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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: olive_green

wow! that was something

Hey Aria!
It was, wasn't it? :-)
Thanks for stopping by!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dipu

Sookie! :

hey that was really nice yaar,,

that was what show us a real view of life where not always a happy endings...

really liked this.....actually make me realize that we should have to learn with cope with this world....

that was really nice...............

Hi Dipu,
Thanks a lot for your comment. I am glad you can take something from this one shot. Yeah, life is not full of happy endings or good things right? In the end, its just a matter of balance.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tamanna17

hi....it was mindblowing....i dnt have words to xplain....it was beautiful

Hello Tamanna,
Thanks a lot for liking this one shot.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: *armaania*

Absolutely mindblowing and heartwrenching... You've penned down everything so beautifully. You're a genius.. I just don't have the right words to say how brilliantly you have portrayed it... This has really made me think twice of life. It's strange how we take a few things for granted and don't realize the importance until we lose it..

This oneshot sure has left a great impact on me. Thank you!!!

Do write more in the future.

Love sana

Hello Sana,
Thanks a lot for your comment. Err..genius? Nah, I dont think so. I am glad you took something out of this oneshot.
Million thanks again for your comments.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kash fan4ever

hey sookie!

I just stumbled across this one shot of yours, and I surely need to thank my stars for that!
I just loveed it! though I have read many fics and o/s on the same storyline, the way it is handled in your o/s is just amazing. Its wonderful to see how Armaan's death gives Riddhima even more strength to live her life with the happy memories instead of sulking and breaking down over what could have happened but didnt. I loved Armaan's letter, spl the lines 'Please, from now on do not think of me as a dead person but a man with whom you spent your last one year in your dreams. It is my one last request to you Riddhima, is to be open to new love. With the last word in this letter, release the knots that you have tied yourself to me. Live the life that I would have loved to live. Till then, I will see you in your dreams.'
They are so beatifully penned down, I can see their love in these simple but heartfelt lines!
I hope you do write many more like this.
do lemme know if possible.
cheers,
Sakshi

Hello Sakshi,
Thanks for your comments. I have already PM'ed you!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mudi

GOD !! that was just tooo good

i was literally crying
no words to describe how much i loved it

Hello Mudi,
Thanks a lot for your comment. Crying? Am sorry, that wasnt the intention.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kshanikaa

deeply emotional, extremely great..!!!

Hey Kshanikaa,
Thanks very much for your comment.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: suvi_rox1

hi sookie....thnx fr ur pms inspite of me delaying to comment...my heartfelt apologies....due to immense workload i hardly get time to read the wonderful ff...which r updated...nor do i visit the forums very often .....so here i m after a long gap..this was a wonderful one shot..i have ever read...it was so immotional..like a phase where u describe riddhima state of mind n the fact that she n armaan had taken a reality...which is meant to be taken calmly and at tha same time one even gets angry,harsh on itself..it is totally an ironical situation..bt .ppl dont take death as a part of reality however though they shud..bt i guess one is nt that strong to take that fact of life so easily...loved the list which armaan wanted to fulfill..his last wishes n ridz accompanying him n their way of understanding each other when he told her to stop....each line was amazing..love ur writing so much...u r a true gem...u r truely talented..u know that sookie..keep on writing ..plz update ur other ff too.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...smile

Hello!
Wow, thanks a tonne for your comments. I have been updating my other ffs but looks like you have not caught up with them :-) So not my fault here.
Glad you liked this story.
Again thanks a lot for liking my writing.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sookie*
hmm,,another intersting one and this time with yet another different concept..
loved the way ridhima felt and the way u described her POV..
it was very difficult for her to accept the truth yet she always was with him and he always made her feel happy in those little time..
did his wish list ...and then here she is reading his last letter hoping all wud be normal but she knows the real answer ....
great one as usual..
good wishes..
sri:-)

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