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Posted: 15 years ago
SHEENA!!!!!!!!!! lol finally I have come around to writing the shot you requested.... :P....sorry for the delay!! So peeps, it's an AbhiNiki one shot...hopefully you all will like it!! please comment/criticise! (the only reason why I'm not saying that it is bad is because I know I'll get yelled at by all my friends at IF for saying that :P but you know I want to say it :P)
p.s. actually it is really short and it did turn out to be really bad...you'll hate the ending...since it's incomplete!
For the Sake of Love

"Bhai, you can do it!" Sid patted Abhi's back as he pointed toward Abhi's destination...or rather his destiny.
"I...idoit! What if she....what if she says no?" Abhi couldn't believe that he had actually gotten into Sid's words.
"Bhai, she won't say no! Just do it! Please for me!" he pleaded in front of his older cousin
"Yeah...but idiot"
"Not idiot Bro, Sid!"
"Well, you are acting and sounding like an idiot right now! She is not going to agree and I am just going to get highly embarassed!" Abhi tried to reason with his annoying little cousin
"Bro...I am not asking you to go and ask her to murder someone...bhai...please for the sake of love!" Sid tried to give his best innocent look as a final move.
One look at Sid's face made Abhi give in immediately...
"Um...um...Niki...I...I want...to...um...talk to...you!" Niki was reading a file when she suddenly heard Abhi speaking to her
"What's wrong, Abhi?" Niki placed her file on the desk and looked at Abhi intently
"Um...I...hm..." Abhi couldn't find the right words or rather courage to say what he come to say
"Abhi...why are you so nervous? It can't be because of a case!" Niki rested her hand on his arm which made him give her a dreamy look.
"Niki...why would I waste our precious time together on a case?" Abhi still had the dreamy romantic looks while Niki just looked confused.
"Then...what is it Abhi?"
"I...I love you!" Abhi hugged her while she rested her head on his shoulder....though still confused.
"Abhi...you've said I love you to me so many times...don't tell me that's what made you nervous!" Niki got out of the hug and smiled at Abhi
"For the sake of love"
"What?" Niki looked at him surprised
"I said...um...what I mean to say is...um...what can you...um do for the sake of love?" Abhi had no idea what approach he was adopting to ask her what he had to
"Abhi...what are you talking about?"
"Just answer...my question please!"
"Fine...I can do anything for love!"
"Hm....can you...can you...kidnap for love?"
"What?"
"Sid...sid...needs help! He...um...is going to kidnap Tamana again...but this time...he'll make sure that it is Tamana he kidnaps and not Naina" Abhi tried not to meet Niki's eyes...fearing that she might kill him with just one look.
"You...you were nervous because you wanted to ask me to help you kidnap Tamana?" Niki couldn't believe Abhi...instead of...proposing...this is what he was asking her to do.
"I know...I know...I am not the type of person to get involved in this kind of stuff...but remember I helped you kidnap Dr. Riddhima....so help me out this time!" Abhi thought that the unbelievable look he got from Niki was because he was proposing a kidnap plan.
"Abhi...I can't believe you!!" Niki picked that she was reading before and left the room in a huff.
Abhi didn't know what just happened...was she mad at him for agreeing with his cousin on the kidnapping plan? But wasn't she the one who kidnapped Riddhima with the others?
"Sid bhaiyya...that wasn't really nice!" JP whispered in Sid's ear
"What? I thought he was going to propose to her?" Sid gave an innocent look to JP
"By asking me to help you and him kidnap Tamana?" Sid and JP jumped up and turned around to face their ultimate fear....Dr. Nikita!
While Sid and JP got a earful from Nikita...Abhi was still standing in Niki's office...wondering how to convince Niki to help him and Sid kidnap Tamana.
Edited by princessuma - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
he bhaggu you r fast really fast


I liked this version of abhi dara hua kitna cute lagta hai :)

nice 1 sumi!!!!

Lekha
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

he bhaggu you r fast really fast


I liked this version of abhi dara hua kitna cute lagta hai :)

nice 1 sumi!!!!

Lekha

aww thanks!! lol i like dara hua abhi too...and yayyy!! now I know your name...hi Lekha!! lol you already know my name! :P
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Posted: 15 years ago

Its a nice scene but i magine it in reverse as if Nikki's is going to help sid and Abhi scold both of them for that.Becauze if looked at the character sketch mostly nikki involved in this kind of stuff and always work in barrier.Don't take it otherwise.I loved AN a lot.So It what i observe in last year AN scenes.

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Posted: 15 years ago
That was really funny....planning to kidnap Tamz and trying to convince Nikki to help them out by making Abhi confess his love...what a hatke love confession...😉
in their previous attempt they kidnapped Naina instead of Tamz...Yuvi ne toh kachumber bana diya hoga Sid, JP aur Jiggy ka....😆
all in all a nice one-shot
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Posted: 15 years ago
😆 😆 agar yeh modi aise hi niki kp patayega na toh phir iski shaadi nadz ke FF tarah hi hogi
n 4r u i am :(((((((((
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kidnapped again? Sheesh, how many times are they gonna try? Plus, if they kidnapped the wrong person, wouldn't that mean Tamz already engaged? Le, mujhe kya pari hai, it's OS! 😆

Now, who's an idiot? Abhi bhaiya didn't even propose!!! Seriously, the Modi brothers need to get their head checked!! But it was fun to see how Abhi bhaiya's gyaan is only for Sid, lekin jab khud ki bari aati hai, goes all down the drain! 😆

Wonderfully written Sumi!!! 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey special sumaiya..
great part..
abhi n nikki,,but the end was 😆
bechara abhi..hes still finding out a way how nikki will agree to help him n sid kidnap tamanna..
hmm,,sid definetly needs that earful from nikki..gosh!!
Yeh modi bhais bhi na..wasnt this a OS of sid-abhi rather than abhi-nikki...
hmm..great as always..
sri:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey special sumaiya..
ayy!!!how come i missed :( this sajan OS
its nice..the argument on their date..lol
"Hm...we are what we are and that's what attracts us to each other, doesn't it?"

"We are not attracted....I love you Chashmish!"

"I love you too, Samrat!"

We are both very different from each other...but there is one thing in common between us...we are both in love with each other!!
great@!!
sri:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sumi Di! =D Awesome yaar! I LOVE ur One-Shots! hehe seriously! I still have to read the others..and i will comment on them too! And this comment is just a "small" commment! I have a long one coming haha :P Awesome AN one shot tho! :D Great! :D

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