ff:past+present+futr=life

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi everyone, im a new member to this forum but have bn readin many ff's so im tryin 2 ryt 1 myself plz try 2 ignore my spell mistakes as im tryin 2 ryt fast and plz plz do comment😊
intro:
walia family:
uday walia(68):a filthy rich business magnet but very humble and luvs his family 2 death ,born poor but worked his way up now livin a retd lyf after handin da business 2 his sons
krishna walia(59):lovely person who dotes on her family
jay walia(30):da same ragin bull ,famous,hot,,,,,etc but respects his ma n pa a lot handles' walia constructions'luvs his family 2 bits
rajeev walia(28):earlier used 2 handle 'walia grp of hotels but now turned into an alcoholic aftr da death of his wife durin child birth
sujata walia:rajeev's wife died while givin birth 2 triplet gals
ranveerwalia(26):handsome but not as his eldest bro a bit jealous of jay coz of da female attention and publicity but still luvs him and takes his help in many things
anu walia(19):a very bubbly and cute gal
riya, siya,diya:very lovable n cute ,heart of da family r always pampered but gud natured 5 yr old triplets
dixit family:a typical indian middle class orthodox family
nishikant dixit(60):a govt employee cares more abt frnz n relatives dan his family but cant let any harm cum 2 his family tries 2 liv an extravagent lyf,luvs his son more dan anythin else
kiran dixit(56):a typical housewife,fedup of her hubby hates him outwardly but still luves him wants her only daughter 2b financially indep so dat she doesnt hav 2 b bond 2 a person who dosent luv her in da futr but doesnt realize dat in dat process she had crushed her daughters dream of becomin a dancer ,luvs her son but pretends 2 luv her daughter more(not a very gud soul)
bani dixit(25):basically a very bubbly n very very beautiful gal but her mom made her very tough she tries 2 hide her beauty most of da tym ,tough frm outside but inside she is as soft as butter,she loaths her parents 4 not lettin her live lyf but never shows it but does anythin 4 dem 2 b happy she is actualy livin 4 der happiness
daksh dixit(20):youngest member of da family and da apple of every1s eyes a typical brat but luvs his mom n sis n detests his father
p.s shud i continue😕😕

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Posted: 16 years ago
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sure cont soon
but a request, please dont write in short (u know, like 2 > too, every1 >everyone), otherwise its hard to read in one go
SA
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sounds good
hmm waitin for first part
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear
the intro sounds good
do cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#5
thanks for the replies guys,
would u mind if i post the first part on monday ,
actually im doing my 12th n im writing engineering entrances on 18th i have VIT(vellore inst of tech)entrance and on 19th i have another exam wish me luck guyz
(iv already written IIT JEE )
PLZ WISH ME LUCK
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Posted: 16 years ago
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all the best
take ur time
studies comes first
so rock ur paper
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Posted: 16 years ago
#7

sorry for being late but u know exam trouble

part 1 the sun rays filled the room but she was still on the bed wondering what to do today it was saturday and hence no office for her she had no friends to go out with well she was pactically a loner her phone started buzzing she saw the id and was happy and suspicious also, she picked it and spoke or rather shouted then got up and got ready to go the office her inefficient staff(thats wat she calls them even for a sligth error made by them) had goofed up with some imp. project which pissed her to no extent (next scene )
a lady in killer heel boots, skinny jeans, black formal shirt showing off her curves, hair put up, in thick rimmed glasses,but still very appealing in her cabin with 4 men infront of her
thats BANI DIXIT
25 year old architect.from iit kanpur and mba from iim banglore
self made with hard work and determination
a very hard nut to crack but once cracked she is soft as butter
works in WGC hand picked by uday walia to assist his son jay walia the CEO as he found out that her temper matched his sons
he found her compatibility with anyone appealing she was soft when wanted to be and very tough if the occasion called for it
WGC (walia group of constructions) was handeled by jay walia
same qualifications as bani but her senior and never knew about each other before her joining the company
jay and bani were always at loggerheads , the office staff were always scared when they were together in a room they always prayed that bani was in a good mood,otherwise a volcano would errupt in there
today was one of such days , as some employees goofed up with an important project, bani was blasting them in her cabin and there was no sign of jay till now
all had there ear plugs ready and prayed for the employees to come back alive
in the cabin:
b:(spitting fire)wat the hell do you get payed for, to goof up the projects given to you,well now you are fired
employee:but maam.............
b:(cutting him off)now out all of you
employee:but maam.......
this time he was cut by the buzzing of her mobile, she seesthe id it was from walia mansion she narrows her eyes and picks it up
she listens to the person
her eyes show shock and grief she runs from there goes to her appartment changes to a white salwarrushes to walia mansion this was the first time she was going there (she had met krishna walia many times at the mandir,uday also went sometimes thats how they knew each other , they got along very well, uday and krishna were like parents she had always dreamt of, even they love her as they saw her soft side,yet they still didnt understand her)
well who is dead at walia mansion.....................................................well dats in the next part
preview: jay sees a beautiful lady playing with the kids but doesnt recognise her
he asks krishna who she was
kri:arre jay she is bani she must have forgotten her spects in the hurry to come here
jay was shocked.................................
ps:
jay and bani dont want to get married
jay is scared his life will become like his brothers. but ofcourse had his share of flings
bani is scared of love ,her parents always claimed to have loved her but that love always got her only responsibilities durig teenage she dreamt of her prince charming to sweep her off her feet but with tme she lost hope
but her mom is always nagging her to get married
guys hope you liked it
(guys plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz comment im waitng)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear
thats a gr88 part
wow bani and jai both are soo same
gussa toh dono ke naak pe rehta hai
about the death - no idea who it is
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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