seher wants brother

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hello friends,vacation going on,so here i attempted to write something,i don,t know how it is,please give ur comments after reading it,i am doing such a work first time.
chaiji ki behan heerji aur unki bahu amritsar se aayin hui thi,woh poore parivaar ko apne naye ghar ke grihpravesh me bulane ke liye aayin thi,unki bahu apne 6 mahine ke bete ko bhi saath layin thi,seher usse dekh bahut khush thi,woh ab 3 saal ki ho chuki thi,seher ne usse khoob khilaya.shaam ko unke jaane ke baad ,seher us chhote bachhe ki jid karne lagi,sabne usse bahut samjhane ki koshish ki,usse behlane ki koshish ki,par jaise hi woh usse yaad aata phir se jid karne lagti hai,aakhirkar kranti ne gusse me aakar usse daant diya,seher rone lagti hai,madhu aati hai-arre devraniji kyon meri bachhi ko daant rahi ho,chalo beta ,daddy ko aane do,phir ma ko bhi daant padvate hain.
Raat ko raj waapis aata hai,usse sab pata lagta hai,woh apne kamre me jaata hai,seher so chuki hoti hai.
K-tum iski har baat maankar iski aadat kharab kar rahe ho,kisi baat pe aati hai to jid pakad leti hai.
raj kranti ke paas jata hai,usse apne karib laake kehta hai-ek bhai hi to maang rahi hai,mujhe to koi aitraj nahi.
K-raj tum bhi na,chup karo,chalo khaana kha lo.
R-mujhe khana nahi khana,abhi to apni biwi se pyaar karna hai.
K-chodo mujhe ,koi dekh lega
R-dekhne doapni biwi se pyaar hi to kar raha hoon.
un dono ki baaton se seher ki aakhen khul jaati hain,raj ko dekhte hi woh bolti hai-daddy ma daanti,daddy ma daanti
raj kranti ko kiss karta hai,seher ki aakhon me aasun aa jaate hai,woh bistar se utar kar darwaje ki taraf jaati hai,dawarje ki aawaj se dono ka dhayan seher ki taraf jaata hai.
R-arre mera beta uth gaya
par woh chali jaati hai
K-isse kya hua,roj tumhe dekh daudi chali aati thi???
dono bhi neeche jaane lagte hai.
seher rote hue neeche aati hai,sabhi khana kha rahe hote hai,kullu ji usse god me lekar kehte hai,arre mere bete ko kisne daanta.
SEHER-daddy ma nahi daanti,daddy ma ko pyaal kiya.
R aur K chauk jaate hai,un dono ka chehra dekh sabhi jor jor se husne lagte hain.
Madhu-devarji ye to aapne achha nahi kiya.
hope u all don't throw tomatoes on me😆😆,pata nahi kya likha hai,plz apni rai jaroor de,iam having one more CHUPKE CHUPKE ,agar aap log raazi ho😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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iT'S SO CUTE mEF
I enjoyed it. Please do write more. I am sure we would love to read more.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww so so scute continue ji very sweet indeed
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow meftal... it was nice to read... such superb catchy caption.... I didn't thought it was story.... you just surprised me.... Please cotinue dear...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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please continue...its so cute!!! :-)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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meftal 2222222 cute
pl continue ur chupke chupke
its hilarious waiting for next update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mef loved ur work....................................a very sweet scene.........
n plz continue dear...........!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks to all of u for liking it,iwll update next one soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice work meftal👏🤗. It was sweet scene . Please continue yaar.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yaar aisa kyun bol rahi ho..........
kitna mast to likha hai.........
plzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz continue karo..........

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