SS: The Awakening Inside - complete - Page 2

Divan,

Wonderuful story... 👏 👏 👏 Loved the way you wrote Bani's Character... she is so strong and independant...
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I was expecting the same in the real KS... but it is not going in right direction at all...why would Bani run a Dhabba when she is educated and worked in Mumbai..

It was wonderful story... but I don't aree 100% with the end... I wouldn't have mind if Jai never came back and Bani is happily married with Girish.. OR Bani never married to anyone ..

But I think it is very difficult to have a physical relationship with someone else after you love one person so much...and have his child...and he is asking forgiveness... just my pov...

Divan,

Wonderful story. All the characters were potrayed so well.
Good to see Bani as a strong person.
I felt the ending was very apt. Because it is better to be with a person who loves you rather than the person whom you love and in return get nothin but pain.

Kiran

Nema: "But I think it is very difficult to have a physical relationship with someone else after you love one person so much...and have his child."

I don't see why if a woman can't move on and have create a new life for herself, if her previous marriage failed. Companionship becomes more important as you age. Children move on and you can't expect them to be with you all the time.

hey Divan,
it was a gr8 story loved d way u handled d broken relationship of Jai n Bani ..
it was very nice to c tht Bani rani din go runnin to Jai after all he said to her no 1 in her place should ..

benazir

Wonderful story divan 👏 👏 ...u continued from the wounded sherni. 👏 👏 I liked it very much. Bani managed to get her life back on track without JW. Niyati was such a cutie. 😊 Loved that scene where she met him in the party..and he found out that she was his daughter.

Girsh was a lovely character...he felt sad and happy for Bani when he learnt JW was back in their lives. But Bani went and propsed to him! 😲 Wow!! 👏 👏
JW ke paas wapas jaana was out of the question. She was moving on with life...good going.!👍🏼

Lovely story! 👏 👏
Tazoo

A very mature and touching story. 👏 👏 👏 I liked the way the story was told - it was neither abrupt nor lengthy. Felt good to read it all in one shot.

hey kanta dii

now after KS done
i dont know how this type of end owuld have been ?
i think i am a jb despo

awesome 👏