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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Guys,
I decided to write a short story on PraSha's first meeting. Its not that great but I wanted their first meeting to be simple and sweet, memorable but not intense. Like two stangers meeting for the first time and never expecting to see each other again. I am not sure if I have shown all of this but still do comment and let me know what you think.
SS: First Meeting

Shaskank was driving his car after the engagement, thinking how he will never love Sumo the way she loves him but will he ever love a girl, he chuckles, thinking if he did fall in love the should have been Araina his best friend, the one that has been with him since childhood. He stops at a dhabba and is sitting there lost in his thoughts.

Prateeksha, on the other was at Durga Ma's mandir. Ma, aaj meri shaaghi thi. Mujhe pat hai ke aap ka arshiward meri saath hai par meri kwashish ko puri kare do, muhje mera parivaar lo ta do, meri shaadi ke phele. She leaves the mandir and is walking on the streets.

Prateeksha reaches the Dhabba , were Shaskank is. Shaskank hears the chan chan of her payal, starts to look around but it has stopped. As Prateeksha sits down and has her tea, she is staring at the stars, thinking of her fate. Shaskank is also sitting there thinking, Prateeksha gets up to leave and as Shaskank hears the chan chan again he gets up in a jolt, as Prateeksha walks past. She trips and he grabs holds on to her, stopping her from falling, as Prateeksha closes her eyes. She slowly opens them when she realises she hasn't fallen but is balancing in mid air she is looks into Shaskank's eyes and is lost in them.

They stare into each others eyes, Shaskank is captured by the pain in her eyes and Prateeksha is captured by the confusion. They both snap out of it and Shaskank helps her up.

S: Sorry I didn't mean to startle you.

P: Its ok, I wasn't looking to where I was going.

P starts to walk, when S realises the chan chan of the payal was her's and remembers it from the other night.

S: Excuse me.

P turns around

S: Do you want a lift anywhere?

P is getting worried.

S understands: Oh I am not that sort of guy, I am engaged.

P: No its ok, I live nearby.

S: Oh ok, but I do have a question for you were you at a chai stall the other night.

P is confused but says: Yes.

S just nods and goes on to his car.

P also doesn't look into it and goes on home too.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely SS ............its sooooooo cute..............i wish to see d same in d show tooooooo............very lovely SS.................
but it was shooo short................jaldi katham hogayi..........😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariyam91

lovely SS ............its sooooooo cute..............i wish to see d same in d show tooooooo............very lovely SS.................
but it was shooo short................jaldi katham hogayi..........😭

Thanks 😃
I know it was short I just couldn't find the right medium this time round, I think I need to watch PraSha to have a proper feel for what sort of couple they would be.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely ......... i thought it'll be long ..... thanxxx :)

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