar comes in just that in your FF Omkar isn't in the picture! This would have been so the proper storyline if tne creatives didn't bring in the Omkart track!!
Yay we got what we all wanted that is Bharti getting married to Armaan in your FF! Now this will be fun cos it's only your FF where Bharti and bhaskar are the SAME person! 😆
Feels just like BB but only a new episode!!!
So do carry on yea!😊
Waiting to read whether Bharti has her Suhaag raat with Armaan or not! 😆
It'll be fun if she tries to escape it in her own silly Bharti ways!

Glad you've liked it. I really think the storyline should have been different from this point on, so here's my take on what it could have been... I do hope I can portray Bhaskar/Bharti properly....Enjoy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks everyone for all the comments😊 It means a lot to me. I am glad you all have liked it and I do hope you'll like the parts to come.

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