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Posted: 15 years ago
the part was awesome
amazing scenes
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Hey guys,
I sincerely hoped some more comments but then I guess it's my fault as I am not updated regularly. What can I do it's all due to studies. But yeah no more wait and here is the finale.

PART 15-> EPILOGUE

Ridhima(shouted on top of her voice): JUST SHUT UP, I DON'T WANT TO LISTEN YOU

Armaan(innocently):but angel what have I done?

(Armaan was quite surprised by this, she usually never shout on him like this, in last four years of knowing each other and one years since they got married, she got angry with him and shout a bit but never like this. She sighed and sat on the bed while holding her head. He went to her and bend on his knew in front of her. He hold her hand and asked)

Armaa:what happened?

(He noticed some tears coming out, he really got worried)

Armaan:Ridhima baby, what happened?

Ridhima(teary):I don't know, I don't know what is happening to me

(As soon as she said this, she ran in the bathroom and throw up. Armaan got really worried seeing her like this. He quickly went to take the medicines, coming back, he gave her a medicine and then called a doctor. He made her lay on the bed and didn't allowed her to move.)

(Soon doctor came and checked her.)

Doctor:Mr Mallik, there is nothing to get worried about, she just got morning sickness, it all happens in pregnancy

Armaan:Pregnancy????

Dr:yes Mr Mallik, she is three months pregnant

(Armaan got shocked for a while, as soon as he digested the information, he jumped in the air)

Armaan:I am going to be a dad

(He went to her and hugged Ridhima, who was still in daze and she was touching her stomach with a smile. She too hugged him back.)

Dr:these are some medicines and do take care of her, don't get worried seeing her have mood swings, it's all normal in pregnancy

(the doctor smiled and left. Armaan hugged her tighter.)

Armaan:Ridhima, I am so happy, I can't believe this

(he moves back and showered her face with kisses.)

Ridhima:Me too Armaan

(she hugged him tightly and cried)

Armaan:why are you crying?

Ridhima:It's the feeling to have another life in myself, I feel so special and different, I don't know how to explain

Armaan:I can understand baby

(he hugged and kissed her forehead affectionately)

(later in the day, they called Angad-Kripa, Jiya-Neev and their family. Who told them that they'll be there in an hour)

(In an hour, all reached in their house. Angad and Kripa were accompanied by a little kid around three year and Neev carefully brought Jiya in the house, she was 7 months pregnant.)

(All went in Ridhima's room and congratulated her)

Angad:Akshat bacha come here, Ridhima poopo wants to meet you

(Angad called Akshat, his three years old son, who was running in the hall)

(Akshat looked at them and said cutely)

Akshat:Phoopo, mein aa laha(raha) houn

(He ran in Ridhima room and to Ridhima and hugged her. Jiya and Kripa were sitting on Ridhima side.)

Akshat:phoopo, aap thik hai? aap aishe kun
(aise kyon) lete huwe ho?

(she kissed him)

Ridhima:kuch nahi shona, bus todha so bukhar hogaya hai

(Akshat touched her forehead and then stood up like big man with his hand on his hip. He was facing Armaan now)

Akshat:Aap meli(meri) phoopo(poopo) ka thik se dyan nahi lakte(rakte) ho na?

(He asked sternly and with a cute frown on his face)

Armaan:maine kuch nahi kiya, main to thikse dyan rakhta houn

Ridhima:han shona, Armaan ne kuch nahi kiya

Akshat:Supelman(superman), meri phoopo ka khayak lakha(rakha) kalo, woh itni cute hain

Armaan:han woh bohot cute hain, aur main unka thik se dyan rakh raha houn.(he sat on the bed and took him in his lap) woh to inki tabyat is liye kharab hogayi kyon ki hamara baby hone wala hai na

Akshat:Acha supelman, Jiya Phoopp ka bhi baby hone wala hai, abhi tak nahi huwa, lekin unka tummy big hota ja laha hai

(Hearing this all chuckled)

Armaan:saber kara shonu, saber ka phal meetha hota hai

Akshat:ok (as soon as heard 'sabar ka phal', he felt that he in hungry so he looked toward kripa) moma, mujhe bhook lagi hai

Kripa:acha baby mein aayi

(She took the milk bottle for the bag and then went in the kitchen)

Neev: so how is going your business, Armaan?

Armaan:great, but you know, no business talk at home

(Armaan made him remember Ridhima's rule. She hated when they discussed about business. So he promised her he will never talk about business at home)

Angad; guys you wait here, I'll be right back

(Saying that he left. Akshat kept sitting in Ridhima's lap but then Armaan took hold of him as he noticed that she was tired. When he took the baby, she smiled as in thanking him and he nodded in response and mouthed 'anything for you' with a smile)

IN THE KITCHEN

(Kripa was shaking the milk bottle when suddenly someone caught her by her waist. She jumped in horror but calmed as she knew only he can provide her this warmth. She calmly stood up and then leaned her back against Angad's chest)

(He gently placed her hairs on the left side of her neck and then he nuzzled on the right side of her neck)

Angad(whispered while nuzzling):you are looking breathtaking

Kripa(she gasped for air):.....Angad please not here, all are waiting for us

(Angad kissed her neck passionately and then twirling her which caused her to face him, he kissed her hard and she too responded back with all the passion. Then Angad moved back and said)

Angad: that will be enough for half an hour, I love you

Kripa:I love you too

(Then pecking on her cheek, he went back in the room and sat down with them. In five minutes, Kripa too came back and blushed slightly looking at Angad who smiled looking at his beautiful wife, who still blush after so much years of their marriage. Then Kripa looked at Akshat who was in Armaan's lap)

Kripa:aaja mera baby

(She picked him and made him sat on the bed next to Ridhima and then she made him feed his milk. All smiled looking at him, his antics were so cute)

(They all kept discussing and women talked about how it felt to be a mom. Soon enough their parents to joined them and congratulated them)

AFTER 5 MONTHS

(Armaan and Ridhima were sleeping in each other's arm. Suddenly pain erupts in her stomach and she hold tightly on Armaan's chest. Armaan felt a slight pain on his chest and he woke up. As soon as he woke up, he found her shouting in pain)

Armaan(concerned):Ridhima, baby, what happened?

Ridhima(wincing in pain): Armaan, I feel like, it's time

Armaan:oh shit!! but it's just your eight months

Ridhima(shouted Ridhima): I don't know Armaan, but be quick

Armaan:ok baby

(He stood up immediately and picked her up in his arm and rushed toward his car. He made her lay in the back sit and drove toward the hospital. In the way, he called everybody and told them about this.)

(As he reached in the hospital, he picked her up in his arms and rushed in the hospital. Soon she was taken in the OT)

(All joined him after a while, there was a new addition in there family which was Neev and Jiya's son, Dharya.)

(Armaan was in the OT with Ridhima. At first they didn't allowed but after Armaan's convincing they gave up. He was in the OT, his eyes were closed and he was holding her hand. Her hold was tight on his hand but he knew she was in much more pain that he was feeling at the time.)

Dr:we have to give her anesthesia injection

(Armaan opened his eyes and looked toward the doctor)

Armaan:injection why?

Dr:It would be better to do an operation than like this

Armaan:do whatever you want but she shouldn't feel any pain

(the female doctor smiled and nodded. They started operating and after few hours, Armaan heard a crying voice. He was so overwhelmed.)

nurse:sir

(she said forwarding the baby toward Amraan he shook his head which made the nurse shocked)

Armaan: let her wake up first

(As soon as he heard this, he heard another crying voice. He frowned an looked toward the nurse)

Nurse:congrats sir, you are proud parents of twin baby boy

(Armaan was so happy and even has a tear of happiness, he told the nurse to put them in a crib. As Ridhima wake up, she was feeling really weak. He pushed the lock of her hair back)

Armaan:jaan, we have twins

(Ridhima started crying, Armaan hugged her knowing why, it just feel so special all this. He told the nurse to bring the baby. They were still in a mess. They hold the baby together. Their happiness had no bound at that moment.)

(After some time, she was shifted in a normal room, all came and wished them. They were just so happy to see the identically twins.)

(Jiya wanted to pick the baby up but Neev too wanted to pick him up)

Jiya; no, I will pick him up first

Neev: no me

Jiya: no me

Armaan: guys, guys, calm down it's hospital, the babies are sleeping and Ridhima is feeling week, how about Jiya pick up this one and Neev, you pick up the other one.

(Neev and Jiya looked at each other and smile sheepishly, knowing why they were fighting, actually they were fighting over nothing, this was just their daily routine. Even after being parents, they do have silly fights like this but they love each other a lot.)

(Neev and Jiya picked up the babies and then everybody left Armaan and Ridhima alone as they thought Ridhima needs rest.)

(Armaan went to her and sat down holding her hand.)

Armaan:you feeling weak?

Ridhima:yeah but Armaan; the happiness we got made me forgot all my pain and weakness

(Armaan nodded and smiled)

Armaan:what do you want to name them?

Ridhima: Arav and the second you decide

Armaan:Riddhan

(Both smiled, while Ridhima was feeding one baby by herself, on the same time Armaan was feeding the milk to other one. They decided to do alternatively as it got hard for one person to feed both on the same time.)

(While feeding the baby, Armaan was just staring at Ridhima, it was a beautiful sight seeing a mom feeding their baby. He smiled through his tears and on impulse kissed Ridhima's forehead, who blushed.)

Armaan(whispered): Hamara love bohot hit hit hai

(On which Ridhima giggle weakily.)

(After making the baby sleep, Armaan made Ridhima slept and he just kept staring her.)

(there was a time, he never thought to have a family but now he was married and he has two cute baby boy. He loves her wife Ridhima crazily, she is his life. he smiled and slept her holding her closed to his heart)

(They were a perfect family, all lived happily ever after, even tough they had to go through some ups and down but they were able to solve them, the only secret was being with each other and supporting each other.)

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Hey Folks,
Finally, here I am, I know you guys must have thought that hse has forgotten the update but no, I just caught again and I am really for that again, I always make you wait for so long but this this it's for the mast time as it's the epilogue :)
So this was the Epilogue.
Do tell me if you liked the part or not?, please leave your comments as they support me a lot.
Seriously, I didn't got enought comment but yeat I still decide to post the part for all the people who still read my FF, thank you guys and love you loads for supporting me :).
I still wonder if there is someone reading this FF, lol.
PM will come later.

Love you loads
Neevfan😳


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Posted: 15 years ago
hey... sorry abt the late comment.
was caught up with work.
read da last two parts.
n they were amazing.
it was an awesum ff.
n thnx 4 sending da pms.
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Posted: 15 years ago
AUSOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE DEARRRRRRRRRRRR

U ARE LIKEEEEEEEEEE.................U LEFT ME SPEECHLESS

U ROCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

TRUELYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

LOVE
KSHMA
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg it was sooo cute!!
awsome ending =)

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