~Undying Devotion~ One Shot

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Lipsa

@-Lipsa-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

It was a lovely oneshot Steff.you could have been selected.you wrote it much much better than mine :)

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Lipsa_mjht
It was a lovely oneshot Steff.you could have been selected.you wrote it much much better than mine :)

There were many better than mine i guess 😳

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Misha Rai

@DMG4EVER

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

aww steff that was really nice .. immortal souls aww

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princess52

@princess52

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

heyy steffiii..... amazinggg

i could feel love the pain as welll

in the end i was crying as welll

i think this is one of the bst one shot i have read

itss just mind blowing

i wonder how cume u didnt coem in top 7.....

plzzz do wirte nore

n best fo luck for ue exms n

thnzk for the pm

love habs

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

hey steff..nice one-shot..

it was really touching..!..i truly loved it..

Sarah n Cal were so happy together..but then her father did'nt approve just because of his economic status!..how cruel..!

but then they died together and will always remain together..!

btw even i participated in that contest,but mine did'nt get selected too,so i'll post it too i think =P

n i was wondering about ur reserve on my one-shot,will wait for u 2 edit it :D

thnx 4 d PM

do write more

-aish

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Armaan

@-Armaan-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

edited:

aww... That was really nice Steff... I was just checking for the updates of Obsession... and Where Did I... but then This stuck my head... and that was really touching... It should have been selected... for sure... if I had been the Judge... you were winner surely..!! 😉

Anyways...!! Thanks for sharing!

Edited by -Armaan- - 15 years ago

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

heyyyy steffi :)

that was a beautifully penned !!!..the storyline was sooo good...but the ending was sad...but i'm happy that the lovers unite in the end...even though its in heaven...

amazing and wonderful hun :D

loved reading it !!..

thanks for the pm ...