'Dont Deserve Your Love' {Part XII(Story ends)}pg1

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binita

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Posted: 17 years ago

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As usual am the late latif...but for once am glad that i read it late..got to read all the parts in one go....it was just fab...luved the way u're sketched both the characters..the luv, guilt, admission, repent n above all the ability to forgive....n the poems were awesome...nice banner too....abs GR8 fan fic ...looking frwd to the next one...

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: binidoshi

As usual am the late latif...but for once am glad that i read it late..got to read all the parts in one go....it was just fab...luved the way u're sketched both the characters..the luv, guilt, admission, repent n above all the ability to forgive....n the poems were awesome...nice banner too....abs GR8 fan fic ...looking frwd to the next one...

HI Bini dear,

U r not late latif dear... kabhi nahi.. woh hota hai key when concepts sprung in my mind i share with u and till the time i tell u its on paper i usually have fisnihed it ... lol😆 So u r glad u read it late .. akhir u got ot read it in full swing wow!! feels nice.. Aww u liked reading it BIni... i really wasnt excited with this oen when i started but wanted to coplet this half doen story.. chalo happy u liked the story line..and charcter sketch ..

areeyyy wah u liked the banner.. it always takes mroe time ot make the banner than writing the story lol.. so it feels nice its worth of what time i spent over it.. lol..😆.. Bini ur comments are very dear to me.. thanks dear for takgin out time to reply adn read.. luv u as always how mcuh ever i say it is less...

Bhoomi

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ssh57

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

A very sensitive, beautiful, romantic story proving the fact that a man always listens to his brain while a woman always listens to her heart. Man is egoistic but woman forgiving. Just imagine if the tables were turned would he have ever forgiven her. I doubt. Another thing I liked abt this story was u have shown Mrinal to be proud of her profession and position in office and therefore she took the professional step of subjecting him to all the humiliation by disclosing his wrong doings. not letting her love for him distract her from doing her duty or her loyalty to her company. But in the end inspite of everyhing she accepted him and that's where the woman in her comes forth.I think this is the first story in which I have seen your hero to be deceitful otherwise they are all too good and virtuous.
Reallllllly a verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry beautiful story. Loved it.

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: ssh57
A very sensitive, beautiful, romantic story proving the fact that a man always listens to his brain while a woman always listens to her heart. Man is egoistic but woman forgiving. Just imagine if the tables were turned would he have ever forgiven her. I doubt. Another thing I liked abt this story was u have shown Mrinal to be proud of her profession and position in office and therefore she took the professional step of subjecting him to all the humiliation by disclosing his wrong doings. not letting her love for him distract her from doing her duty or her loyalty to her company. But in the end inspite of everyhing she accepted him and that's where the woman in her comes forth.I think this is the first story in which I have seen your hero to be deceitful otherwise they are all too good and virtuous.
Reallllllly a verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry beautiful story. Loved it.

Hi ,

Feels good that u enjoyed and loved this story. Its very easy for men to say about their ego and there is a postive aspect they feel while they reason it as their ego..but the same if woman do am sure none take it positvely... ya u are very right if the tables were turn the things woudl not have a hppy ending... thats the social norm... society has made us adapt only few mindsets..

Yes she is in love and very intelligently knows the line of personal n professional duty.. yes Mrinal is sweet, innocent but professional qualified and knows what her task at hand.. she never gives up her job thats what i wanted to show as well.. am so very happy that u liked it and liked the way things wre turning in this story.. thanks so much for ur comments, sharing ur point of view and thoguths... its the comments replies which make me , inspire me to write more nad make my mind feel more emotions and feel what raders also feel about...
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Bhoomi