Short Story - The Prodigal Son

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

that was just fabalous,wonderful treat for all Jai and Bani despo.beautifully written.loved it. 👏

preet 😳

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nema123

@nema123

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#12

Wonderful story.. loved it.. 👏 👏 👏

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#13

gr888 storyy
loved it
that was so perfect

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#14

Divan,

Nice story, sorry that Jai didn't get to see his dad before his death,and Bani is sweet as usual to take him back. Very nicely depicted.

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btkr

@btkr

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#15

Can't believe I didn't comment.... 😕 let me blame the door-bell 😉 ...
Love your short stories...Bani being the patient one and J finally seeing sense...
👏 👏 👏

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divan

@divan

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#16

Thanks to all of you for posting comments,loved reading your comments.:
loka, divya_123, suimi, sheena_row, soodr, btkr, coolgirl_2005, nema_123, jennal20, swatinarang, ofcourse, 7387_nidhi, ofcourse, jigna_07 and sxcdevil 🤗🤗🤗

thanks to all the silent reader who have the story, but if don't post comments than I don't know if you enjoyed.