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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-1

London....
Karan cums back home.He puts on the tape recorder.
Nandini's voice:Hey,why r u late?
Karan:sorry nandini...i was busy with my work
N:do u remember 2day's date?
K:ya.whats special about it?
N:u stupid.how dare u 4get that?b4 our marriage,on this day u used 2 stand b4 my college with gifts.after marriage u 4got it
K:oh...ur b'day.sorry nandini.happy b'day 2 u
N:u promised 2 return home early 2 go 2 church
K:oh sorry.u r in the church.right?i'll cum there soon

Karan goes there.Nandini was sitting on the steps.
K:nandini...
N:stop it
K sits close 2 N.N moves away.
K:u r angry with me?how cud u think that i 4got ur b'day?
N looks at K.K takes a ring out of his pocket.He puts it on her finger.N was surprised
N:i'm sorry karan.
K smiles:no sorry.ur scolding is bearable.but can't bear ur sorry
N:karannnn..ok..but still i can't 4giv u 4 coming late.i new that u'l b late.the prayer time is over
K:but Jesus is still there in the church waiting 4 us.we need only him
Karan-nandini pray in the church.K sits close 2 N.
N:karan,stop it.here also u r too romantic
K has a naughty smile on his face

Karan-nandini go 2 diff places 2 share romantic moments.song:dilke badle sanam...{kyonki}

Karan-nandini r having candle lite dinner.they r looking at each other's eyes

Karan-nandini r washing the plates in the kitchen
K:nandini,do u think that our life needs changes?
N:what kind of changes?
K:it wud b so nice if we hav children
N;ur wish is fine.but no need.1st let ur childishness go.then we'll think of having kids
K:oh!that time,we'll b so old
N:see sujal & kashish..they got married b4 us.r they having any problems?
K:that means we don't need kids at all?


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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice please continue soon 👏 👏
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oh howw nice!!
ya continue ssoon!
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very nice please continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-2….Nandini:I've 2 think
Karan:what?
N:just leave it karan
N smiles.K was relieved
K:u were joking?
N smiles.N thinks:karan,even I want 2 b a mother.lets wait

Sujal sees kashish in a moody stage.
S:kashish…
K wipes her tears
S:whats the matter kashish?
K:sujal,we r so unlucky not 2 hav kids
S:hey…I'm ur kid no?u r my kid.so smile darling
K & S smile

Karan:Nandini,my friend Gautam had called.he'll cum here 4 a dance show.i'm so happy
N:u luv ur friend that much
K:ya …he's my life
N smiles

Nandini was in the kitchen.calling bell rings.
N goes open the door.That was Gautam.
G:Karan vIrani's house?
N:sorry.he stays next door
G;sorry 4 desturbing
N:don't go.they r not there now.till they cum,u can sit inside
G:thanx
G removes his shoes.
N:don't remove ur shoes,u'l become an ice
G puts on his shoes.sits inside.
N:I'm nandini
G thinks:nandini is karan's wife's name.but this girl told that its another house
N extends her arm 2 shake hand:hi
G extends his arm.but N takes her arm back.G was embarrassed
N takes the vegetables & a knife from the kitchen.sits near G I starts cutting
N goes near him with her knife & stares at him.Her knife goes close 2 his neck.G was shocked

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wow it's nice plz continue it 👏 👏 👏
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hey what's happening 😕 Just joking 😉 please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-3…..Nandini:do u no how 2 cut vegetables?
Gautam:no
N shouts;no?
G:yes,I no.i'll cut
N smiles:ok,then cut it
G tries 2 cut it with gr8 effort.N laughs:if u cut like this,u'll take this whole hour 2 finish this.giv it 2 me.i'll cut it
G was embarrassed
N:r u getting bored?
G:no
N puts on the tape recorder.A song :pehla nasha….
G was surprised.G thinks:my poem
N:this is written by my my husband's best friend .how is it?
G:nice
N:but I did'nt like it
G was embarrassed
Suddenly karan enters the house.K was surprised 2 see Gautam.they hug each other with joy.N smiles
N:karan,I fooled ur friend .so funny
K:really?
G:ya,I got tensed
K laughs:she's naughty

Karan asks Gautam:is this enuff?don't u need a girl in ur life?
G was dull:plz karan.don't speak about it

Karan,nandini,gautam,sujal,kashish hav dinner 2gether


In the nite,Karan asks nandini:how do u like Gautam?
N:2 b frank,I did'nt like ur friend.so boring.if we crack jokes also,he does'nt laugh
K:he was a laugh pot.but I told u about his gf no.after he lost her,he became like this.don't ask him about it ok
N:ok

The next day,karan was going 4 work.nandini calls him back:karan…
K:ya
N:u 4got 2 giv me the gift which u used 2 giv b4 going out?now u need only ur friend?
N was angry.K smiles.He goes & kisses N's cheecks.G smiles & turns face.N kisses him back.
K:bye

N:gautam,u were shy seeing me & karan…?
G smiles.G tries 2 change the topic:I liked the name of this house.RAINBOW
N:really?its my choice.this house is beautiful & colourful as a rainbow with our life
G smiles;when karan goes our,u get bored without seeing him?
N:who told that I can't see karan?I see him always
N takes him a room.There was a big curtain.
N:did u see that curtain.i can see karan on it.
N imagines K there.N feels that Karan is offered icecream by a foreign lady
N:karan,did'nt I tell u not 2 talk 2 girls unnecessarily?
N feels that K refuses the icsecream
N:gud boy
N gives flying kisses.G smiles.G looks at the curtain
Edited by jasminerahul - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-4…..Gautam sees Damini there.G's eyes fill up with tears
Nandini:Whats that girl's name?
G:which girl?
N:ur beloved
G becomes dull:Damini
N:how does she look like?
G:she was very pretty
N:how was her character?
G:she was very naughty
N:like me?
G:ya
N:tell sumthing more about her

G recalls:Gautam & Damini r sitting outside
D:gautam,if I die what'll u do?
G:what question u r asking?
D:plz tell gautam
G becomes emotional:if u r not there,I won't b there
D:so shame.u no what I'll do if u die?I'll find out ur humshakal & wil marry him
G was shocked:what?
D:like that u shud find a girl like me if I die.promise…
G:no way
D:if u love me,u must
G:ok promise
D:so sweet…

Gautam proposes 2 Damini:Damini,wil u marry me?
D laughs:marry u?so funny.u were that serious?I was in luv with u 4 a time pass.i can't marry gautam.
G was shattered.D goes

Nandini:Damini was a cheater?
Gautam:no..my damini was loving.i heard that she got admitted in the hospital.I went there.then I came 2 no that she was suffering from cancer

G goes near D's bed.G cries:is this the reason why u said that u don't luv me?that's why u told me 2 find another girl?
D cries. G:but still I want 2 marry u.atleast 4 1 day,I want 2 b ur husband
D was surprised.D hugs G.G's shirt becomes red with blood.G looks at D.She was dead.
G screams:Daminiiiiiiiii


N's eyes rose hearing his tragic story
G was very emotional:I lost my Damini…
N was tensed seeing him that upset

Nandini was sitting simply.Karan cums near her:why r u dull nandini?
N:I'm not
K:don't lie.i can understand ur each feeling even if I'm away from u.now tell me.what happened?

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Posted: 19 years ago
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very good sweetie plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

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