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divan

@divan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

I just want to say thanks everyone that gave feedback to this short story.
There seems to be a lot silent readers who have read the story and thank you to them as well as this isn't the normal cute story of JB.

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Taz234

@Taz234

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#22

Good heavens what an update that was...read half of it y'day..finished just now! Bani went through such a horrific ordeal ...that AD...urrrghhhhh 😡 😡 ...had a feeling it was him!

Jai helped Bani out really well 😃 ...supported her took her away on a trip too. Bani asking him to marry her was really touching...was difficult for her but she knows Jai is the one.
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Superb ending great ff! 👏 👏 👏

Tazoo!

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divan

@divan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

I loved killing AD, KS would have terrific trps if AD had been out and out goonda and Jai had finished him off.

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#24

Divan,

That was a marvelous piece of writing. Very well done. Hmm, AD as the villain?

I really liked the action packed story - it's more like Casino Royale and Mickey Spillane put together. Very interesting. Loved your writing style in this FF.

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