Originally posted by: Aqsa_91
Ok I'M BACK!!!!!!!!!ππ lol!hey welcome backπ€π€ I thought I would give you a bit of a break from my last comment on Kiss before I write another comment lol!ππ hahaha.. but i like reading ur comments! no need for breaks!
Anyway I'm going to go straight in to it so I don't lenghthen it more than it has to be lol!π hehehehe
Part 19
Okay first of all B-R-I-L-L-I-A-N-T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!βοΈ I can't believe you even thought that this was a bad part!!!!!!π²π‘π² omg...thank you soo muchπ³π³π³
Ok I thought it was soooo cute the way Milling tried to wake prachi up!!!π and Prachi so kiddishly said she will go tomorrow! lol!π hehehehe she is a little lazy..if u didn't notice it alreadyπ and the way when she was thinking of a gift for valentines day said that she already has everything!! SOOOO CUTE!!π glad u founf it cute...she is a lot child like even now.
Prachi is definately my type of girl!!!π the perfect gift - Lots of chocolates!!ππ hahaha even i love chocolates!
I love how Millind also becomes a kid with Prachi!!!π i feel out of the two he can be more childish when he gets into his moods!(When are they going to admit they love each other!!!π‘ both stupid duffers!π‘ But I still love them!!!πadmit love will take a loooooong time.. they still haven't realized it yet.)
I L-O-V-E Neev in this FF!!!!π He's brilliant!!!πso glad u like him! Can't believe he just took her chocolates!!! lol!π i think everyone in this ff is childishπ
one of my favourite parts has to be when Neev was pretending to give the chocolates back!!!ππ
"How shameless are you? I thought you would say 'It's okay Neev, you can eat it. I have more at home.'"hehehehe so glad u liked tht part! LOL Neev is so sweet... and not at all shamelessπ
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and of course Neev's stolen romantic lines lol!!!ππi found tht line so romantic! so decided to use it... but didn't want ppl to say i stole it so made neev steal itπ Prachi atleast got her revenge!!ππshe is pretty vengenceful! it was revenge tht got P and M married naπ
I love how Millind and Prachi can't keep there hands off each other lol!! u naughty girl!ππ Prachi definately loves to have fun!!! Climbing on the table!!π² lol! yeah! poor M! how he manages her!
and the GAME!!!π that was sweet and clever how he said Prachi Prachi Prachi!π Your friends friends BF sounds smart lol!π yeah very smart he is!
OMG I guess when Neev and Prachi are together they should always be supervised lol!π²π ALWAYS!
I loved how you made Neev one of those people who becomes a sap after he gets drunk!!π hehehehe neither Neev nor Prachi can hold their drinks but tht doesn't stop themπ
*Standing Ovation* REALLY!!! I really couldn't stop laughing when I was reading the rest this is definately my favourite part in this FF!!! omg...thank you so so muchβΊοΈ
Poor Ayesha!! she's scared out of her wits lol!πwat all poor A has to go thru just for being P's sis and N's girlfriendπππ With Neev and Prachi in the back laughing their heads off making Millind angrier and angrier I would be shaking lol!!!π hahahahahaa
And OMG the CAR FAMILY lol!!π I loved how Neev cheered his friend on completing her mission on getting on Millinds lap!!ππ Neev is a sweetheart! can't help making him this overgrown childπ³
and Prachi getting so possessive!!! lol! I was like WOAH!!π² lol!π P and M are possessive! if M was the one who was drunk, he wud have embarrassed P beyong anything.
And NEEV lol!! How dare Prachi even think Ayesha would ever sit on anyones lap but her Neev's!!ππ
I loved the whole planning lol!!!
"IDEA! You sit on Milind's lap and I'll sit on your lap. Then Ayesha can sit on my lap and drive the car!" Neev says. "Ah! That's a nice idea!" Prachi agrees smiling
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OMG soooooooooooooooo FUNNY!!!!!π
hehehehhee so glad u found tht funny! man drunk ppl can be funny or wat?π
and AWWW BLESS!! Prachi is soooo CUTE!!! lol!ππ
Where's the cliff??!!!ππ
Millind can never stay angry at her for too long sooo sweet!!! he is so madly in love with her na?
amd omg!!! NEEV and FOOD!!! lol!!!! Stopping them twice!!!! π
Ayesha definately must have been pissed!!! Ayesha is kinda used to Neev and his foodπ
This was definately the best part in the whole in this part lol!
the singing!!!!! π
Poor Millind getting embarrassed with Prachi calling him Lover boy and Mili lol!!ππ poor M! i think he might be wishing tht he was drunk so he wudn't remember thtππ
Good thing Neev was drunk and won't really remember!!!!ππ aww poor Neev!
Prachi BRAYING!!!! lol!!! I feel sorry for Millind and Ayesha for having to suffer through that!!!! ππ just Ayesha.. 'coz she had to suffer thru Milind's singing alsoπππ
And Neevs sweet line lol!
"Yes! She is the only one for whom I'll give up my food for."
SO cute!!!!ππ had to give him some original lineπ
Now Prachi is definately in for it!!!π
Millind must definately be pissed at her she foiled the game lol!!!ππ hahahahaa yeah he is pissed!
Wonder what gonna happen when she wakes up!! Aprt from a thumping hangover lol!!ππ LOL next part will be Milind the babyππ
Well the best part about that is I don't have to wait lol!!!! LOL
Part 20
I LOVED this part!!!ππ I thought it was soo cute!!ππ thank you so muchπ and POOR Sukriti I felt sorry for her lol!!ππ Having to figured out her very confusing bhabhi and brother lol!! and than having to stuff herself silly lol!!!ππ hehehe next time also bhai and bhabhi fight, she is gonna get shouted atπ and than getting yelled at for doing what she was told lol!! Poor girl!!
I was alittle confused when Baba didn't say anything to her but makes so much more sense once I read it all lol! M cudn't let baba be pissed with P, so he took up the blame
Really funny the way she tried to make it up to him!!π giving him roses and than singing to him!!! That definately would have been something to see!!!ππ hahahaha poor M... getting embarrassed two days in a row?π
I loved how finally they made up and both went out to eat cause they both were hungry!!! Soo sweet!!!
especially the last part where he says that he doesn't want her to quit cause it was their drinking that brought them together!!! SO SWEET!!!! ππ so glad u liked those partsπ³π³π³
I really liked this part and I bet everyone else who read this thought so too!!πβοΈ thank you so so much hunπππ
I really don't know how you wire your brain before reading it yourself!!!π‘ Really how can you think this was bad!!!π² it is just tht when i imagine it in my head it is good.. but when i write it i feel it is not half as good as wht i thought and i feel it is really badπ
Anyway LOVED this part even if you didn't!! thank you so much
and now the NEXT part!!!! WOOHOOO!!! ππlol!!!ππ
I get to read 3 parts at once lol!!! So much fun!!!ππ hahahahaha u r so cute!
Part 21
Ok I seriously love te way he wakes her up lol!!!ππ i feel waking her up is going to end pretty soon..;coz she is waking up by herself
She acts like such a child it reminds me of how I used to be when it came to getting up for secondary school lol!!!!ππ HAHAHAHAHAHA
I was sort of wondering why she goes if she hates it soo much and all she does is play games and download movies ππ ( that sounds like the perfect job!!!ππ) it is THE perfect job hunπ
UFF I'm sorry this might sound like another rant like the one in kiss but I REALLY REALLY REALLY DON'T LIKE INDER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!π€’ hehehe but he is better than he was in kiss na?πππ
Why is he always out to ruin Prachis LIFE!!!!!! ππ‘
POOR PRACHI!!!π I can't believe he bribed the colleges to not take her on!!!!!!!!!!π²
and than lieing to her and saying he bribed the judges!!!π‘π‘ UFF!!!!!π‘π‘
Man needs a beating!!!!π‘π‘ hehehe he will change soon.... and he will try to make amends!
Could you maybe make PL giving him one lol!!!!!!!!ππ i think she already didπ
Now because of HIM MiChis relationship is suffering!!!!ππ it won't yaar
Poor Millind!!!ππ She isn't really shutting him out is she!!!ππ no she won'tπ
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P.S. L-O-V-E-D the update IT WAS NOT CRAPPY!!!!!! thank you so so muchπ