Loquacious-one shot - Page 2

Originally posted by: xMarauderx

lolll....I have to give GRE and IELTS....so there are quite a lot fo words in the books for GRE.

And if I'm reading any book n come across, I just write it on my white board and keep it there for 2 months Then I open the dictionary to find out the meaning :P

Ohhh tenthie.....busy ppl.....what abt V-day tho....ru busy even for that???? :P😆
What happened to ur hunkie withe the golden badge?? :-p😉😆😳

Achi baat hai ji...padhte raho :D but seriously, I just love ur vocab!

I tell u, procrastination is such a bad thing! =)) Look who's talking!

Ohhh, toh V-Day nikal bhi chuka hai kya??!! :P Kya karein, apna aisa luck nahi...Balki V-Day ke din I was happily sitting at tutz (Surprise surprise, I go to tutz! =)) :P) giving a 3-hour long test of Maths, followed by a 5/2 (I love improper fractions! :P) hours ka Science ka test...Toh matlab it turns out ki I have the most boring life on Earth, nothing hot n' happening in my life! Geez!

And btw (:">), it's not a golden badge but a blue tie :">:">:">

And yes, Rannvijay is like SUPERLY HOT! :">
He's also a dilliwala :">
And he's hot :">
And he's from Delhi :">
And he's hot! :">

And I also know ki now you also know ki I have FINALLY lost it! :">

Originally posted by: ashiandyuvirock

Achi baat hai ji...padhte raho :D but seriously, I just love ur vocab!

I tell u, procrastination is such a bad thing! =)) Look who's talking!

Ohhh, toh V-Day nikal bhi chuka hai kya??!! :P Kya karein, apna aisa luck nahi...Balki V-Day ke din I was happily sitting at tutz (Surprise surprise, I go to tutz! =)) :P) giving a 3-hour long test of Maths, followed by a 5/2 (I love improper fractions! :P) hours ka Science ka test...Toh matlab it turns out ki I have the most boring life on Earth, nothing hot n' happening in my life! Geez!

And btw (:">), it's not a golden badge but a blue tie :">:">:">

And yes, Rannvijay is like SUPERLY HOT! :">
He's also a dilliwala :">
And he's hot :">
And he's from Delhi :">
And he's hot! :">

And I also know ki now you also know ki I have FINALLY lost it! :">

Lollll...yea rannVJ is hottt....and he's very cool and without all the propensity to get into arguements or use too much of swear words like raghu.....but thats maybe because he's anchoring the show and he's gotta be nice to everyone.😆😆😆
But I wonder how he was when he himself was a roadie....to have won the contest...he must have indulged in some given amount of politics atleast naa??

U must be seeing delhi-6 in the near future, right??😉


Ohhh....blue tie huh....so do you imagine and fantasize about pulling that blue tie, sometimes in the day...or often times in the day??? 🤣🤣🤣
U just said blue tie....n i remembered diego n robby pulling his tie🤣

thank yew, btw, I'm trying to improve my vocab all the time with some mature sounding words like "LOL" and "shit" and ":P". I'm not sure if the last one classifies as a word too...but there you go...it's still my fav word along with lol😆

Originally posted by: *nitz_rocks*

Harshuuuuuuuuuu...me backkkkkkkkkk!! Okie I am simply losing words to tell you much I ADORE this shot! ☺️☺️☺️ Its soo typical AY-ish...I love every single dialouge in it...and I can soo hear AY saying it...i can soooooooo hear ittttttt!! And their tone so makes me imagine the scene and that makes me sooooo...be in AY modee!! The shot is soooooooo AY-ish and i dunno why i can't stop saying that but it is sooo AYish...maybe coz I read a mixture of sarcastic, witty, hilarious and just tempting shot after ages!😆

The end has to be like the best part...actually one of the best part coz the whole fic is best!☺️ Anyways, so i soo loveddddd the ending... "The crime of kissing you..." Man harshuuu do you have any idea how much i am grinning and blushing?!?!?!☺️☺️ I can soo imagine the scene and ashi's reaction...mannnnnn😍😍 it is just alluring!☺️😍 It is soo like ashi's reaction in that uniform hug scene...where she would look soo irresistible to yuvi!☺️☺️ And i mean this is soo irresistible...ek sec. pehle he was aruging with her and the next sec. just niharofying her☺️☺️ Harshu...you create the best Kick you-Kiss you moments!!☺️☺️

And I just loved their whole convo...its really hard to tell you what I loved the most...actually its impossible...Me loved that points thingy 🤣☺️ yuvi is soo cutee when he always goes...hey that's unfair!🤣☺️ Which also reminds of that part...that his only fantasy is red-headed girl...aka ashi!☺️ The way they tell each other what they feel for each other is just soo different and uniquee...and you just bring that out soo well!!☺️😳 That's the reason you meri harshuuuuu😉😆☺️ Me loves you harshuuuuuu🤗🤗 and all your shots😍😍 You just rockkkkkkkk rockkkkkk rockkkkkkkkkkkk!!☺️☺️☺️

J'adore l'historie!☺️ parce que c'est le meilleur!☺️☺️ And now me waiting for your next shot harshuuuuuuuu...pleej write oneeeeeeee...likh u will get its title apne aap 😍😍

Je t'adore harshu!🤗 Tu une pierre! (which is the noun wala rock...but oh well u get what i mean)☺️☺️

Write another one soonnnnnnnnnnn😍😍

Lol thanks nappy. I like your comments best of all because they are accompanied by a lot of smileys and blushes and cute words.
They are not fighting as such but its just a very playful convo between them, I think.

Oh and nappy...."I am a rock"???? No fair...you have to atleast find the verb form for "rocking" in french yaar! itna toh kar hi sakti hai na tu!

Originally posted by: nimmo20

Harshu this is a brilliant shot!!!! I thoroughly enjoyed it!!! 👏👏 You had me in stitches with the dialogue - it was so hilarious in places and so AY/RD-ish - I can just imagine them having a convo like this. 😆 Loved the whole 'Satan's number' bit - that was a master stroke - and the ending is fab - that one line 'the crime of kissing you' is just the perfect way to end it - had a huge grin on my face when i read that. 😆

Really great shot Harshu - so entertaining - I def will be reading it again and again. Thanks for sharing it with us all. It was awesome. 👏

Anu

Hey thanks anu! Actually there was supposed to be the good old prose in the one-shot after the dialogue got over.
But the dialogue never got over as the two little bugs (AY/RD) in my head were just having a back-and-forth banter and it got extended. Lol.

Satan's no is also to tell that the expiry date never gets over because there is no date in existence like that.
And also it is satan's no. which fits ashi very well.

'Crime of kissing' ending is very cheesy, I think, after re-reading it. But all of mine are too cheesy. 😳

thanks for replying

thnkx for sharing the topic with us