Adhura Sapna... (poem)

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi friends,

I thought to share a poem with u all which I had written long back on a true story, it is related to dance and the passion it is for some and how dreams remain unfulfilled for few... Its so very important to note that these all contestants atleast have got the stage limelight and now whether they win or not whcih group gets it.. they have become a known name and surely it will give them work , they can start their classes or assit big choregrphers or become a star actor , a choreographer so many options get open for them... atleast their dreams gt a direction... for the ones who didnt have the opportunity here i am sharing a poem...

Adhura Sapna

Jabse Usney chalna sikha tha,
Pairon Ki aahat ko samjh raha tha,
Usne Mehsus kiya Annginadd Awaazon Ka jadu,
Unpe Nachta rehta nahi rakhpata dil par kaabu.

Naachta to yunh lagta usey Baadalon ko sang lena hai,
Chehre ke bhaav vyakt karte nrutya mey magn ho jana hai,
Thoda badaa hua to nrutya pe lagi Paabandi thi,
Maata pita ko uske Naachne se hoti sharmindgi thi.

Kai jantey mantey the usmey nrityakala ka bhandaar hai,
Gharwalon ko lagta Padhai key agey yeh sab bekaar hai,
Chup Chup kar Galli ke ek kone mey naach leta,
Doston ko naye gano pe nritya kar ke dikhaata.

Kitno ko Nritya Pratiyogita ke liye Usne sikhaya,
Swayam kabhi Aise bhavya manch par nahi naach paya,
Badalo ke paar jab wah Is Duniya se chala gaya,
Uska yeh sapna to hamesha keliye adhura reh gaya.

........................Bhoomikauttam

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Devashree

@devashree_h

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Posted: 16 years ago

Really lovely poem Bhoomi 👏

And in the poem you have so beautifully pointed out that parents give less importance to art forms even if the child is talented.

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: devashree_h
Really lovely poem Bhoomi 👏

And in the poem you have so beautifully pointed out that parents give less importance to art forms even if the child is talented.

Hey thanks.. am glad u liked the poem...

Yup its really sad how many parents just see no future in such lines and arts become just a hobby but they dnt allow them to master theri talents and pressurise them towards other streams... am sure now the time is gogin to change.. hope so.. 😃 am glad that the contestnast in DID have got immense parental support. You could see even Terrance had not been encoruaged by his parents to pursue dance initally...

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 16 years ago

beautiful poem just read it. Was thinking of u and read ur poem waiting 4 a new fic from ur side pls write something nice.

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Piya

@piya2025

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Posted: 16 years ago

Its so beautiful *claps* & u discribed d "parents give less importance to art forms" so beautifully.. :)

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677
beautiful poem just read it. Was thinking of u and read ur poem waiting 4 a new fic from ur side pls write something nice.

HI Golu,

oh god u caught me here ...😉 haanji hanji so u read this poem, its a true story based and when I see dance india dance i feel its good that these people children to say get so much opportunity wheras many in the past had to hide the fact that they were passionate about dancing.. especially boys who could do those latkey jhatkeys... couldnt make a career or project theri talent..

comign to writing a newfic.. areey got some PM's and i feel i have to.. lol... i wil be postign soon.. luv u ..thanks for all ur encouraging words dear...

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: piya2025
Its so beautiful *claps* & u discribed d "parents give less importance to art forms" so beautifully.. :)

Awww thank u so much... I feel touched that what I wanted to brign out of my heart through this touched someone else as well.. 😊

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Piya

@piya2025

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

^^ Aww it was truly great..U did an cxcellent job wid all this feelings & its so true yaa :( I think its d high time when parents need to understand their children's POV & need to understand,The world has so much changed & we girl can do whatever a boy can do..:)
keep it up & u r a good writter :)

Love
piya.

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