Kyonki-fanfic 4 Karan-nandini - Page 4

Part-11…..Nandini:u must not miss these photos.its very imp
N is staring at Gautam
G goes thru the photos.those photos r not there.hE was relieved.he looks at N.N smiles.

Nandini:r u sleepy?
G:no,if I'm looking at u like this,my sleep wil go.this is better than sleeping
N:I'm a that beautiful?
G:not only beautiful,u r luvly
N smiles.G looks at N deeply.
N:let me go & sleep.plz don't feel.i'm tired after the party arrangements
G:its ok.never mind.4 me,u happiness is more imp
N smiles:gud nite
G:gud nite

N goes 2 her bedroom. Nandini's eyes get filled up with tears.
N looks at karan's photo that's inside her cupboard.
N:I'm sorry karan.its 4 u
Song:kyonki…..

Suddenly she hears a sound.she turns back.lite is put off.
Suddenly candle lite is seen.N gets scared.
She can't see the person in that dim lite.Can see only his shadow.lite cums.N sees that person.She gets scared:u?

IS HE GAUTAM?IF SO,WHY IS HE THERE?

that is soooooo kooolll...nice going jasmin..keep continuing..thanx for letting me know..i dint even read this before..good going bud..
Good luck for next part..

Alap Shah

Part-12…..That was none other than KARAN
Nandini cud'nt believe her eyes:karan?
Karan:yes,don't doubt..i'm karan.not karan's humshakal or ghost.fortunately or unfortunately I'm rescued
N becomes so happy that she hugs him:karan,I'm so happy that u r back.
K:lie
N was shocked
K:u r not happy at my return since u've decided 2 marry gautam
N weeps:no karan.i'm really happy.bcoz u r the only person whom I luv.do u think I'm doing this with full heart?never
K:I came here 2 see u.but what I aw secretely was ut announcement that u r going 2 wed gautam.so I hid inside our room 2 no the truth.
N:I announced so.but do u think that I can marry him?I can only luv u karan.i used 2 trust gautam a lot.when I lost u,I thot gautam wil b there with me as a comfort..as a gud friend.but when I came 2 no his real colour..yes…now I no who tried 2 kill u.i wanted 2 giv him maximum happiness by giving him dreams about our marriage.then I wanted 2 tear his heart into pieces by revealing that I was punishing him.i'd decided that I I won't b his'.i thot I'll punish him by suiciding b4 him when he's dreaming of a gud life with me.i wanted 2 fall & die where u fell.
K:nandini…
N cries:I want 2 punish that criminal.u no,I was pregnant with ur baby
K was surprised:what?nandini…I'm going 2 b a dad?when I arrived here,I was received by a sad news ie is the news about ur decision 2 marry gautam.but now I'm a gifted by a sweet news that I'm going 2 b a dad
N:no karan.again there is a sad news 4 u.u r not going 2 b a dad
K:nandini…?
N cries:yes karan,I lost my child bcoz of that criminal.he killed my child.
N tells K the circumstance.K was shocked.he cries:what a fate!this I got from my most trusted friend.
N:he's not ur friend at all.he's our enemy.we've 2 giv me punishment
K:but nandini
N:no sentiments 4 ur friend.bcoz he tried 2 kill u 2 snatch ur wife.wil u stand with me 2 punish gautam?
K wa speechless
WHAT'LL B KARAN"S ANSWER?

very nice
please continue soon

Hi jasmine....i think u r from kerala...bcoz this story i had seen it long back as a malayalam movie.....starring kunjako boban( a malayalam star)in the role of karan, preeti jhangani in the role of nandini...and another actor vineeth in the role of gautam...the movie's name is "Mazhavillu"(meaning rainbow) 😆
the best part is that u have tried hard to see scene by scene to translate.. anyways hats off to ur creativity to cast karan ,nandini , gautam ...and others...it s good as others are enjoying...
👏

PART-13….Karan holds nandini's hand:yes.gautam is not my friend anymore
Nandini smiles.

Karan sits on the bed.N keeps her face on his shoulders.they look at each other.song:tere liye{Veerzara}

Sunset..Nandini –gautam in a car.they reach the place where karan's accident happened.
N :the sky is so beautiful.N takes the camera & keeps it near her eyes 2 take its photo.
N:my karan was killed
G was shocked.N smiles:birds r flying.cool no?
N keeps the camera near her eyes 2 take its photo:I no who the killer is
G was shocked
N:do u like sunset?
G was tensed;ya
N keeps the camera near her eyes 2 take its photo
N:I no that u r the killer
G was scared.N stares at him
G was shivering.N:why r u sweating?no use of sweating since I no u r the person who killed my husband.
N takes out sum photoes from her bag & throws it on G.G looks at it.he was shocked as it's the photos where karan 's death is seen.
N cries.she catches him by his collar:why did u do this?karan lused 2 luv u more than his life no?then also why did u….?we had a happy life like the rainbow colours.but u destroyed our life.u came as a bad omen. U thot if u kill karan,I'll b ur's & u can liv happily?how foolish u r.u no why I announced that I'm going 2 wed u?just 2 see ur reaction.u showered karan's blood 2 get me.what if u don't get me?

Gautam was stunned.he did'nt no what 2 say.
N:what if u don't get me?

G was stunned:nandini…?
N: u won't get me.those photos r enuff 2 put u into the jail.but that'll b the smallest punishment.u shud liv thinking about me with pain.i'l b always karan's & no one else'.

N tries 2 jump down from the mountain

WILL NANDINI COMMIT SUICIDE?

aww don't cry jasmine. U r going really great 👏

wow nice yaar,go ahead buddy 👏 👏 👏

Part-14…..Gautam screams:nandiniiiiiiiii
Suddenly nandini bursts into laughter
G cud'nt believe it:nandini?
N"gautam,again u proved that u r foolish.u thot I'll commit suicide 4 u?so funny.how can I leave my life like that when my husband is with me?
G:what?
N:u can't believe?then plz turn back
G turns back.he was shocked 2 see karan there.N smiles.N stands close 2 karan.
N:how do we look 2gether?nice no?we r made 4 each other.don't u feel that?our luv is that strong.atleast now u plz understand that we can't b separated
Karan's eyes rose:but gautam,we were so close 2each other..we've never hidden secrets 2 each other.but then also u hid poison inside ur mind.u tried 2 snatch my wife? tried 2 kill me?how cud u?I trusted u so much..but u….

N:karan,no need of sentiments,he must b punished.
G throws away those photos.
N:even if u these photos r lost,u'l b punished by the god.ucan't run away from him
G:no…no….
G was behaving like a complete psycho patient.
Sujal-kashish cum there
Kashish:oh my god!its sure that gautam is abnormal.he has 2 b taken 2 the mental asylum.its bcoz of that,a soft person like him is turned into a dangerous person.
Karan felt sad.tears flow from his eyes
N:karan,its not the time 2 cry
K:but he's my best friend
N:don't 4get that he's the person who destroyed our life.u promised me that u'll stand with me 2 punish him
K weeps
N:did u see gautam,eventho u tortured him a lot,still karan cares 4 u.but u r a devil.i can't 4giv u
Kashish:nandini,karan is right.now its not the time 2 avenge,take him 2 the mental asylum.
N:but still he'll remain as a devil
Karan:plz nandini,lets try
Sujal:gautam,cum with us
Karan:its ur friend calling.cum with us
G shivers…he walks backward.he reaches till the border
All r shocked
K:gautam…don't go….
Again G walks backward.he falls down
K:nooooooooo…gautam…my gautam….
K cries loudly
N:karan,he got the punishment he'd 2 get
N hugs & comforts him.

After 1 yr…..karan,nandini with their baby…they r pampering it along with Sujal-kashish

THE END

great, awesome, totally mindblowing. I don't hae words, jst this 👏