~for Abhi n Nikki~ a few , tears , smile , anger..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guys😛

..last night i couldn't sleep, coz all of a sudden i started to think of Abhi n Nikki...
many you know i'm not very good with words at all...🤢
so i didn't really think about it...and just wrote want was running in my mind...
m a little worried n a little scared of u may think of me after this..
but...all well...😊m taking a risk
here you go...

~for nikki~

Every tear , every pain , every wound
you give , i will accept , for they belong to the man i love
i have broken , i have betrayed , i have shattered
every dream , every thrust , every smile
for that my love i accept...
Every tear , every pain , every wound
until you become mine once again
however my sweet love
do try to understand
for i am only a confuessed girl in her first love...

~for Abhi~

you must have thought i was bad , i was cold , a heart-less soul,
who never thought of anyone esle but himself
i am, an unbreakable stone , an unmoveable mountian, standing tall but alone...
i run , i hide but never let out a smile
instead i push whoever tries to get to close
with every roar , every bark ,i have

but look at me now, here i am staning infront of you
and all of a sudden i feel my cold heart melting to your warm smile
unable to move my graze of you
what do i do now, how do i push you away
the farther you are the more closer i wanna get

For you my love , i will break every stone , climb every mountain that leads to you...
together we will stand tall, hand in hand..
For you my love have become
my tears, my sadness , my anger , my passion , my smile , my joy
every emostion that makes me loose contol

in my every breath
i promise to chairish and treasure you forever
until every breath is left and beyond death...
and until the word love still exists..

plz tell me know what you think of it...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg summer👏it was awesome i luved abhi;s part the most ,lets see how long AN will wear their "I DONT CARE ABOUT YOU "mask.

love always strike again it wont leave its victim just like that 😃

beautifully written summer

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i loved it!!

its awesome!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Summer,

This is Awesome 👏 👏 You've brought out both Abhi & Nikki's feelings so well. Well Done !

Michelle
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: clars

omg summer👏it was awesome i luved abhi;s part the most ,lets see how long AN will wear their "I DONT CARE ABOUT YOU "mask.

love always strike again it wont leave its victim just like that 😃

beautifully written summer

omg .. really😃😃
come here let me give you a hug🤗🤗🤗
thank u so so much😊
i personally like abhi's part the best too...
hmmm...i agree ...lets see how long can these two play the game of love....😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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summer they're both BEAUTIFUL !!!

my fav line :
and all of a sudden i feel my cold heart melting to your warm smile
unable to move my graze of you


the one for nikki was really extra nice yaar :D
it really portrayed how she's feeling
amazing job !
please keep writing :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: divya_dmg

i loved it!!

its awesome!!👏

thank you 😃
summer gives 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: lovebapu18

awesome!! it's really nice!!

thank you...😊
and more 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mich09


Summer,

This is Awesome 👏 👏 You've brought out both Abhi & Nikki's feelings so well. Well Done !

Michelle

thank you😛.. i have tried to bring out their feelings...just trying
hugs🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: fizzazaza

summer they're both BEAUTIFUL !!!

my fav line :
and all of a sudden i feel my cold heart melting to your warm smile
unable to move my graze of you


the one for nikki was really extra nice yaar :D
it really portrayed how she's feeling
amazing job !
please keep writing :)

Fizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
thanku😛
u liked nikki's one😊😊
m just trying to shows their feeling...trying...
if i get anymore thoughts i'll let ya know😊
just hope its not doing the mid of the night😆
summer gives🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hahah its ok ill be up :P

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fizzazaza

hahah its ok ill be up :P

hmmm...i'll see u in the FC...
where have u been?

Originally posted by: Erutan99

very nice! good job!

thanku😊
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