PKB FF - Tujhse Dil ka Rishta Jod Dun|PART 01 PG 4

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T u j h s e D i l k a R i s h t a J o d D u n
:.. YOU NEVER KNOW WHEN YOU DO THE RIGHT THING OR WHEN YOU NOT..:


It's always a dream to find the true love. Love is a four letter word which means a lot than its length, it is something which can change a life forever, for good or for bad. Love is beautiful but at the same time it got another side. A side which can lead it way to the misunderstandings, a side that always steal one away from another. Some are fortunate to face these and still be together and some are unfortunate to get a partner who won't be with them. But every love story has an ending and only leaves behind the memories. The ending can be happy, wanting to always bring back those memories or sad, with a huge pain cause of that Mistake...


:..INTRODUCTION
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The bird flew across the sky thrashing against the light wind. The sound of their twitter was filling everywhere but also mixing with the populated pollution town. A girl was seating on the couch hugging her legs, flicking through the channel with no interest at all. She had one hand on her head as she held her forehead. Her eyes started to watering up as she just pressed the buttons on the remote control aimlessly, she was paying no attention but was lost in her own world staring into space she continues to press the buttons.

Her smooth milky skin was turned to a pale weak body. She let her free hand run quickly through her silk, straight long hair. Her brown eyes, which made many people to loose their sense now hiding from everyone. Scared and loneliness was clearly visible on her eyes. Tear drops on to her rosy cheeks which lost their glow. She slowly brought her feet down and stood up. Straighten the wrinkled sari which was hugging her beautiful tall body. The tears haven't disappeared but endlessly fall down

Boy - Prateeksha

As soon as she heard the husky voice of the boy, her body react quickly, wiping away the tears and becoming the strong woman which she tries to fool everyone with

As her hair fly to the wind she turned around to find the person who she sees as the angel for her life standing in front of her, he had concern written all over his face. His Grey eyes has turned moisture with a hint of guilt hidden. He tried to bring up a smile on his face but it didn't reach much far

Boy - Prateeksha he said again walking toward her until when... until when would you lie to yourself and the rest of the world? He questioned sternly. Embarrassed Prateeksha look down unable to make eye contact Prateeksha look at me damn it he shook her holding on to her arm Prateeksha!! just because of you I have a meaning of my life... you and Chahat are the world to me... the promise I made few years ago..

Prateeksha - RAUNAK! She shouts furiously pulling away his hand which held her securely promise, promise, promise! Its all because of this bloody promise she shrieked if you haven't made that promise to my dad then I wont be here would I!? Raunak tried to calm her down but she didn't stopped and cried her heart out, slowly dragging herself on to the ground why can't you just let me die?! She said choking on her own tears then I wont see this day.. when I try to suicide why did you stopped me!!

Raunak - Prateeksha!! His arm rose to slap her but immediately stopped when he noticed the watery eyes looking back at him innocently. He falls on his knees next to Prateeksha and hold her face in his hand just think about Chahat, that girl needs you Prateeksha... She needs her mother; you are the world to her... Would you just leave her in this cruel world? Answer me he asked gently as he wiped the tears away which were on her cheek

Girl (Kid) - Mama!!

They turned around to find a 7 year old girl dressed in white frock with matching headband standing in front of them holding onto a news paper which was crumpling under her small hands and flicking in the air to get Prateeksha's attention

Prateeksha immediately wiped the tears away while a huge smile appeared on Raunak's face which reached from one side to another. He held his arms wide; the girl at once took the advantage and ran toward him crashing on to a tight hug

Girl - Raunak Chachu!!

Prateeksha - Chahat... tum itni subha suba she asked confusedly

Chahat - mama!! she showed the crumpled news paper mama yeh dekho Shashank uncle aur Araina chachi ki engagement...

Prateeksha instantly snatched the paper away from Chahat and looked at the front cover, trying to stop the flood of tears which were in an urged to burst out.

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.Angel thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I really really don't like FF anymore after a whole lot of Michi's FFs I have read in the past but for u sweetheart I will surly keep up with this one.
so thank u so very much🤗🤗
me off to read it now😃
BRB
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Awesome start LaLi!

I can't wait to read what happens next!
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Amazing start Lali...
do continue soon...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: _angel_

I really really don't like FF anymore after a whole lot of Michi's FFs I have read in the past but for u sweetheart I will surly keep up with this one.

so thank u so very much🤗🤗
me off to read it now😃
BRB


y wat happen.. ok only if u wanna share..aww thanks hope u will like it...
THANKS TO U HUN hope u enjoy it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikita_88

Awesome start LaLi!

I can't wait to read what happens next!


Thanks nikz.. well well wait n see... hope u will like it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Irika95

Amazing start Lali...
do continue soon...


thanks irika.. sweety will try depend on the feedback i get
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Thanks -DA- and -anonymous- for liking the intro

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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was awesome..plz continue soon...would love to read the rest....😊
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Hey just read your intro it was superb plz continue soon

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