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hey friendz................i knw after watchin ysterdays epi many of sajan fans are very very sad.............bcoz there was barely ne sajan moments. nw we also don knw wats goin to hapn nxt!!! bt accordin to me or rather here's a os on hw the story should proceed................hope u all will like it.
re-cap: samrat comes back to consiousness, suhani decides to disclose the truth to raj and after coming back with the doctor gunjan is shocked to find samrat missin from his bed.....................the story continues...................
Scene: suhani n adhiraj standin outside (just the place where they were standin ysterday).
seeing suhani a bit uncomfortable raj thinks that she might be still worried about samrat, so he tries to console her. "kya hua nupur, maine kahan na isme tumhari koi galti nhi hai...............it's jst an accident. aur mera vishwaas karo samrat ko kuch nhi hoga, wo bilkul thik ho jayega".
suhani (still hesitatingly): ra....j mujhe tumse kuch kahena hai..........
"ha bolo kya baat hai"
suhani continues....................main jaanti hu main jo kahene waali hu use sunne k baad sahayad tum mujhse fir kabhi baat nhi karoge, meri shakal tak dekhna pasand nhi karoge..............
before suhani could complete raj comes in front of her and puts his fimger on her lips, "nupur duniya mein aisi koi cheez nhi hai jo mujhe tumse dur kar sake, aur agar fir bhi tumhe lagta hai ki tumhari batein sunkar main tumhe chod dunga to fir rahene do................
the scene shifts to the hospital bed where at present only dctr atul n gunjan is standin...................gunjan panicin "yeh kya...........sa...am.rat to abhi yahan par..........jab maine use ankh kholte hue dekha......to............aur abh..............kahan chala gaya is halat mein"
Understandin gunjan's condition atul tries to pacify her, "gunjan plz don cry, chaliye bahar dekhte hai, is halat mein kahan ja sakta hai wo............."
but before he could complete his sentence gunjan rushes out of the room
if we remember, outside the room diya, benji, uday, mayank n nupur were standin
gunjan, "di tumne samrat ko kahin jaate hue dekha hai kya"..............every 1 is shoced to here this.............nupur "nhi main kuch der k liye bahar gayi thi, shayad ........diya"
diya, "no hum to dr. chamber mein sammy k condition ko lekar discuss kar rahe the...........lekin gunjan wo to behosh tha na......."
"ha lekin kuch der pahele hi hosh aaya hai samrat ko...........aur pata nhi wo kahan chala gaya"
pacifyin gunjan mayank replies, "tum chinta mat karo gunjan, wo yehi kahi hoga, hum sab milkar dhundte hai............" and they all starts searchin for samrat.
scene shifts back to raj and suhani...................."nhi raj plz plz mujhe kahene do........... (raj tryin to say somethin but suhani stops him), main already ek galti kar chuki hu ab aur koi galti nhi"..........then turnin away from raj, she walks some steps away and says, "raj tum jo soch rahe ho main wo nhi hu............"
a shoced raj "matlab.................."
suhani turns back to him................"main nupur nhi suhani hu....................(and she narates the whole story from startin......why she came to india, metin the gang, landin up as nupur, revelin her truth to gunjan, then mayank n nupur.............every single thin).............after she completes (by nw raj is totally shaken and he sits down on a bench. suhani coming to raj "main janti hu tum mujhse nhi balki nupur se pyaar kiya hai, par main kya karu raj...............jhoothi nupur bante bante pata hi nhi chala k kab main tumhari nupur ban gayi", her voice gets cholked as she completes her sentence......................."suhani........" suhani hears a voice from behind and as she turns 😲
samrat was standin there...........not understandin wat to do or say, suhani stands like a statue unable to move.............samrat coming forward "tum nupur nhi...............su............suha......ani!!!!" his voice is terribly shakin. its obvious that the earth beneath his feet has already slipped, but before he could say nemore......."plz samrat kuch bhi kahene se pahele ek baar suhani k taraf ek bhai bankar dekho", gunjan comes and stands beside suhani. one more shock for samrat............."chashmish tum!!!"
"ha samrat kisis ko kuch bhi kahene se pahele ek baar halat to ko samajh ne ki koshish karo"-----------as samrat turns he finds nupur and mayank standin.........
"tum dono bhi............tum sab ne mujhse...........itna bara............" aa........h, before he could complete his words his head starts paining, "samrat" gunjan cries while coming forward to hold him, but samrat stops her......... by nw raj has overcome the trauma a bit and comes forward to help sam' "chalo samrat thoda aram kar lo, warna dard aur zyaada hoga" , and leaves with sam without even givin a singl glance to suhani.......every body follows xcept gunjan
scene sam's ward dr atul chekin the nervs of sam while other stood at a distance
dr. atul "ok he is out of danger, thoda rest ki zarurat hai..............i hope kal tak aap log inhe le ja sakte hai" and he departs". raj, "ok samrat to mujhe bhi ab jana chahiye", and as he tries to leave mayank stops him, "ek minute adhiraj is pure incident mein tumbhi utna hi shamil hp jitna l hum log............so plz"
"mian jaanti hu raj, maine jo kuch bhi kiya wo bilkul sahi nhi tha, pad main kya karti.............agar tum mere jagah hote to tum kya karte. bolo raj kya tum apne pyaar ko bachane ki koshish nhi karte........bolo raj" nupur cant say nemore n she starts cryin. its enough for raj and he bursts, (tho nt loudly): par aisa nhi hai nupur........yahan tum ne apne pyaar ko bachane k liye mere emotions ko ek mazak bana diya. aakhir kyun nupur kyun............"
"tum galat soch rahe ho raj, kisine tumhare emotions k sath nhi khela hai..."
"an astonished raj, "mayank tum abh bhi yehi kahoge???"
"ha, abh bhi............kyun ki main jaanta hu bhale hi yeh luv story ek jhut se shuru hui ho........lekin tum dono k dil mein ek dusre k liye jo feelins hai wo jhut nhi hai...........aur yeh baat tum bhi thukra nhi sakte raj (raj is mumbeb)...........to fir kya fark padta hai ki wo suhani hai ya nupur, pyaar insaan se kiya jata hai uske naam se nhi............."
"lekin mayank, pyaar mein vishwaas ka hona bahaut zaruri hota hai, shayad tum yeh bhul rahe ho".samrat replies sternly.............."jaanta hu samrat, pad kya tum mujhe bata sakte ho ki suhani pad tum kyun trust nhi kar sakte..........us din to uske kahene pad canteen mein tumne apni aankhen bandh kar li thi...........tab tumhe uspar trust tha.........kal uske diye luky charm par tumhe bharosa tha.......kyunki ki tab wo nupur thi............aur aaj nhi , sirf is liye kyunki aaj wo nupur nhi suhani hai..........timhari bahen!!!"
now suhani who thru out the conve was standin near the door comes front and goes on hes knees in front of sam, "bhai main jaanti hu, tum mujhse bahaut bahaut nafrat karte ho............par main kya karu bhai, kya karu agar main tumhare bagair jee nhi sakta............batao is mein kya galti hai meri agar har saal rakhi k din main yeh soch kar pura din bita du k shayad bhai is saal mere liye letter bheja ho, apna pyaar............agar apne bhai k pyaar k liye tarasna galti hai, to thik hai main galat hu; agar apne bhai ko pane ki koshish karna galat hai to thik hai main galat hu......... aur yeh galti main har baar baar baar karungi , tab tak jab tak tum mujhe maar nhi kar dete................
still writin..........................
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