FF: ZINDAGI... (Part 3 updated AUG 15th)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi everybody! 😃this ff is just some idea that came into my head and i decided to write
it down! well, I'll just stop babbling and put up the ff, and please be very honest as to how you feel this ff is... awaiting comments eagerly as always😉! Enjoy😊

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PART I

She sighed as she sat down on the bed'their bed. It was their bedroom now, as she had been reminded by a giggling Veera, Meher and Kuldi. She looked around at the lavish decorations, the sweet scent of roses and the oh-so-romantic candles, that she was sure must have been her sister's idea.

She sighed again, as the memories of her past came flooding back to her'her Ma and Papaji, their deaths, the seemingly unending months that she and Meher had spent, just about surviving, the Junenas, her happiness that she had thought would never end, her love' and then her betrayed and broken heart, then she had left to Boston, under the pretence of completing her masters degree so she could join Bauji in their business.

She had known that it would come to something like this, the moment Ma and Bauji had called her and told her to return to India. And here she was,

Mrs. Heer Prem Juneja, sitting in their bedroom, on the first night of their marriage. She looked up at the sound of the door closing with a snap. She stood up as he came in, her face not betraying the fear that bubbled within her heart, as she watched him come towards her. He gave her that well-rehearsed half crooked smile.

"Welcome home, Heer", he whispered coming ever closer, their noses almost touching as he looked into her eyes, smirk still in place,"You've been ignoring me since you came back, but what will you do now Heer? You're my wife after all! And tonight it's our first night as husband and wife, and I plan to make it unforgettable'" he said confirming all her fears, as he slowly ran his finger down her bare arm, while circling his other hand around her slim waist.

"You don't scare me" she said coldly, her face and voice still not betraying the fact that she was scared stiff at what he could or would do,'' and don't think that my marrying you means that I belong to you, because that is one thing which will never happen, Mr. Prem Juneja! I have married you for Ma and Bauji's sake'and please remember that, I know you for what you are and not for what you show yourself to be. Goodnight!" and with that she made up her bed on the couch and lay down, not even once looking at Prem.

As she lay down on the couch, she remembered all that had led to this situation, she had longed for this day at sometime, but that was before she had realized the harsh reality''

FLASHBACK

She was feeling happy and light for the first time, after her parents' death. She had met Lallit and Gayatri Juneja, and had been kindly accepted as family members into the Juneja family. All of them were perfect sweethearts, of course she hadn't met all of them! But she knew that the one person that had been left, would also be like all the others' Prem Juneja.... she didn't know why, but everytime she heard this name, a small involuntary smiled played across her face....................

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So guys! what do you think??😊Please leave comments😕
I need atleast five comments before I continue😕
and Please be Honest!
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Gargee😳
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Casssp thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice start i m eagerly waiting to know that wat had prem done to heer. Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice start i am happy that i am 2nd one to continue so suspicious wat did prem did to heer so that heer is so angry towards heer hope you will update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi again! thankyou! thankyou so much for the lovely comments...😊
you'll find out exactly why Heer is so angry with Prem in this chapter..😊
but before i begin, let me assure you that though Prem might seem a bit different😕
in this ff.... after sometime, you'll all really like him.... as he's our good old Prem😆
please forgive me for any mistakes😕 and enjoy!

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PART II
FLASHBACK (HEER) CONTINUED
Preet was a complete joker, and so Meher took a liking to him immediately, you could never see one without the other! she was really happy that Meher had found a real good friend, Harman was a sweety, a little shy and always the target for Preet's pranks. Veera was dynamic, sweet, intelligent, funny and beautiful-- a complete package! Kuldi was the big sister, but sometimes naughty, and very much in love with her husband Kiran jiju, even though they had three children and the fourth was on its way, still they tried to spend some quality time together. Lalit reminded Heer of her father and insisted that the girls called him bauji and Gayatri Ma, who was the kindest, sweetest and the most caring mother anone could ever have!
Then Prem arrived, he had just come back from Canada. He was everything a girl could want-- handsome, sweet, naughty, cute, and caring in his own way. If his eyes were heart-melting then his laugh was genuinely Knee-buckling! He was a terrible flirt, but he seemed to understand limits.Graduallly the two of them became really close friends..... he taught her how to drive a car(though he was scared to sit with her in the same car for weeks after their first drive), he took her shopping, showed her around the town, went to movies with her and opened himself up to her completely. she would wait for him to come home from the office so that they could have dinner together, he would help her with her business management competetive studies, and even took her revision for the exams!
She realized that she wanted to spend her life with this man, who had come so close to her in a matter of some weeks. he would call her from the office and they would make dates to go out, sometimes with the others, and sometimes alone. he taught her ball dance and everyone agreed that their chemistry positively crackled with electricity!!! then one day, Prem entered her room, looking really nervous, she was sitting on the bed reading a thriller when she noticed him pacing around and looked up at him puzzled by this sudden change in his cool and calm attitude.
" Prem, Kya hua? are you alright?"
" Heer, I want to talk to you about something very important... wait don't interrup me... look Heer
I know we are good friends and all that, but I cannot live without you! I love you Heer, and I don't know since when! and I want to make you the happiest woman in the whole world Heer! I want to know, if you feel the same thing about me... Wait, don't answer now, take your own time... I'll be waiting.........I love you Heer." He said all this, in one breath and looked at her through those oh-so-lovely chocolate brown eyes, that Heer wanted to hug him. But before she could respond he was out of the room and down the stairs!
She sat there for sometime, stunned at what she had heard and happy that she had heard exactly what she had wanted to hear! suddenly her cellphone rang, and as she listened to the news, she thought that she must be god's favourite being on the Earth! but she was a little sad that for fulfilling her and her late father's dream she would have to make her love wait, but she would make up for it! thinking along these lines, she ran down the stairs two at a time, to tell Prem her answer and the good news. she thought that she could hear him talking to someone in his bedroom and went to it but stopped dead in her tracks, as she heard him talking to his friend Rishabh
" Please Rishabh, do you honestly think that I would fall in love? but I must admit she is hot..... and I know she loves me!"
" Gosh Prem! You're really patient aren't you?? I mean all this hard work of the last 5 weeks, finally resulting into a beautiful experience!!!" Rishabh laughed the nastiest laughs that Heer had ever heard in her life. It was as if the world had ceased to exist for Heer, her heart was telling her one thing, her mind quite another... and before she could stop herself, she whispered the one word that had been etched into her Heart and soul
"Prem...."
He turned around and looked at her with a scared and worried expression.
" Heer--"
"Boston," she said cutting him off," I have been selected for the School of Management, Boston. I have to leave today. I just came to say goodbye. Goodbye Prem. Forever." she said and ran all the way to her room. Once she had reached her room and locked the door, she let all her emotions out. she cried as she packed her bags.
As she left for the airport, she didn't once look back at Prem, and by the time she had boarded the plane, she had decided that she would never let herself get weakened by something as superficial as love.
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After two years of hard work, Heer finally had her masters degree in management and then she decided to join Lalit Juneja's office.............
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During the five years that she had been in Boston, Prem had tried to call her, meet her and talk to her many times, even using work as his excuse but he was never succesfull................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice update. plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Gargee,

I m new to this forum
This is my very first comment in this forum
Just read ur FF & m finding it very interesting please do continue soon.
Raksh😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey superb update but how can prem do that he didn't love her oh now it's going to be nice how prem will fall in love with heer now also i am the happy as now i am the 3rd to reply you really i was silent reader but i dont know why when i read your ff i felt like i should reply anyway it was really nice update the next part as soon as possible probably tomorrow if you can
Bye
Edited by aaminaman - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey awsome yaar,
weould luv too see wat hppens now...
please cont soon
luv
tina
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow....yaar u are good...great ff....plz post the next pasrt soon....em waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i m waiting for the next update gud story

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