os after 14th dec epi.PLZ READ (COMP IN 3 PRTS)

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hey friendz................i knw after watchin ysterdays epi many of sajan fans are very very sad.............bcoz there was barely ne sajan moments. nw we also don knw wats goin to hapn nxt!!! bt accordin to me or rather here's a os on hw the story should proceed................hope u all will like it.
re-cap: samrat comes back to consiousness, suhani decides to disclose the truth to raj and after coming back with the doctor gunjan is shocked to find samrat missin from his bed.....................the story continues...................
Scene: suhani n adhiraj standin outside (just the place where they were standin ysterday).
seeing suhani a bit uncomfortable raj thinks that she might be still worried about samrat, so he tries to console her. "kya hua nupur, maine kahan na isme tumhari koi galti nhi hai...............it's jst an accident. aur mera vishwaas karo samrat ko kuch nhi hoga, wo bilkul thik ho jayega".
suhani (still hesitatingly): ra....j mujhe tumse kuch kahena hai..........
"ha bolo kya baat hai"
suhani continues....................main jaanti hu main jo kahene waali hu use sunne k baad sahayad tum mujhse fir kabhi baat nhi karoge, meri shakal tak dekhna pasand nhi karoge..............
before suhani could complete raj comes in front of her and puts his fimger on her lips, "nupur duniya mein aisi koi cheez nhi hai jo mujhe tumse dur kar sake, aur agar fir bhi tumhe lagta hai ki tumhari batein sunkar main tumhe chod dunga to fir rahene do................
the scene shifts to the hospital bed where at present only dctr atul n gunjan is standin...................gunjan panicin "yeh kya...........sa...am.rat to abhi yahan par..........jab maine use ankh kholte hue dekha......to............aur abh..............kahan chala gaya is halat mein"
Understandin gunjan's condition atul tries to pacify her, "gunjan plz don cry, chaliye bahar dekhte hai, is halat mein kahan ja sakta hai wo............."
but before he could complete his sentence gunjan rushes out of the room
if we remember, outside the room diya, benji, uday, mayank n nupur were standin
gunjan, "di tumne samrat ko kahin jaate hue dekha hai kya"..............every 1 is shoced to here this.............nupur "nhi main kuch der k liye bahar gayi thi, shayad ........diya"
diya, "no hum to dr. chamber mein sammy k condition ko lekar discuss kar rahe the...........lekin gunjan wo to behosh tha na......."
"ha lekin kuch der pahele hi hosh aaya hai samrat ko...........aur pata nhi wo kahan chala gaya"
pacifyin gunjan mayank replies, "tum chinta mat karo gunjan, wo yehi kahi hoga, hum sab milkar dhundte hai............" and they all starts searchin for samrat.
scene shifts back to raj and suhani...................."nhi raj plz plz mujhe kahene do........... (raj tryin to say somethin but suhani stops him), main already ek galti kar chuki hu ab aur koi galti nhi"..........then turnin away from raj, she walks some steps away and says, "raj tum jo soch rahe ho main wo nhi hu............"
a shoced raj "matlab.................."
suhani turns back to him................"main nupur nhi suhani hu....................(and she narates the whole story from startin......why she came to india, metin the gang, landin up as nupur, revelin her truth to gunjan, then mayank n nupur.............every single thin).............after she completes (by nw raj is totally shaken and he sits down on a bench. suhani coming to raj "main janti hu tum mujhse nhi balki nupur se pyaar kiya hai, par main kya karu raj...............jhoothi nupur bante bante pata hi nhi chala k kab main tumhari nupur ban gayi", her voice gets cholked as she completes her sentence......................."suhani........" suhani hears a voice from behind and as she turns 😲
samrat was standin there...........not understandin wat to do or say, suhani stands like a statue unable to move.............samrat coming forward "tum nupur nhi...............su............suha......ani!!!!" his voice is terribly shakin. its obvious that the earth beneath his feet has already slipped, but before he could say nemore......."plz samrat kuch bhi kahene se pahele ek baar suhani k taraf ek bhai bankar dekho", gunjan comes and stands beside suhani. one more shock for samrat............."chashmish tum!!!"
"ha samrat kisis ko kuch bhi kahene se pahele ek baar halat to ko samajh ne ki koshish karo"-----------as samrat turns he finds nupur and mayank standin.........
"tum dono bhi............tum sab ne mujhse...........itna bara............" aa........h, before he could complete his words his head starts paining, "samrat" gunjan cries while coming forward to hold him, but samrat stops her......... by nw raj has overcome the trauma a bit and comes forward to help sam' "chalo samrat thoda aram kar lo, warna dard aur zyaada hoga" , and leaves with sam without even givin a singl glance to suhani.......every body follows xcept gunjan
scene sam's ward dr atul chekin the nervs of sam while other stood at a distance
dr. atul "ok he is out of danger, thoda rest ki zarurat hai..............i hope kal tak aap log inhe le ja sakte hai" and he departs". raj, "ok samrat to mujhe bhi ab jana chahiye", and as he tries to leave mayank stops him, "ek minute adhiraj is pure incident mein tumbhi utna hi shamil hp jitna l hum log............so plz"
"mian jaanti hu raj, maine jo kuch bhi kiya wo bilkul sahi nhi tha, pad main kya karti.............agar tum mere jagah hote to tum kya karte. bolo raj kya tum apne pyaar ko bachane ki koshish nhi karte........bolo raj" nupur cant say nemore n she starts cryin. its enough for raj and he bursts, (tho nt loudly): par aisa nhi hai nupur........yahan tum ne apne pyaar ko bachane k liye mere emotions ko ek mazak bana diya. aakhir kyun nupur kyun............"
"tum galat soch rahe ho raj, kisine tumhare emotions k sath nhi khela hai..."
"an astonished raj, "mayank tum abh bhi yehi kahoge???"
"ha, abh bhi............kyun ki main jaanta hu bhale hi yeh luv story ek jhut se shuru hui ho........lekin tum dono k dil mein ek dusre k liye jo feelins hai wo jhut nhi hai...........aur yeh baat tum bhi thukra nhi sakte raj (raj is mumbeb)...........to fir kya fark padta hai ki wo suhani hai ya nupur, pyaar insaan se kiya jata hai uske naam se nhi............."
"lekin mayank, pyaar mein vishwaas ka hona bahaut zaruri hota hai, shayad tum yeh bhul rahe ho".samrat replies sternly.............."jaanta hu samrat, pad kya tum mujhe bata sakte ho ki suhani pad tum kyun trust nhi kar sakte..........us din to uske kahene pad canteen mein tumne apni aankhen bandh kar li thi...........tab tumhe uspar trust tha.........kal uske diye luky charm par tumhe bharosa tha.......kyunki ki tab wo nupur thi............aur aaj nhi , sirf is liye kyunki aaj wo nupur nhi suhani hai..........timhari bahen!!!"
now suhani who thru out the conve was standin near the door comes front and goes on hes knees in front of sam, "bhai main jaanti hu, tum mujhse bahaut bahaut nafrat karte ho............par main kya karu bhai, kya karu agar main tumhare bagair jee nhi sakta............batao is mein kya galti hai meri agar har saal rakhi k din main yeh soch kar pura din bita du k shayad bhai is saal mere liye letter bheja ho, apna pyaar............agar apne bhai k pyaar k liye tarasna galti hai, to thik hai main galat hu; agar apne bhai ko pane ki koshish karna galat hai to thik hai main galat hu......... aur yeh galti main har baar baar baar karungi , tab tak jab tak tum mujhe maar nhi kar dete................
still writin..........................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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continuation................................
suhani's convo...........she cant say ne more r burst into tears.........................
samrat holdin her arms, makin her stand..........." nhi main tumhe maaf nhi karungi, bhul gayi maine kahan tha na mujhse jhut mat bolna.........par tum ho ki........." he too cant say ne more and hug her...........every bodys face lite up on sein dis.............then samrat wipin suhani's tears, "agar ab kabhi bhi mujhse dur gayi ya fir jhut bola to............." b4 he could complete suhani holds her ears n says "no"
"tum suhani ko maaf kar sakte ho lekin main tumhe nhi..............." raj says harshly.........."how dare u, tum meri suhani ko itna rulane ki himmat kiya kaise". on this note suhani blushes........"dude shayad tum bhul gaye ho, wo pahele meri bahen fir..............." "fir hi shi pad hai to meri grl frn".everybody strts laughin
mayur comin forwrd to sammy n raj, "hum dono bhi tum se maafi mangna chahte hai..............we r.........."
sammy interrupts, "it's ok dude"
raj: i think hume ab chalna chahiye............aur samrat tumhe aaram ki zarurat hai.........and everybody leves. samrat relaxes on his bed, his head restin on the back support of the bed and hands on his forehead...............a small noise.........
"kyun aayi ho yahan", sammy asks without openin his eyes, not gettin ne reply he opens his eyes and as he suspected..............his be-loved chashmish (don knw abt his present feelings for her) was standin with her eyes on the floor............
"tumhe pata nhi doctr ne kya kahan hai...............mujhe rest ki zarurat hai...........isiliye.........."
"samrat plz, main jaanti hu tum mujhse naraaz ho, aur yeh narazgi bilkul jayaz hai.............par agar main us din tumhe sach bata deti to fir kya tum suhaNI ko apnate?"
"main wo sab nhi jaanna chahata chasnmish...............yaad hai hamari 1st date pad tumne mujhse ek promise li thi k zindegi bhaar main tumhe apna best friend manu, tumse kabhi kuch na chupaao............aur tum hi........"
"main soch bhi nhi sakta k tum, meri chashmish----------jispar mujhe apne aap se, yahan tak ki us bhagwaan se bhi zyaada bharosa tha, wo mere saat aisa karegi. itna bara sach chupayegi........!!!" samrat cant say ne more...........and he takes off his face from chashmish, hidin his tears............gunjan can bear no more.........she runs to samrat and holds his hands..........."samrat......."
breakin himself free from gunjan's hold........."plz gunjan, leave me alone. main kuch der akele rahena chahata hu..........." gunjan stands walks backwrd still lokin at her bf and then turns back n runs out of the room keepin the door opened; samrat lukin at the wa thru the opend door................
wrkin on the lst part..................
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Scene: bhushan house, gunjan entering her room............heart broken nupur comes out from bath room........... "are tu aa gayi gunjan.........bahaut der laga di. by god aaj jo hua mujhe to bilkul karan johar ki film lag rhi thi----by god. sach mein mayank sahi kaheta hai..........sach ka samna karna kitna bhi mushkil kyun na ho, pad baad mein us sach se jo khushi milti hai wo kisi aur mein nhi hoti. aaj maqin suhani k liye bahaut khush hu...............use sirf apna bhai hi nhi, apna pyaar............ (as she luks towards gunjan............she seems to be lost)............ gunjan was sittin on her bed.......from the appearence nt at all listenin to her di. nupur comin to her, puttin her hands on her shoulder............."gunjan ,(gunjan comin bck to reality) tu thik to hai na..............sab thik............(sittin nxt her)...........tere aur samrat k beech............" gunjan not ready to speak wat hapnd at the hospital, "koi baat nhi hai di, sab thik hai. (takin nupurs hand ih her)...........wo actually main thodi thak gayi. kuch der aaram kar lu fir baat karte hai.........". "ha yeh sahi hai, waise bhi raat k teen bajh chuke hai............tu so ja gunjan kal baat karte hai". and after freshn up both the sis goes off to sleep.............tho its nt posibl for gunjan to sleep............nind to use aati hai jiske mannmein shanti ho....yahan to uska sab kuch lut chuka hai.............itni mushkil lo k baad use apna pyaar mila, uska saat mila..........aur aaj , par wo karti bhi to kya............usne jo kuch bhi kiya hai sirf aur sirf apne pyaar k khushi k liye ..................thinkin all these gunjan con tinuously changes sides............sam doin the same in hospital..............(bck ground misic.............pyaar hai ya saza 4m saalm_e_ishq). gunjan standin in front of samrat in hospital..........."samrat plz plz mujhse muh mat feero, achcha tum hi batao aisa kya karu jisse tum maan jaoge...........jo tum kahoge main wohi karungi, promise........." "kyun tumhe nhi pata............" asks sammy. gunjan luks at samrat and recollects the incident wen she stopd samrat from comin inside the house, as adhiraj was there, samrat was ngry........he strted takin wid sidi...............gunjan callin him a child...........he in turn said..............."manane ka tareeka batau...........and".............."gunjan, gunjan uth subha ho gayi hai.." gunjan opens her eyes an finds nupur stndin in frnt. "kya gunjan samrat se milne nhi jana hai............" gunjan jumps up on her feet..........."oh to yeh sapna tha" she murmurs within. scene: drawin room of bhushan house...........good mornin diya, gud mornin uday bhaiya...... gud mornin nupur---both of them togethr. nupur gunjan kahan hai? nupur: bas aa rhi hai..........(then lukin at the stairs).....are gunjan tu kahan ja rhi hai.........samrat se milne nhi jayegi? gunjan: (already dressed up n is ready to go out some where)........u.......wo mujhe kuch kaam hai, main kaam khatam karke chali jaungi, ok bye..(n hurriedly goes out) scene: samrat's ward in sanjeevani............samrat still asleep, gunjan slowly entered the room. a nurse was there, seeing gunjan comin inside she smiles and leaves. gunjan very slowly comes and sits beside sleepin samrat............ she stares at him with the most affectionate look one can ever find........a look so mesmerizin so captivatin, that even the greatest of all enemies will go down on his knees and beg to god to c his own reflectn in these eyes............"WORLD'S MOST BEAUTIFUL EYES". GUNJAN VERY SOFTLY (holdin sam's hands): main jaanti hu samrat tum mujhse bahaut naaraz ho..............par main yeh bhi jaanti hu, k tum mujhse bahaut zyaada pyaar bhi karte ho kal tumne jo kuch bhi kahan, mujhe bura nhi laga..............kyunki wo tumhara haq hai, aakhir bauji ne tumhe meri responsibility jo di hai............haq bhi wahi hoti hai, jahan responsibility. jahan tak baat hai tumhare naaraaz gi ki.............(with a sweet smile) mujhe pata hai, tumhe kaise manana hai.............(then looking aroud to be double sutre whether ne 1 is comin or not...........) she comes even more closer to samrat , sits next to his shoulder n silently bends down towards his face..............without thinkin twice kisses him on his fore head, then his eyes....... further more the nose of sleepy samrat....................and puts her face down n smiles, her face turns red as she was blushin like a red rose. tho samrat is sleepin her xpresns were as if samrat is aware of wat she is doin.............then she thinks somethin, closes her eyes............bends towards right side and.....................kisses samrats cheeks............😳 she sits bck to her positn, stil blushin, she can no more face samrat, she turns bck and attempts to run..........wen....................some body pulls her hand................................ "chashmish..................." a freeezin sensatn runs down her back bone..............aw.................samrat is awake..........kya usne.....................gunjan can think no more............." mere taraf dekho gi nhi chashmish?" and he makes her turn arround...................gunjan still lukin at the floor, she cant face him , no no she simply cant....................samrat still lukin at her, now gives killin naughty smile and continues, "apne hi pao pad kulari mar di chashmish..........." unable to understand the meanin gunjan blankly luks to samrat............."ab to har rooz ruthna padega..............na chahate hue bhi.........." and before gunjan could do or tell nethin he pulls her hand (he was stil holdin it) and hugs her tightly..............."i luv u chashmish.............i luv u" freein herself............"i luv u too" puttin his both hands on gunjan's shoulder "hm.............yeh to manane k liye............aur meri victry wali........... removin his hand gunjan turns and sits nxt to samrat, restin on his body, "uske liye aur ek match jeetni padegi.........." and gives a wink. both of them smiles, rubs nose to nose..........samrat hugs her from back, kisin her cheeks............... THE END
GUYS PLZ DO COMNT.................WHETHR U LIKE IT OR NT...............ME WIL WAIT
Edited by cute_monaya_fan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
thanks so mucj jaan 4 this...
i hate cv's ... but u showed me atleast sth of what i wanted...
thanku so so so much dear lov u 4 it ...
b believe me the last sce ne made me mad
awwwwwwwwww i lov u lov u lov u 4 this
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏

This was awesome!!! Beautiful!!! Amazing!! Mindblowing!!!
CVs ne to ab tak aisa kuch nahi dikhaya, but i m damn sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy tht u wrote & gave us something to cheer.

Everything was sooooooooo perfect, from suhani's explanation, her emotions, samrat''s emotions, samrat-suhani patch up, samrat's naraazagi towards chashmish, & finally the end scene. it was very beautiful & 😳 Ab Chashmish ka kya kahna!!!!! By God!!!

Kamaal kar diya yaar!!!

Thanku once again for sharing it with us.

Loads of love
vinu😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ammmaaziing I LOVED SAMRAT -SUHANI part ..jus amazing !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg that was excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏
muah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! to u too
that was simply superb yaar kya scene likha hai yaar
kaash aisa serial me bhi hota to maaza aa jata.
😉
this was the best thing that can happen after what happened yesterday.its going in my favourites😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwwwwww..........That's just so so GREAT............👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aw.......i really wish this happens!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dolly18

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

thanks so mucj jaan 4 this...
i hate cv's ... but u showed me atleast sth of what i wanted...
thanku so so so much dear lov u 4 it ...
b believe me the last sce ne made me mad
awwwwwwwwww i lov u lov u lov u 4 this

n i luv u too dolly, thnx for ur so..sweet response
Edited by cute_monaya_fan - 15 years ago

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