FF: ZINDAGI... (Part 3 updated AUG 15th)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

amu142

@amu142

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

wow!! u stated another FF!! and didnt PM me!! i am gussa!!

no no...actually am thrilled...this story is different from the previous

one.....update soon!!

Quote

Sarah

@--Sarah--

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

great starting ...great story....btw How could Prem do that to Heer?...but it would be nice to find falling for heer after marriage....

Waiting for the next update....

Thanks for writing

Sarah

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

hi guys!
plz tell me if i shud continue
love
gargee

Quote

rakshar

@rakshar

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

plz do continue

raksh😊

Quote

Rhea_401

@Rhea_401

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

u shud continue its very gud.........

Quote

Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Gargee
hi guys! plz tell me if i shud continue love gargee

hey hon I jsut came across it and your first two chapters blew me away plzz plzzz plzzz continue don't leave it hanging

~aashifa~

Quote

sonia

@cute_bear

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

hey..this ff is soo good...

prem is so different

wow i hope prem and heer start getting along

and u should continue for deffo

and pleae when u update me which im hopin is soon

do pm me xD

Quote

Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

hi everybody!!!😊
I'm back!!!
with a new update... which i hope you all will like😕
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
PART 3
Prem sighed as he looked at his wife. Oh how he loved her.... true he had realized that a bit late,
but before he could have explained his side of the matter, she had left for boston... and after that it would have been easier to talk to a hungry tiger than it had been to get Heer to talk to him.
there had been no choice left to him but to go and tell Ma about his love for Heer..... Ma had taken up the job from there and he in less than two weeks' time he was married, to the love of his life, to the one person he suspected that hated him the most. He looked over at the couch on which Heer lay... God she looked beautiful...
He had tried to reason with her before marriage, he had tried to tell her how much he loved her, that how he had realized his mistake and that whatever he had said that day, had been the most sincere words of his life......... but his insufferable boasting had blowed the trust out of her... she had avoided him again and again. and by the looks of it he would have to use some wit to gain her trust again.... which was difficult, as everytime he looked at her, his heart melted to butter and his words got stuck in his throat. he sighed again... and drifted into an uneasy sleep.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
okay that's it for now
i'll come back with more guys..
sorry for the samll update
but there's sumthing more interesting in store!
love
Gargee😳