FF - MBGS - Pt 9B/ p18 Mar 26 The End

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tam2

@tam2

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#151

ow u ended it ... I was looking forward to more updates... ...

oh well every story has to come to an end... 😃 ...

really lovely update with a fabulous ending...JBG together... 😳 ... glad to see Bani got her memory back... 😆 ... very nicely done... 👏 👏 👏 ...

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#152

beautiful ending to a wonderful story loved it 👏

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#153

hey Divs, just read the whole FF in one go..It was just splendid..

I loved to see the JW being tortured..seeing his wife going out with Moksh, of course when she lost her memory..but that gave me an immense pleasure to see him all worried and helpless 😉 ...oh yeah..I know I am wicked..but he deserved it(ok..let me hide..I am sure lots of belans n joothas are coming my way 😆 )

Actually I really thought that she was faking it..but it was a good turn of event to see that it was all real. I loved the ending..A very beautiful ending which is what we all expect to see in KS...sigh..thats never gonna happen now.. 😕

Thanks for such a wonderful FF kanta...Hoping to read the next one...This time would love to read as and when u update...damn..I am always late 😡
Rama

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melonie

@melonie

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#154

Hai Divan

Beautiful ending 👏

Loved how everything worked out between JB in the end 😳 .....wonder when KS will be something like MBGS 😭 😭

Hope you will start another one soon 😳

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Niroo

@Niroo

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#155

Di what is this.. u ended this FF... but no epi..
not fair.. not fair not fair..
please please please please write an epi..

aww i totally.. loved the..
part.. where jai says.. it was nice to see bani all sexy and bold.. hehe that was funny..
hhe

please do write an epi..😭😕

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kamarunnisa

@kamy

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#156

divan 😊 that was one naughty story. i loved it to the bits. sorry for not commenting and reading earlier. loved. hope more ones are coming frm u 😃 .
love
kamy

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LABANI

@banijai19_life

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#157

wow gr8 end of "mujhe bhool gaye saajaniya" but divan tum hume na bhul jana,continue writing great ffs like this 👏 👏 👏

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Taz234

@Taz234

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#158

Hey Kanta can't believe this ff has ended so quickly.😔 Thought Bani would be in her amnesia state for sometime to give munna a hard time.😆

The holi scene was too funny 😆 .. Moksh wahaan bhi aa poncha! 😡Didn't he know that he was hitting on his bosses wife!😲 WGI mein hi kaam karta tha na?? 😕 Glad Jai intervened when he did…even Ganga didn't like Moksh. 😆

Bani ko holi khelne mein bada mazza aya…didn't want to go back inside…but Jai dragged her in. Then she fell.

Yaadash aagyi!😆 Embarressed with how she behaved😳…kaafi rangeen hogayi thi.😉 But alls well that ends well.
Really a great ff. 👏

Tazoo