Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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NICE!! 👏

i will cont 2nite!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
that's really good!!!
plz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
awesome work man....tht wz 2 gd..wicked...keep up wiv da gr8 work...m sure dhruv wnt die..most probably beaten up a lot..or in serious condition
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
really great story, can't wait for more!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 10:

Ved is shocked and wants to quickly run to the hospital but then decides to tell suraj what happened first.

Vedika arives at surajs place.she is by his door about to enter when she hears him talking.........

Suraj: tumhara kaam ho gaya?

Guy: ji, sir, Dhruv ko humne
bahut maara

Suraj: good, very good, lo yeh tumhara paisa(gives money to the guy)

Vedika is shocked to hear this and for a moment cannot believe her ears, she just walks away from surajs place and sice she was by the door no one saw her.

Vedika(thinking to herself)jee kartha hai ki suraj ke pas ja kar puchoon ki usne yeh kyun kiya aur sab ko uske assli chehara deeka doon, lekin abhi Dhruv ko meri zaroorat hai.

Vedika reaches the hospital and when she gets there she asks the nurses where mr. Raizada room is and the nurse tells her?.Vedika goes there and she reaches there right when the doc is telling the family that Dhruv is perfectly fine its just that his wounds are very deep and he has a cast on his leg.

Vedika is just really happy that nothing happened to Dhruv.she goes and visits him in his room after everyone in the family has since only one person is allowed there at a time.

Dhruv: (sees Vedika coming into the room) arre, ved tum?

Ved: (sad) tum teekh tho ho na?

Dhruv: haan!

Ved: Dhruv, (sits next to him) yeh sab hua kaise?(holds his hand)

Dhruv: main drive kar ke ghar ja raha tha jab kuch log muje raste main rok liya aur phir muje marne laga.

Ved: (very sad) (hugs Him) lekin aab tum careful rehna, agar tumhe kuch ho jata tho.....

Dhruv: arre, ved, main teekh hoon na.

Its been a few days since the accident and ved goes to dhruvs house after school to talk to him and give him his homework. She enters the house and says hi to everyone and goes upstairs to dhruvs room where he was resting.

As she enter the room she sees Dhruv looking at a photo in a frame, (he quickly hides the photo under his pillow )

Ved: yeh kya dekh rahe the?

Dhruv: ummm, kuch nahi, sirf bored tha tho.....

Ved: (excitedly)tho photo dekh rahe the? Acha, muje bhi deekao kiska photo dekh rahe the.

Dhruv: (stammers)voh, uuhhh,(gets really nervous) he takes the photo frame and tries to secure it from ved but she grabs it and looks at it.

Ved(blushes)😳

Dhruv: voh, umm, main tho sirf time pass kar raha tha.(very nervous at this point)

Ved: haan, umm, tumhe mera photo kahaan se mila? Yeh, tho mera bahut hi gandhi photo hai.anyways, lo ( gives him a pile of papers)

Dhruv: yeh kya?

Ved: homework
Dhruv: (looks at the papers) ved, muje madat karogi, etna sara homework main akela kaise karoon?

Ved: haan

Vedika helps him in his homework as they're doing that they keep sneaking glances of each other.😳
After a while Vedika leaves.

The next day Dhruv gets his cast off and both him and Vedika go to college together as usual..when they bump in to suraj.

Dhruv: hi suraj!

Suraj: (ignores Dhruv)arre ved, baath kya hai, tum muje kuch din se ignore kyun kar rahi ho?

Vedika gets furious..slaps him and takes dhruvs hands and leaves.

Dhruv: Vedika tumne...(before he can finish)

Vedika looks at Dhruv and starts crying as she hugs him.
Dhruv: ved, baath kya hai?

Ved: Dhruv, tumhara accident suraj ne karwaya tha.

Dhruv: Kya!

Ved: haan,( tells him what happened)jisne maine etna din thak apna bhai mana usne muje etna bada dokha diya.maine us par etna vishwas kiya tha.....

Suraj is standing a little far behind from Dhruv and Vedika and has heard everything......

Suraj: (thinks to himself) Vedika agar tum apne marzi se mere pas nahi aye tho muje aur koi tharika apnana parega(has an evil look on his face😈).....................


HOPE YOU GUYS LIKED IT?SORRY, PROBABLY A LITTLE CONFUSING!

Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
nice!!!!!!!!

so sorry jaan...... i havent been helping

let me get on track!! and i will be back!


awesome part!

cute ved and dhruv scenes!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
Part 11

Suraj is looking at them

Dhruv tells her not to worry about it so much!

They both walk off.......

Suraj keeps looking at Ved

His attention is only there

He cant take it anymore!!!!!!

Just seeing them two together

It annoys him!!

Next day at skool

Ved and Dhruv are together

Suraj is looking from far away

He tells a girl

To go and call her

But not to say that he's calling her

She does that

Ved excuses herself

And she walks off

She is called somewhere

In a room

SHe opens the door

Calls saying anyone there??

But no one is there

She walks in a little bit more

Dhruv is sitting

And is looking around

Ved is still there

Since no one is there

She decides to leave

When she comes by the door...

Its locked!!

She is shocked.....

She tries to open it

But she cant!!!

She is yelling and what not

But then ...

Suraj: No one can hear you!

She turns and its Suraj

He is smiling

She is shocked

ANd she is scared

Ved: You??

Suraj: Yes me!!!

Ved: what do you want???

Suraj smiles

S: U!!

ved is shocked!!

Ved: Look...... i dont know why you are doing this!! But please.... let me go!!!!

S: I wont!!!!

He is scaring her a litlte bit

Ved tries to get away from him

But he comes closer

Dhruv is thinking where she is

Its been a while

He gets up

And looks for her

He asks people

They say they dont know!!

He calls for her

But nothing

SOme person says that she went in there

Dhruv is going by the door....

Suraj grabs Ved

Ved is telling him to let go

But he isnt

S is saying you are mine

ANd only mine

Ved is hitting himi

And trying to make him let go

But he doesnt

Then she pushes him

And she runs

He chases her

Dhruv is coming closer by the door

Ved trips

And she falls

Suraj comes down

Ved is like no.....

Suraj is smiling

S: No one can have you!! ONly me!!!!

Ved is screaming!!!!!!

Dhruv is coming by the door

SUraj goes down...

Ved is crying and screaming

Then Dhruv opens the door

And he sees........

And is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




The End!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
😭 great part...

dhruv 2 the rescue!!!!!! 👏 👏

hope dhruv beats suraj up!!! 😡 🤢
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
gr8 parts! GO DHRUV GO! kick suraj's a***. 😃 please continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
wow!!!! gr8 update...plz continue..u 2 r awesome riters...diz fan fic is simply awesome so interestin...oh plz continue soon m dyin 2 no wt happenz nxt...

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