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Kimberly [ nickname = gg~ ]

@fire_woman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Will be back later to comment! 😊

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Khakshan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

I will be waiting for your comments anxiously..

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Kimberly [ nickname = gg~ ]

@fire_woman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Khakshan!!! It's so absolutely fabulous!! 👏👏👏

Ohmygosh! I can't believe how long it is and how much you put into the story. And all the wonderful romantic, sweet scenes of Bharat❤️Aditi. <<sigh>>

I could see them in front of my eyes. Charming handsome Bharat, shy beautiful Aditi. Both of them sneaking looks, being surprised by each other, and slowly slipping further and further into love. 😍

I loved how Divya yanked on his ear, treating him like her young son, even tho' he's a grown man. And how caring and concerned Amar was when Bharat pulled the prank, and afterwards. And how Bharat was so regretful at having scared them all.

I so loved how Bharat was considerate of Aditi when she said she didn't like coconut water and held back so she wouldn't feel embarrassed. And when Aditi helped with the sand castle, amazing Bharat with her words ... our house! Ahhhhh! Wonderful!

But my absolute fav scene was the "I Love You" charades. Heheheeee ... I could just see both of them blushing. Then stealing looks at each other as they thought about it later. Neither of them not able to let go of Aditi uttering those words so innocently to Bharat.

You brought Bharat❤️Aditi to life as you weaved this wonderful update Khakshan! Thank you! 😊

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Khakshan

@khakshan-aa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: fire_woman
Khakshan!!! It's so absolutely fabulous!! 👏👏👏 Thank you so much Dear...

Ohmygosh! I can't believe how long it is and how much you put into the story. And all the wonderful romantic, sweet scenes of Bharat❤️Aditi. <<sigh>> I m glad u liked it 😳

I could see them in front of my eyes. GG!! u r also coming under my influence 😆 Charming handsome Bharat, shy beautiful Aditi. Both of them sneaking looks, being surprised by each other, and slowly slipping further and further into love. 😍 so true... They r the world's BEST JODI 😳 As it is said GOD MADE THE PAIR.. It's so true for BA.. & that's y i named my FF 'PAIRS R MADE IN HEAVEN@

I loved how Divya yanked on his ear, treating him like her young son, even tho' he's a grown man. And how caring and concerned Amar was when Bharat pulled the prank, and afterwards. And how Bharat was so regretful at having scared them all.

I so loved how Bharat was considerate of Aditi when she said she didn't like coconut water and held back so she wouldn't feel embarrassed. And when Aditi helped with the sand castle, amazing Bharat with her words ... our house! Ahhhhh! Wonderful!

But my absolute fav scene was the "I Love You" charades. Heheheeee ... I could just see both of them blushing. Then stealing looks at each other as they thought about it later. Neither of them not able to let go of Aditi uttering those words so innocently to Bharat. That's mine fav too... I enjoyed writing it & even could imagine it in front of my eyes...

Thank u dear.. Bohat Bohat Shukriya 😳😛

You brought Bharat❤️Aditi to life as you weaved this wonderful update Khakshan! Thank you! 😊

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Priya

@priyav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

Khakshan,
Its a beautifully written update, loved it. It was quite realistic and i can picture MS in the scenes

B❤️A in a SR room, both are not unhappy with this though😉. Aditi is late for pooja and Bharat sleeping, seems both were lost in each others eyes and thoughts the previous night
Bharat scaring everybody like he's drowning and aditi in tears, wish she hugged him when he is back
'I love you' scene was very cute😛 and aditi shopping for Bharat.
Come'on bharat, do you need any more clues? Confess now..lol

Pls update when you have time and make B confess a lil atleast

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Khakshan

@khakshan-aa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: priyav
Khakshan,
Its a beautifully written update, loved it. It was quite realistic and i can picture MS in the scenes Shukriya Priya for ur kind words.

B❤️A in a SR room, both are not unhappy with this though😉. Aditi is late for pooja and Bharat sleeping, seems both were lost in each others eyes and thoughts the previous night
Bharat scaring everybody like he's drowning and aditi in tears, wish she hugged him when he is back
'I love you' scene was very cute😛 and aditi shopping for Bharat.
Come'on bharat, do you need any more clues? Confess now..lol

Pls update when you have time and make B confess a lil atleast Im working on the next update.. this will be the emotional/romantic one..

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noshi

@punjabikuri007

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Shano darlin....so sorry....there i was goin nuts to look for the next part then there poof!!!! sorry honey.....ok i've got all ur work n GG's mailed to my work id....so I'm gonna slack of big time for a couple of days....n yeah i kno...i won't get fired!!! hopfully, keepin my fingers crossed....be back with comments soon i'm done readin......

but to neglect u guys...plz don't kill me

sum of u kno the reason....my BABY LEFT ME 💔FOR GLORY, n i still can't believe it!!!!!!! RIP MY LUV (i'm talkin abt MJ)

luv ya all

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noshi

@punjabikuri007

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

very nice work done Shanu.....I so wish that the show really had taken BA that serious so my cries n demands start again....don't be lazy to update soon n don't be KANJOOS.....make it long romantic plz.....if u don't mind I can giv a suggestion?????

u know u wrote that there was light muziq on the background (b4 they played the silent acting n guessin game)....i was so hopin n wishin that u wud read my desperate mind n add something like (after the game).....AD start swayin together n as they'r lost in each other...B's hand gets extended to A (obviously, unintentionally).....and A would take it n get close to B n starts dancin.....(yes, ofcourse, unintentionally).....they both will dance w/o hesitation, so absorbed in each other as if nothing can ever come between or stop them tonight....at some point AD would stop to watch the perfect moves of BA and family is out to witness the magic (they jus came out to ask them for dinner but didn't feel like disturbin BA)....Amer goes up to the setreo n change the muziq to Tango 👍🏼 n the show begins.....B looks at A there is something shinnin in her eyes that makes her face golw, givin B an idea that she wants to take the Tango Challenge.....n they dance so smoothly, mesmerizing eachother n everyone around them.....the song ends..... everyone is ready to clap but BA hadn't stopped.....as if they'r dancin to the perfect rythm of their hearts beating so close together.....but nature takes it course n the sound of thunder brings them back to the world where there not meant to be together, just yet!!!!!

they stop dancin but don't let go of eachother... eventually do but not jerkishly.... rain comes down n B takes A's hand n run under the shades!!!!!!!

oh my fantasies......maybe you cud do sumthin like that soon.....

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Khakshan

@khakshan-aa

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Noshi, awww there u are?? I was wondering where in the world have u disappeared. don't even see u much on FB.
Hmmm...nice suggestion. par yar i had this idea in my mind & had kept it for later.. this time one would be a bit longer or may be the last part..🤔
Anyways Thanks for reading it 😊

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noshi

@punjabikuri007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#70

Yaar shanu u kno all abt my heartbreakin....i'm tryin to cope w/it n come out of my depression....but lil by lil...anyway no need to thank me .....supid friends have no formalities....n yeah UPDATE soon....gotta run now...talk 2 y'all l8r

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