Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
hey gr8 parts man...plz continue...gr8 story...hmmm wt will suraj do 2 separate dhruv and vedika....???? 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 3

Ved:introduces Nih to Dhruv

Nih: hi

D: hi

D: this is my younger sis tara and my older bro rudra

Nih: hi tara.

Tara: hi

Rudra: (staring at her😉) hi nih.

Everyone starts talking and telling jokes and laughing when suddenly uma calls ved.

Ved: (picks up her cell) hey mama,

Uma: kahaan ho beta😕?Ghar kab aoo gi

Ved: Main aur nih Dhruv ke ghar par hoon
( asks nih when they will leave)

Dhruv( interrupts): dinner kaa kar jana!

Nih: nahi, phir kabi, abhi hum dono ko jana hoga

Rudra: teek hai, lekin dinner karne kabi zaroor aana

Nih and ved smile

Nih: okay😳

All say there goodbyes

Next morning( Dhruv arrives at ved house 1 hour earlier than he usually does)

Knocks on front door

Ved in pjs opens the door

Ved: etni Jaldi agaye

Dhruv: haan ghar par bored hogaya tha tho socha aajoon

Ved:ok, andhar ao

Dhruv comes in and sits on the couch

Ved: jab etni Jaldi agaye tho isi bahana main ghar ka tour de dethi hoon

Dhruv: ok

Ved goes and shows him around the house and they come back and sit on the couch and talk for a while.

Ved: (looks at the time😲) tum yaha beto , main ready ho kar athi hoon

Dhruv:ok

Dhruv starts looking around the house and at all the photos of her family in the living room,suddenly his eyes fall on a photo with a garland over it. He starts wondering who this could be when ved comes downstairs,

Ved: kya dekh rahe ho?

Dhruv:Vedika, yeh photo kiska hai

Ved: looks up at the photo and tells Dhruv that its her dad (tears start flowing down her cheeks😭) he passed away last year in an accident😭

Dhruv: (feels bad to have made her cry😒) iam sorry Vedika, muje nahi patha tha. He goes over to ved and hugs her hoping to console her.Ved starts crying harder and hugs him back.

As they?re both hugging each other , Suraj suddenly enters the house and is shocked to see this.
Suraj is seething with anger as he watches this.😡

What will Suraj do next.....wait and see!

hey, hope you like it!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
great fic! I love Sindoor fan fics!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 4:

Suraj to his surprise notices that ved and Dhruv didnt see him and just turns around and leaves her house.

Dhruv: sorry Vedika, maine tumhe bena vajay rooladiya. (both sit on the couch)

Ved: (smiles slightly😊 ) Dhruv, tumhi ne tho kaha tha ki dosti main sorry nahi hai.

Dhruv:acha ab chale?

Ved: haan

In the car

Dhruv:oh, Vedika maine tumhe batana bool gaya.

Ved: kya

Dhruv:aaj sham ko kya tum aur nih busy ho?

Ved: nahi, kyun😕

Dhruv: kyun ki main soch raha tha ki aaj tum dono mere ghar dinner karlo😛

Ved: haan, so what time?

Dhruv: well, maine socha tha ki college ke baadh hum nih ko pick kar ke ghar chaldete hai. That way hum sab ko thora waqt saath mil jaya ga.

Ved: ok, main nih ko abhi call kar ke message de dethi hoon.(calls her and leaves a message)

Ved: nih ka cell off tha tho maine message chor diya.

Dhruv: lo, agaye

Both get out of the car and start talking about what they will do after school when suddenly someone bumps into Dhruv! Dhruv turns around to face him, before Dhruv says anything ved shouts,

Ved: suraj!! (goes and hugs him.)

Suraj: arre ved tum

Ved: kab vapas aye

Suraj: kal raat ko

Ved: aur muje bataya bhi nahi😡

Suraj: sorry ved but main trip ke baadh bahut thak gaya tha

Ved: ok, well anyway. ( takes dhruvs hand and pulls him next to her😉)yeh hai mera dost Dhruv.

Ved:(to Dhruv)yahi suraj hai.

Dhruv.(sweetly) oh hi suraj, ap ke bareme bahut suna

Suraj;(sourly🤢) hi Dhruv

All go to there classes and at the end of the school day meet in front of the school.

Ved is about to leave with Dhruv when suraj comes to her.

Suraj: arre ved kahaan ja rahi ho, maine socha tha ki aaj hum saath main baath kar lethe hai?. Jaanna nahi chati ki australlia kaisa tha

Ved: oh, sorry suraj, lekin maine pehle se Dhruv ke saath plans banadiya tha.

Dhruv: (to suraj)agar tum chaho tho tum bhi saath a sakthe ho

Suraj: nahi, phir kabi

Ved: ok

Both Dhruv and Vedika leave,

Suraj thinking 2 himself; maine socha tha ki aaj main ved ko bathadoon ki main unse kitna pyar karta hoon lekin yeh Dhruv ka musibath pathani kaha se tapak para! 😡

SORRY GUYS, TODAYS PART WAS KINDA STUPID AND BORING, I COULDNT THINK OF A LOT!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 5:

After ved and Dhruv pick up nih, they go to dhruvs house.As they enter the house.....
You see kavita and viren coming downstairs in partying clothes ..(kavita is wearing a really bright and glittery red sari and viren a gray suit with a red tie to match kavitas sari😊)

Dhruv: Mama, papa?aap log kahaan jarahe ho?

Viren:beta hum ko aaj ek dost ke party main jana hai, ghar aane main bahut dher ho jayenge.

Nih; auntie aap bahut khoobsurat lag rahi hai is sari main
(Rudra interrupts):mama hi kyun? Papa bhi utni hi ache lag rahe hai😉!

All laugh and kavita and viren leave.

Ved; tara nahi deekahi deh raha?

Dhruv: oh, voh humara couson ke ghar gayi hai.

Dhruv: chalo, ghar ka tour de detha hoon.

Dhruv and rudra go show the sisters around the house and they come into rudras room(very big room with tons of books)

Nih: wow, muje nahi patha tha ki tum bhi books main interest lethe ho.

Dhruv: haan, agar bhaiyya ko moka mile tho woh books se shaadi kar letha😆!(starts laughing)

Rudra and nih start talking about books and such so Dhruv and ved leave them alone. Both go outside into the garden in the front lawn.

Dhruv: tho ved yeh suraj..tum dono sirf dost ho yaa??😉

Ved: (starts laughing😆)

Dhruv: hass kyun rahi ho?

Ved: kyun ki tumne saval hi aisa pucha.

Dhruv: matlab?

Ved: Dhruv, suraj tho mera bhai jaisa hai!

Dhruv: oh!

Vedika starts laughing when the phone rings, its..........
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
Its Suraj

VEd answers

S asks where is she

VEd tells him

HE is getting mad!!!!

He doesnt sound like it over the phone

But he is!!!!!

He's thinking

Why is she over there????

Ved gets busy in that

That she tells S she has to go

And she hangs up

S is looks at his phone!!!

He is thinking

That he has to tell her

Before DHruv does anything!!

Or says anything!!

Ved gets back to the tour

And She conts to talk about

How Suraj is her good friend

She hasnt looked at him in any other way

Dhruv us like okay!!!!

meanwhile Rudra and Nih are still talking to each other

They have a lot in common w/ each other

About 20 mins passed

And neither of them realized it

They keep talking and talking

When its alomost time to eat

DHruv and Ved call them

They are like whoa!!!

Time went by fast

They both come down

They are both still talking about books

Dhruv and Ved are like can we please talk about something else!!

Rudra: Dhruv i know that you hate to read!!

Ved: U hate to read!

DHruv; Yes!!!

Nih: So does Ved!!!

Dhruv; Really??

Ved: yes!!!!

Nih: But its good for you!!

Ved: YEah right!!!!.... bunch of book worms!!!

Nih: There's nothing wrong w/ that!!!!!!

R: Yes!!!!

All four of them talk

Afterwards.......

Nih and Rudra

Start talking again

Ved and Dhruv are talking

Uma calls them up

Saying you guyz arent home yet

And asks if they are okay!

Nih is like yes everyhting is okay!!!

ANd they will leave in like 10 mins!!!

R is like no!!!

Nih: Ved!!... come on we have to leave!!!!

Ved: Oh my god!! Yes!!!! ... its getting late!!!

R: But...

Nih: DOnt worry we will come back!!

R: You sure?

Nih nods her head yes!!!

R smiles at her!!!

Nih smiles back

Dhruv tells Ved that he will pick her up tomorrow

Ved is like okay

Next Morning

Dhruv picks Ved up

He beat Suraj by 5 mins

cuz he goes

She had already left

Uma tells him that she left

S is like w/ who??

Uma says Dhruv

S is mad

He says thanx

ANd he leaves

They all meet up at school

S sees Ved...

ANd she is walking w/ Dhruv


He is mad


The End!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 parts. pls continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 7:

Suraj starts walking towards Vedika when suddenly his group of friends croud him and he cant see where Dhruv and Vedika went which makes him angrier than he was before.

Ved: Dhruv, tomorrows the valentines dance!

Dhruv: tho?😕

Ved: tho! Decide kara ki tum kiske saath jaoge?😉

Dhruv: ved, tum tho janti ho ki is college me main naya
hoon aur tumhara beger kisi aur ko nahi janta.

Ved: (thinking) hmmm, thab hum dono saath ja sakte hai.

Dhruv: kya

Ved: haan, come on it?ll be fun.

Dhruv: ok, sure, main tumhe 6 o?clock pick karne ahoonga

Ved: ok, lekin mera pas koi acha dress nahi hain. Kya hum aaj sham ko shopping ja sakte hain

Dhruv: main aur shopping?

Ved: (starts laughing)haan, tum mere ache dost ho, kam se kam muje ek dress choose karne main mera madath kar sakte ho!

Dhruv:teekh hai!

Vedika starts talking to Dhruv about what kind of dress she wants and what not.....

In class:

Dhruv and Vedika are sitting together and class has started when suraj walks in late?.(gives the teacher a note and sits in the back?.he notices that Dhruv and Vedika are siting next to each other and gets really angry)
the geography teacher assigns the class a project and gives them a choice if they want to work together or not.Dhruv asks Vedika and they decide to work together, suraj decides to talk to Vedika after school and try to get her away from Dhruv.

End of the school day:

Dhruv and Vedika meet at her locker and suraj comes.

Suraj: hey Vedika, whats up?

Vedika: oh, nothing much.

Suraj: are you busy today?

Ved: yes, iam going shopping with Dhruv. By the way, who are you going with to the valentines day dance?

Suraj: oh, I don?t know but can I talk to you tonight, its really important.

Ved: haan, aaj raat ko tum ghar dinner ke liye ajana aur hum baath bhi kar lethe hai.

Suraj: ok

Dhruv and Vedika leave. Suraj is still standing there thinking that tonight he will tell Vedika how much he loves her and she?ll be his forever.

At the mall:

Vedika picks out 5 dresses and asks Dhruv which one he prefers.

Dhruv: umm, yeh wala(picks out a sleeveless red dress, knee length) aur yeh( picks a black really glittery dress with a red flower on one shoulder and frills on the bottom, also knee lenth)

Ved: tum kya pehno ge?

Dhruv: black suit, kyun?

Ved: ok, thab main iss black dress le loongi.we'll match!

Vedika goes to the cashier and pays but it turns out that shes short on money. dhruv hears this ans goes up to the cashier and gives her his credit card to pay for the dress.

Ved: yeh kya kiya? tum kyun pay kar diye?

Dhruv: dont worry vedika, akir hum dost hai aur main etna madat tho kar sakta hoon.

Ved: thanks dhruv.

Dhruv: ketna bar main bataoon, no thank yous and sorrys in friendship. ab, chale!

Dhruv goes to drop Vedika off at her house.

In the car:

Ved: main etna kush hoon, I cant wait for tomorrow!

Dhruv: (starts laughing) tum tho aise act kar rahe ho ki pehla bar kisi party main ja rahi ho!
(they reach vedikas house)

Ved: andhar aao ge?

Dhruv: nahi, phir kabi

Ved: ok, bye

Dhruv:bye

Vedika goes inside the house and goes to her room.
Vedika is thinking how much happy she is and that she is kind of falling for Dhruv, keeps thinking how cute he is and whatnot when someone knocks on the door, she goes and opens it:

Ved: arre, suraj tum!

Suraj: haan, tumne hi tho kaha tha ki aaj main tumhare ghar dinner ke liye aao.

Ved: oh, sorry, main tho bhul hi gayi thi.

Suraj: kya baath hai, etni kush kyun ho?

Ved: ( smiling) kuch nahi, Dhruv ke bare main soch rahi thi, dekho (picks up the dress) usne mere liye yeh dress karidha.

Suraj at this point is hopping mad but still not showing it!
Suraj(thinks to himself) aab yeh Dhruv ka muje kuch karna parega!

What will he do next? wait and see!


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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i will cont tomorrow!!!!! no time today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was really good!!!
plz continue soon!

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