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Posted: 16 years ago
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Girls I wrote this passage at Jenifer's request after Friday's episode. Hope you enjoy it. Please do give your comments
Emotional scene between Yura ' Dedicated to all IF girls at Jenifer's request

Rani leaves from Imli's room slowly. She is feeling lonely and alone. She thoughts replay the events that took place in Imli's room. She did not want Yudi to find out about her making the sweater for the baby, but it was her feeble attempt to get her mind off the jealousy she was feeling towards Imli. She could not see Imli and Yudi together anymore, keeping herself busy and in her room took her mind off the current situation and gave her an excuse to stay away from Yudi.

These days no one wanted her around. It was like she was an unwanted guest in her own home. Rani walked into her own room and realized she still had the sweater in her hand. She walks to the garbage can and throws the sweater in it. Tears pour down her cheeks and she throws herself on the bed crying uncontrollably.

Yudi leaves from Imli's room and he feels helpless to see Rani in so much pain and about the whole incident that took place. He wanted to protect Rani from CR but he did not want to hurt Imli's feelings. After all it was Rani who had requested to keep Imli happy for the sake of baby. CR was also doing the same thing. Yudi slowly walks towards his room and sees Rani lying on the bed crying.

Once Rani realizes his presence, she gets up from the bed and wipes her tears.

Rani: Kunwar ji Aap.

Yudi: Aap ro rahi the'.

Rani: Nahi kunwarji hum toh'..

Yudi: Hum jante hai ki aaj joh bhi huya aacha nahi hua. Imli ko aaisa nahi karna chahiya tha. Par Rani Imli ki sooch aap ki sooch se alag hai. Jab tak woh bache ko jaman nahi de deti hume unki har icha poori karni hai. Ye aap hi to kahti hai.

Rani: Hum jante hai kunwarji'.ab se hum aasi galti dubara nahi karege.

Yudi: Hum ne ye kub kaha ki aap ne koyi galti ki hai. Accha hume woh sweater dikhaeya.

She looks at Yudi in shock and then looks at the garbage bin'..Yudi's eyes follow Rani and he notices the sweater in the bin. He walks over to the garbage bin and picks up the sweater and says

Yudi: Aap ne ye sweater ko to phenk diya'.ab jo ma ki mamta hai uuse kaha pheke gi'..Rani humari tarf dekhieye, hum ne Imli se shaadi sirf is liye ki hai ki aap ma ban sanke''.aap ki khusi se jayda hamare liye aur kuch bhi nahi hai. Humne aap se wada kiya hai ki hum aap ko bacha jaroor denge. Magar Rani aap ko bhi ek sach savikaar karna hoga us bache ki ma aap nahi par Imli hogi'..Aur hume Imli ko aur us bache ko bahut sa wakat dena hoga.

Rani looks down and realizes what Yudi was saying is reality. She says in a defeated voice:

Rani: Kunwar ji, kya bache ke aane ke baad aap ke paas humare liya koi samya nahi hoga?

Yudi: Sayad ye hi sach hai'..

Rani runs and hugs Yudi tightly and says:

Rani: Hume koi baccha nahi chahiye. Hume humare Kunwar ji wapas lota degieya Maharaj'.. Hum apne Kunwar ji ko khona nahi chate. Hum unke bina nahi ji payege.

Yudi hugs her back and says: Aap ke kunwar ji humesha aap ke paas the, hai, aur rehege'..Imli ki garf mai humara baccha nahi hai Rani. Imli aur humare bich koi aisa rishta nahi hai. Hum woh jagah aap ke ilawa kisi aur ko de hi nahi sakte. Us din Imli ne hume chai me na jane koi nashili cheez di ki hume pata ki nahi chala aur hum behosh ho gaye. Rani hume Imli ka sach janana hai aur is ke liya aap humara sath deingi na.

Rani: Kunwarji, hum humesha aap ke saath hai.

Yudi hugs her tight and it is the new beginning.

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bsingapury thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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bobbie excellent dear...........i liked it so much passion ............lekin woh yura kaha hain?????? in drama they have been sacrificed on wedding altar i feel
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really nice u made my day yaar nice iloved it lol after so long we got a cute yura even though it imagination but 👏😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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good one bobbidi, but you know what i cant stand the name imli anymore even in FF so if you want to write something good then think this track has ended.
by the way i would very much like it if you start writing the emotional scene you want yura to do at the end of this track confessing to each other about their feelings(if you do plz dont mention imli-use uss ladki or something like that)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bobbie.....go and tell it to the creatives..immediately..

Ahh..............i can imagine this actually happens....Tum nay yeh likh kar mujhay phir say umeed dila di....

Yudi knows that its not his child...i can live with that..

love you for writing this...and Thanks to Jen for requesting...it was so touchy and logical scene..

Thanks for dedication..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome,Bobbie-what a scene yaar.I am praying ki aisa hi scene serial mein dikhayen- I hope u don't mind,dear.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bobbie... Just one question running in my mind...
why, why, why forum girls are not there as creatives, writer, script writer or dialouge
writer... Its really touchy.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That is really good compared to what we had to see. ...I wish you wrote it before and sent it to them. 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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darsh lucky forum girls are not there warnaa humaaraa bhi dimaag gatiyaa kar dete ye log...........noe i think time to live with all FF's thinking tht's what happening in drama like reading update......and live in golden memory with imagination
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Posted: 16 years ago
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we wont see rani leaving mahal coz this track is about to end

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