Simi torn in 2 worlds

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ramas

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Posted: 16 years ago

Simi is thinking how can I say no to nakul saying no to him means hurting papaji. or should I say no to abhi

. there are so many troubles in the house and probabely anita will figure out abhi and I have something going on. May be she is right Abhi is not right for me but he is my love and my life. while saying no to nakul will hurt mama and papa. What I do now? ruin my life marrying nakul or ruin my family by going out with abhi.

In between 2 worlds

Ek taraf kartvay hai

aur saamne mera pyar

Ek taraf armano ki lash hai

aur saamne meri zindagi mera abhi

Ek taraf samaj ka sath hai

aur saamne kathinayia

Ek taraf maa paa ki aash

hai toh saame dildar khada hai

Ek taraf sapne bikhare huye lagte hai

to saamne sapno ka saudagar dihkta hai

Ek taraf zaher ka kadva ghunt liye ajnabi hai

to pass mere meri jaanki amrit may muskurahat hai

ab kise pakdu or kise chhodu

koi to mujhe samjaye

kya zindagi ko chhod maut ko gale lagana hoga

kya pyar ko bhul kartvay nibhana hoga

kya beti banke apno armano ko

apne pyar ko apne hatho se mitana hoga

kaise do raahe par khadi hun aaj

dono taraf haar hi haar hai

aiye niyati ye kaisi kismat hai

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Posted: 16 years ago

Ramas,
Nice poem. You have captured Simi's dilemma very beautifully.
But I didn't understand just 1 line towards the end - "dono taraf haar hi haar hai"
Why would either of the choices be 'haar'?
At one end is Abhi and the other end Nakul. So, why would choosing Abhi be a 'haar'?
By choosing Abhi, does Simi think the 'haar' is because her parents would not approve of such a relation? or do you mean something else?

or did I not understand it correctly at all? Thanks in advance.

...oh again, the poem was beautiful!!

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ramas

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bee5
Ramas,
Nice poem. You have captured Simi's dilemma very beautifully.
But I didn't understand just 1 line towards the end - "dono taraf haar hi haar hai"
Why would either of the choices be 'haar'?
At one end is Abhi and the other end Nakul. So, why would choosing Abhi be a 'haar'?
By choosing Abhi, does Simi think the 'haar' is because her parents would not approve of such a relation? or do you mean something else?

or did I not understand it correctly at all? Thanks in advance.

...oh again, the poem was beautiful!!

thanks dear haar in the sense that her family has to go thru with so much in the society for taking such step for marrying abhi. as she knows anita na dher parents will not spare them. Of course abhi is worth all the pain. Simi always thinks negatively as she is very inseure.

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bee5

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ramas
thanks dear haar in the sense that her family has to go thru with so much in the society for taking such step for marrying abhi. as she knows anita na dher parents will not spare them. Of course abhi is worth all the pain. Simi always thinks negatively as she is very inseure.

OK, understood now. So, the other 'haar' is the haar of her parents. Yes, you are right, Simi thinks so negatively and hence that feeling of hers - 'dono taraf haar'.

I hope Simi remembers what Guruji had told her - path that leads to Abhi is long and toutureous one!

Atleast she has this Guruji to tell her that!! Imagine we mere mortals, it would be so easy if someone told us something like that - whats in store for us in future. Life would be so simple! Ah... thats a totally diff topic 😉
Thanks again.

Edited by bee5 - 16 years ago

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