~Undying Devotion~ One Shot

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

woah dear its really an awesome one mind blowingso cute plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

"KASH came into my life so quick,
A gorgeous pleasant surprise,
I have seen KASH a million times,
And every time I see KASH,
I fall in love with KASH all over again,
My heart starts to race.......
With KASH I Learned to trust,
KASH become my reason for being,
KASH were my dawn in the morning,
KASH were my single star on clear night,
KASH were the scent of rose in the garden,
KASH made my life as fresh as,
The air after a spring rain,
KASH made me alive.."

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Nidha

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JustaDream

@.JustaDream

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Hey Steffu Sry for Late reply 😔

Wow

Its awesome

very well written !!

👏 👏 👏 👏

Fantastic !!

The story was gr8 !!

Write more like this 😉

-Nori ⭐️

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Armaan

@-Armaan-

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

The Update is updated...

P.S.: @previous page :D

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Divya Jagga

@-Divz-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Steffi....

As usual....an excellent story...or one-shot.
Now i think u shud write a book on ur stories....😃😃

Greatly & well Written...
Can't say anything more coz u always left me speechless..

But its marvellous...

& Sorry for being late..

Take Care

Lots of Love n Care
Divya...

Muaaaaaaaaahhh <3

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Kshma Kheskani

@AR-lover

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

FLAWLESSSSSSSSSSSS.............

AUSOME...........

WHT A FIC........DIDZ UR OTHER FF'S ARE ALSO WAITING 2 B UPDATED AND WE 2 READ

WELL..............CONTD. SOON

LOVE U DIDIZ
KSHMA

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smriti

@smriti.tweety

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Hey Steffi!!!!!😃

Sorry for the delay in commenting. Just got time and read this one.

Very different from your usual style of writing and not very unpredictable (no offence meant). I mean somewhere I knew from the very beginning what the end would be like. Yet that does not take away the fact that I liked the simplicity of the concept. Sweet and cute and with its elements of thrill as well! All in all a good one shot, just read that it's your first and I think for that a pat on the back. I can never really gather how writers are able to squeeze in a storyline with a defined ending all in just a one shot and you have done quite a good job of it!👏

Love

Smriti