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~*~* Tera hone laga hoon *~*~

PART 3

Bharti woke up to the sounds of Jiya and Armaan talking and the smell of breakfast being made. She looked over at the clock and saw that it was 8am, much too early to be waking up in her books. But she thought that she needs to get up as she should go help with breakfast. She somehow managed to pull herself out of bed and went to brush her teeth and get ready.

Jiya was busy in the kitchen making breakfast as she had insisted on making Bharti Mama's first breakfast. She asked Armaan when Bharti Mama would be waking up and Armaan said that she's probably still asleep and that he'll go and wake her up now. He assumed she was sleeping, so he lightly knocked on the door before entering and softly calling her name. Bharti was out of the bath and had not heard Armaan enter as she was drying her hair. She tossed her hair to the other side and saw Armaan in the mirror. She had not expected to see him so she let out a little scream.

Armaan: (laughing)"Sorry, I didn't mean to scare you, are you okay?"

Bharti: "I'm fine and stop laughing!"

Bharti picked up the cushion and threw it at him. This made Armaan laugh even more. Just then Jiya came in to see what happened. She also laughed, but then went over to Bharti and hugged her and said good morning before turning to Armaan and looking at him angrily.

Bharti : "Dada, why are you troubling Bharti aunty so early in the morning?"

Armaan: "What is this? One day and you're already on your Bharti aunty's side! What about me?!"

Jiya then ran across to Armaan, hugged him and told him that she's always on his side. Armaan picked her up and swung her around before kissing her cheek. Bharti couldn't help but smile at their father-daughter moments. She turned around to continue getting ready. Jiya went to the kitchen saying that she still has some stuff to do. Armaan went to draw the curtains and make the bed. He then went over to Bharti with the hairbrush and said that he's sorry for scaring her and sorry for laughing at her.

Bharti laughed at him and took the hairbrush from him.

Bharti: (smiling) "Okay you're forgiven, but you might want to try flowers next time"

Armaan and Bharti started laughing even more and Bharti said that she'll be right out. Armaan turned to go, but stopped and asked Bharti if he could apply the sindoor for her. Bharti nodded and gave him the sindoor, which he lovingly applied for her. Both of them then went to join Jiya and Bharti saw the spread of toast, pancakes, fruit and juice.

Bharti: "Oh wow Jiya, you did all of this yourself?"

Jiya: "Well, I had a little help from Dada. Pancakes are the only thing that I can make at the moment so I hope you like it. "

Bharti: "I'm sure I'll love it. Thanks Armaan and thank you my sweetheart"

Bharti went over to Jiya and hugged her. They sat down and enjoyed their breakfast with Bharti occasionally feeding Jiya the pancake which had a chocolate sauce smile on it.

Armaan: "So Bharti, today's Sunday. What do you want to do?"

Bharti: "I'll do whatever Jiya wants to do."

Jiya: "We can go shopping and watch a movie and have lunch and then lastly we can go to the beach for the sunset."

Bharti: "Now that sounds like a plan, Armaan do you have you credit card ready?"

They finished up in the kitchen and quickly got ready to do some shopping. They had immense fun going in and out of shops trying on everything, even Armaan had fun watching them. Jiya picked out clothes for Bharti while Bharti only looked for stuff for Jiya and nothing for herself. Once they were done Bharti went to the counter to pay. But Armaan came next to her and paid for everything.

Bharti: "Armaan! I was just joking about the credit card."

Armaan: "It's my treat"

Bharti: "And why didn't you get anything for yourself? "

Armaan: "Next time"

Bharti: "I'm going to hold you to that!"

They went to catch a movie, but there wasn't anything good showing. Jiya was hungry so they decided to go and have lunch. Next stop was the beach and now they were glad that they didn't watch a movie as they could spend more time at the beach. Jiya and Bharti built sandcastles and then Armaan was swinging Jiya around in the air and she was having so much of fun. Bharti thought that Armaan must have a camera in the car and went to check. Luckily she was right and took many photo's of them. Armaan saw what she was doing and went to get the camera from her.

Bharti: "What is this? The photographer doesn't like photo's of himself?"

Armaan: "Lets see how you like it."

And he started taking photo's of Bharti. Jiya was just watching both of them and smiling, thinking that she had never seen her Dada so happy before. Jiya ran over to them and took the camera and started taking their pictures. Jiya then asked someone to take pictures of the three of them. By the end of that they were all very tired, so they just sat on the sand and watched the sun go down. Jiya unfortunately missed it as she had fallen asleep on Bharti's lap.

Bharti: (watching the setting sun) "I always love sunsets more than sunrises. It's just so beautiful, all the colours..."

Armaan looked at the setting sun and then at Jiya and Bharti with the setting warmth of the sun on Bharti's face.

Armaan: "It definitely is.."

He then took a few pictures of Bharti and Jiya and by this time Bharti was just too tired to fight with him. Armaan picked up Jiya and him and Bharti walked along the water's edge for a bit before returning to the car. When they got home Armaan made a quick dinner while Bharti went to bath. By the time she was out the food was done and Jiya was awake. They ate and Armaan asked Jiya if she had any homework for the next day. Jiya said she did and had completely forgotten about it. After dinner, Armaan and Bharti helped Jiya with her homework and then Bharti excused herself to do the dishes. When she was done, she went to Jiya's room to see Armaan reading her a story and she just went and sat at the edge of the bed watching the two of them. Just then the phone rang and Armaan went to answer. Bharti kissed Jiya goodnight and was about to go when Jiya stopped her.

Jiya: " Thank you Bharti aunty."

Bharti: "What for?"

Jiya: "For everything - for coming into our lives, for giving me my Mama and most of all for making my Dada happy. You know, he's always smiling and happy, but I have never truly seen him as happy as I saw him today. He has never said it, but I'm sure he has been lonely. I never met my real Mama, but Dada was married to her and I'm sure he felt her absence even more than I did. But ever since you came to work with Dada, he has been happier. And I'll pray every night that we will always stay a family and you'll never leave us."

Bharti didn't know what to say, she just kissed Jiya's cheek and hugged her tightly, while wiping away her tears. Somewhere in the back of her mind she wondered what would happen when she was Bhaskar again. Both Jiya and Bharti were oblivious to Armaan who was standing at the door wiping away his tears.

Jiya: "Can I ask you for something? "

Bharti: "Anything Jiya."

Jiya: "May I call you Bharti Mama"

Bharti smiled at her and just nodded. Jiya hugged her again and Bharti told her to sleep as she had school the next morning.

Bharti switched off the lights and saw Armaan as she came out of Jiya's room. He stood there wiping the tears from his eyes and just said "thank you" to Bharti. Bharti put her hand on his shoulder and told him that there is nothing to thank her for.

Bharti: "Armaan, you know I haven't felt like I am a part of a family in a long time and never before have I felt so..needed. It's a big responsibility, but it's an amazing feeling. I should be the one thanking the two of you...."

Armaan: "Bharti, you're an integral part of this family now...Oh I almost forgot, that was Amarjeet Sir. He said we have to come to work tomorrow, he has something urgent to discuss with us."

Bharti: "Oh ok, we'll go to work together then after dropping Jiya at school. Oh man, I completely forgot! Payal is going to London tomorrow and that too for a month. I've got to see her off at the airport."

Armaan: "How about we pick her up after we drop Jiya, we won't be that late and Amarjeet Sir didn't specify a time."

Bharti: "Okay, I'll just go call her"

Bharti spoke to Payal and organized everything with her. She switched all the lights off and went to her room. There she saw Armaan putting his pillow on the sofa to sleep.

Bharti: "Excuse me Mr Armaan, what are you doing?"

Armaan: "Um... going to sleep."

Bharti: "Yes, I can see that, but why on the sofa?"

Armaan: "Well, I thought..you know..you on the bed and.."

Bharti: "Look, yesterday you told me that I can trust you and I do, but you should trust me too. Come on I don't bite, though I do talk in my sleep sometimes and I occasionally kick, but it shouldn't be too hard. (winking at Armaan). Come sleep here, the bed's big and anyway we have lots to do tomorrow."

Armaan came to sleep on the bed and Bharti said goodnight before switching the lamp off.

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Edited by *Sohana*Singh* - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: *Sohana*Singh*

Thanks for your comment and I will try very hard to add some funny parts, like Amarjeet and MU. I do hope I can do that and it'll be funny. Only problem is that it's a little bit difficult for me as I unfortunately did not watch BB in the early funny/MU days.😭 But I will try my best, I know the first bits have been a bit serious...and glad you're loving it😊

Hey dear don't worry at all! Your FF is GREAT!! THe first part was serious but yea i still love it!😃
I'm sure with the way you write you'll be able to make some parts funny even though you nvr watch the early BB days! Gonna read your part 3 soon! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sohana....i m speechless....dunno what to comment...
Bharti didn't know what to say, she just kissed Jiya's cheek and hugged her tightly, while wiping away her tears. Somewhere in the back of her mind she wondered what would happen when she was Bhaskar again. Both Jiya and Bharti were oblivious to Armaan who was standing at the door wiping away his tears.
for me...these lines...are the epitome of love, affection and bonding that have ever been written ...!! girl ur writing is like poetry..beautiful, profound & ethereal...! i m totally ..unconditionally and madly in luv with ur FF....!! ❤️
i hv tears in my eyes...its awesome..!! 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Sohana!

Really well written!! 👏

I love the part where Armaan wants to put sindoor on Bharti's forehead! and Bharti being so sweet to him asking him to sleep on the bed as well.. Gosh so cute! Am eagerly waiting to see how their relationship grows! Love the whole Jia-bharti-armaan relationship! Like a perfect family!

Waiting for your next part.:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Sohana....i m speechless....dunno what to comment...

Bharti didn't know what to say, she just kissed Jiya's cheek and hugged her tightly, while wiping away her tears. Somewhere in the back of her mind she wondered what would happen when she was Bhaskar again. Both Jiya and Bharti were oblivious to Armaan who was standing at the door wiping away his tears.
for me...these lines...are the epitome of love, affection and bonding that have ever been written ...!! girl ur writing is like poetry..beautiful, profound & ethereal...! i m totally ..unconditionally and madly in luv with ur FF....!! ❤️
i hv tears in my eyes...its awesome..!! 🤗🤗🤗

Thank you so much for those beautiful words! 🤗I always have a smile on my face when I read your comments. They mean a lot to me and make me want to write better and more often. I was thinking that it might be too early to put in the Jiya-Bharti part, but then I thought that their relationship has always been so honest and unaffected by what is happening with Bharti/Bhaskar. After all Jiya is a child and Bharti is the mother she has never had and has always wanted. Really glad you liked the part. I hope I can deliver with the next parts as I'm having some problems with what I'm writing at the moment..not really working, but hopefully it'll be okay...Thanks again😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved it👏
Loved Bharti and Jia, they are so cute together😊
Loved Armaan, so romantic and cute😳
Specially loved those parts which Tanu and Vini said.
Continue soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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~*~* Tera hone laga hoon *~*~

PART 4

The next morning Armaan woke up early, showered and went to wake up Jiya. Thankfully he didn't have any problems with her, but that was not the case with Bharti. Armaan tried to wake Bharti up, but to no avail. He shook her, drew the curtains and pulled the bedspread off her, but she continued to sleep and that too like she was dead. Armaan finally decided to splash some water on her face as he had no other option. Bharti woke up gasping taking a fighting stance and shouting "who's there?" Armaan couldn't help but laugh once he recovered from the initial shock.

Armaan: "Bharti...It's me..Armaan. "

Bharti: "Oh Armaan. Yeah, I forgot..Well I guess this is going to take some getting used to.."

Armaan: "Come on, Hurry up or else we're going to be late."

Bharti quickly got ready and had no idea what to wear. She thought it may not be all that appropriate to wear her mini's now that she's married, but she knew sari's to work were out of the question. So she settled for a skirt and top and of course her mangalsutra. She reached the kitchen to see breakfast on the table and Jiya already eating.

Bharti: "Good morning sweetheart. So sorry I'm late, waking up in the morning is not my strong point. All ready and packed for school?"

Jiya: "Yes Bharti Mama, don't worry Dada always manages to make everything happen on time."

The three of them finished up and left to leave Jiya at school. Jiya hugged and kissed both her Dada and Mama and went in the school gates.

Armaan: "At least she's not late...By the way do you always sleep like you're dead?"

Bharti: (blushing slightly) "No yaar, it's just difficult to wake up sometimes, I think I was just really tired from yesterday. But it was great fun, we must definitely do that regularly."

Armaan: "Yeah, Jiya had a blast. What time's Payal's flight?"

Bharti: "About 9.30am..Hey did Amarjeet Sir say what he wants to talk about?"

Armaan: "Nope, just said he wants us both there."

Armaan and Bharti reached Payal's house to see her with all her suitcases packed.

Payal hugged Bharti and told them to come in. Armaan said he'll go put all the bags in the car. There sure were a lot of bags and as he went out, he and Bharti shared a smile.

Payal: "And now? What's the private joke?"

Bharti: "Nothing yaar..Do you really have to go?"

Payal: "Yes Bhaskar...So..How was your 'suhaag raat' and all?"

Bharti: "Ahh..it was all fine, no problems. You know Payal, Armaan is actually a cool guy, he said we're friends and we don't have to rush into anything. He's not the 'hermit' I thought he was before. He just really loves his daughter and I can see all that now."

Payal: "Bhaskar..Have you ever noticed that the way you are with me and the way you are with Armaan is completely different..I don't see Bhaskar when you're with him"

Bharti: "Yeah well, I don't know what happens..I realised that too, when I'm with him I feel different. But anyway I need to be Bharti to get through this whole drama, so I guess I'm just getting into character, what say?" (bumping shoulders with Payal)

Payal: "Haha, so funny. Sometimes you get too much into character...So listen, you'll manage with me gone, won't you? Don't go do anything stupid or try to run away, ok? "

Bharti: "What choice do I have, huh? Yeah yeah, I'll be fine. And no running, promise."

Just then Armaan came back and said that they should be leaving or else Payal will miss her flight. They got to the airport on time and gave Payal's luggage in.

Armaan: "Have a safe trip Payal and do keep in touch."

Bharti: "Yeah, I want to speak to you everyday!"

Payal: "Haan meri ma, now can I go?"

Bharti: (pulling Payal into a hug) I'll miss you yaar, take care and come back soon.

Payal: "I'll miss you too and don't worry about anything. Bye"

Payal went off to board her flight and Bharti watched her go until she was out of sight. Armaan put his hand on her shoulder when he saw her wipe a tear away. He asked if she was okay and she just nodded. They then left to MU and everyone came to congratulate them again. Sunny came close to Bharti with a sulky look and nudged her. He whispered in her ear and asked her how her 'suhaag raat' with Armaan went. Bharti just looked at him and laughed to herself.

Bharti: (whispered back) I'm not telling (winked at Sunny)

Sunny just went off from there very upset. Amarjeet came down the stairs and told everyone it's not a holiday and they should all go back to work and called Bharti and Armaan to his cabin.

Amarjeet: "Well, you two have gotten married now even after all my warnings so I thought you'll deserve some sort of gift, some Consolation. Bharti, you are very talented and Armaan you are just so hardworking. Hopefully you two as a pair will now produce even better work for MU. On behalf of Men's Universe, here is a honeymoon package for you two. You two can choose any holiday destination you want and are free to go whenever you choose."

Bharti hesitated and looked at Armaan and Amarjeet told her to take it and he put the voucher in her hands.

Amarjeet: "Armaan, you seem quite lucky already. My wife will snatch a free holiday without any hesitation and she'll probably be off without me..."

Armaan: "Um..Thanks Sir."

Armaan and Bharti left from there and met Pushpak on the way who told them that the photo's of the models are on Bharti's desk and they need to choose the top 3. Bharti and Armaan went to Bharti's office and Bharti immediately picked up the file and started looking through it. Armaan looked with her deciding to let Bharti bring up the topic of the honeymoon. They choose the top 3 models after a bit of fighting and Bharti sat back and sighed when they were done. Armaan said he'll take the photo's to Amarjeet for approval and he started to leave.

Bharti: "Listen Armaan, about the honeymoon trip..How about if we postpone it and go later...I mean Jiya's school is on now and MU's birthday issue is coming up, so there will be tons of work to do."

Armaan: "Yeah, that sounds fine to me."

Armaan left and Bharti was wondering if Armaan was truly okay with going later as he looked a bit disappointed....

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved it.👏
loved Bharti-Payal part
Felt bad for Payal.
She is really sweet😊
A honeymoon package as a gift? cool
Thanks AJ (I mean thank you😆)
Armaan was good as usual.😊
continue soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey there! :)
Love the sunny and bharti part! It was funny! 😆 Sunny being disappointed with Armaan's marriage!
Yay honeymoon package for armaan and bharti! Oh Bharti pls go!! 😆
Love the fact that bharti is feeling more like a woman now.. You know your storyline just seems like the way BB would have gone if the Omkar track wasn't brought in..
Love it and pls continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Oh...Payal left.....thats so sad yaar...feeling bad for her...😒 shes a sweetheart..!!
n wow...Bhartis thinking of being a bit more Proper..now that shes married....luvd that...😳😳😳 especially that she carries her mangalsutra..!! ❤️
n well...seriously...Boss ho to AJ jaisa..warna na ho.. (i wish i culd show ur FF to my Boss...😡 he culd learn something..)...Honeymoon Package...wowwwwwwwwwww...
par yeh kya..Bharti...ruined Armus mood....😒 nt good.. my poor Jaanu.. must b Sad...🥺
nice epi...write soon!! ❤️

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